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Khalish

Nov 1 2006, 11:42 PM

Azeezan.e.Hulchul:

Buhot din ho gaey haiN maiN ne kuch share nahi kiya. Aik ghazal ke saath haazir hooN, ummeed hai pasand aaey gi. Aap ki qeemti aaraa ka muntazir rahooNga.

Khush RahaiN

GHAZAL

(1)
Hawa ke doosh per bikhray jo gham haiN
Meri hasrat key yeh naqsh.e.qadam haiN

(2)
Buhot ristay haiN yeh tanhaaeeyouN meiN
Yeh daagh.e.dil kahaaN chalooN se kam haiN!

(3)
main apne aap tak shayed na pohaNchooN
meri hasti meiN itne paich.o.kham haiN

(4)
sadaaeiN ab bhi daita hooN maiN khud ko
karooN meiN baat kis se loog kam haiN

(5)
Abhi fursat nahi marne ki mujh ko
Abhi sehne ko kitne ranj.o.gham haiN

(6)
rakhooN kaaNdhay pe sar main kis ke jaa kar!
sabhi tu mehv.e.aazaar.o.situm haiN

(7)
:Khalish: kab tak jiaiN iss zindagi ko?
Ajab si be.basi hai aur hum haiN

Mukhlis

Khalish

Iss ghazal ka urdu version bhi paish kar raha hooN

*Akhtar*

Nov 2 2006, 01:27 AM

, Mujhay tau kuchh nahi kehna shukriya ada karna hai k aap nay kuchh share tau kiya ,shukriya

Buhot ristay haiN yeh tanhaaeeyouN meiN
Yeh daagh.e.dil kahaaN chalooN se kam haiN!

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Ghazal khushboo

Nov 2 2006, 02:04 AM

walaikumsalam khalish bhai

buhut khushi huee hay apki khoobsorat ghazal perh ker...

buhut shukriya humsay share kernay ka ...

Khalish

Nov 2 2006, 10:36 AM

QUOTE(Sulaggti_Raakh @ Nov 1 2006, 11:27 PM)

, Mujhay tau kuchh nahi kehna shukriya ada karna hai k aap nay kuchh share tau kiya ,shukriya

Buhot ristay haiN yeh tanhaaeeyouN meiN
Yeh daagh.e.dil kahaaN chalooN se kam haiN!

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Buhot buhot shukriya Sulaggti_Raakh buhot innayat hai aap ki.

Khush RahaiN

QUOTE(Ghazal khushboo @ Nov 2 2006, 12:04 AM)

walaikumsalam khalish bhai

buhut khushi huee hay apki khoobsorat ghazal perh ker...

buhut shukriya humsay share kernay ka ...

Buhot buhot shukriya behna buhot nawaazish.

Khush RahaiN

wafaaa

Nov 3 2006, 01:48 AM

WS!

Khalish Bhai aap Mashaal se kitna acha likhtay hain
mein tu mehsoor ho k reh gaye
really
Zabardast ji.....mujhe shairi nahi aati
magr shairir parhna acha lagta hai

App ki post just LAJAWAB!!!!

Khalish

Nov 4 2006, 03:32 PM

QUOTE(wafaaa @ Nov 2 2006, 11:48 PM)

WS!

Khalish Bhai aap Mashaal se kitna acha likhtay hain
mein tu mehsoor ho k reh gaye
really
Zabardast ji.....mujhe shairi nahi aati
magr shairir parhna acha lagta hai

App ki post just LAJAWAB!!!!

Buhot buhot shukriya wafaaa behna

buhot khush rahaiN

NaJ

Nov 4 2006, 04:23 PM

rakhooN kaaNdhay pe sar main kis ke jaa kar!
sabhi tu mehv.e.aazaar.o.situm haiN
:Khalish: kab tak jiaiN iss zindagi ko?
Ajab si be.basi hai aur hum haiN

bhai

bhut khoubsourt sharing ha..

Pr!nCesS-0f-S3lf

Nov 4 2006, 08:00 PM

Mashallah say buhat aala likha hai app nay

keep writing n keep sharing

GOD BLESS YEW!!!

*Kainaat*

Nov 4 2006, 08:12 PM

Wa Leikum salaam,,

Khalish bhai... bohat hi achi Ghazal

aur apni poetry jaldi jaldi share kya karain....

PLZ

and Thanks for sharing !!!

kamrannoor

Nov 4 2006, 08:17 PM

GooD

seemaf

Nov 4 2006, 10:22 PM

Assalam-o-Alaikum

Buhat achhi ghazal hai

QUOTE
Abhi fursat nahi marne ki mujh ko
Abhi sehne ko kitne ranj.o.gham haiN

khud_aashna

Nov 5 2006, 04:12 PM

Wa alaikum assalam khalish bhai.
outstanding---no other word can explain your creation

keep sharing with us
khush rahiye

Mudassir

ashraf013

Nov 6 2006, 12:16 AM

rakhooN kaaNdhay pe sar main kis ke jaa kar!
sabhi tu mehv.e.aazaar.o.situm haiN

(7)
:Khalish: kab tak jiaiN iss zindagi ko?
Ajab si be.basi hai aur hum haiN

very nice janab..........

Khalish

Nov 6 2006, 08:30 AM

QUOTE(NaJ @ Nov 4 2006, 02:23 PM)

rakhooN kaaNdhay pe sar main kis ke jaa kar!
sabhi tu mehv.e.aazaar.o.situm haiN
:Khalish: kab tak jiaiN iss zindagi ko?
Ajab si be.basi hai aur hum haiN

bhai

bhut khoubsourt sharing ha..

Buhot buhot shukriya NaJ Behna buhot innayat hai aap ki.

Khush RahaiN

QUOTE(Pr!nCesS-0f-S3lf @ Nov 4 2006, 06:00 PM)

Mashallah say buhat aala likha hai app nay

keep writing n keep sharing

GOD BLESS YEW!!!

Buhot buhot shukriya 'Pr!nCesS-0f-S3lf' buhot innayat hai aap ki.

Khush RahaiN

QUOTE(*Kainaat* @ Nov 4 2006, 06:12 PM)

Wa Leikum salaam,,

Khalish bhai... bohat hi achi Ghazal

aur apni poetry jaldi jaldi share kya karain....

PLZ

and Thanks for sharing !!!

Buhot innayat hai aap ki behna

Zindagi

Nov 9 2006, 01:36 PM

Assalam O Alaikum bhai

mafi chahti hoon aik arsay se ghayab thi ..... kuch internet ki problems aur phir tabiyat kharab aisi hui ke sambhaltay sambhaltay eid bhi guzar gai....per ab Allah ne chaha to koi garbar nahi hogi & i'll be here

ab kuch aap ki ghazal ke baaray main.....itnay saray logoN ne tareef ki hai meray pass to ab kuch kehnay ko bhi nahi hai ...bohat khoobsurat ghazal as usual ....... title ke saath BY KHALISH dekh kar hi pata chal jata hai ke andar kuch aisa parhnay ko milay ga ke dil khush ho jaye

bohat umdah kalam hai

khush rakhay Allah aap ko

Amber~

Khalish

Nov 11 2006, 08:21 PM

QUOTE(kamrannoor @ Nov 4 2006, 06:17 PM)

GooD

Buhot buhot shukriya

QUOTE(seemaf @ Nov 4 2006, 08:22 PM)

Assalam-o-Alaikum

Buhat achhi ghazal hai

Buhot buhot shukriya Behna buhot innayat hai aap ki

Khush RahaiN

umairhuda

Nov 13 2006, 01:57 AM

Walekum Assalam Khalish Bhai,
Sach kahoo'n to abb meri hazri HC pe bohat hi kam ho gai hai,, aaj aik arsey baad parhney kay liey acha mila..Simply Beautiful and thanks for sharing

Sada khush rahein

Umair

Khalish

Nov 18 2006, 03:27 PM

QUOTE(khud_aashna @ Nov 5 2006, 02:12 PM)

Wa alaikum assalam khalish bhai.
outstanding---no other word can explain your creation

keep sharing with us
khush rahiye

Mudassir

Salaam

Buhot buhot shukriya Bhai buhot nawaazish hai aap ki.

Khush RahaiN [color=#336666]

QUOTE(ashraf013 @ Nov 5 2006, 10:16 PM)

rakhooN kaaNdhay pe sar main kis ke jaa kar!
sabhi tu mehv.e.aazaar.o.situm haiN

(7)
:Khalish: kab tak jiaiN iss zindagi ko?
Ajab si be.basi hai aur hum haiN
very nice janab..........

Buhot buhot shukriya Janab buhot inaayat hai aap ki

Khush RahaiN [color=#336666]

Fajr

Nov 18 2006, 05:14 PM

yon tu sari ghazal hi buhat achi hay per

:Khalish: kab tak jiaiN iss zindagi ko?
Ajab si be.basi hai aur hum haiN

yeh wala shair mujhay buhat pasand aya

tanha_musafir

Nov 19 2006, 01:23 AM

assalam o alikum Khalish bhaee!

Kaisay hain aap? Aap ke ghazal k baaray kuch kehna sooraj ko chiraag dikhaana hai. Hamesha kee tarah dil ko cho gaya her sher. Allah karay berhay zor e kalam aur ziyaada.

Khush rehiya

Aatif

Masumeen

Nov 21 2006, 11:40 PM

Walekum asalaam Khalish bahi

Kaffe arse baad hc pe aati hoon aur yahan aakar jab aise khobsurat kaalm parne ko milte hain to dil khosh hojata hai........puri ghazal hi khubsurat hain lekin ... mujhe yeh do misreh bohat pasand aaye

main apne aap tak shayed na pohaNchooN
meri hasti meiN itne paich.o.kham haiN

aur

Abhi fursat nahi marne ki mujh ko
Abhi sehne ko kitne ranj.o.gham hain

sach hai

Bohat bohat shukriya shaire karne

Khush rahen

Bee Gee

Nov 22 2006, 01:23 AM

rakhooN kaaNdhay pe sar main kis ke jaa kar!

sabhi tu mehv.e.aazaar.o.situm haiN

Shokh

Nov 23 2006, 01:32 PM

Buhot ristay haiN yeh tanhaaeeyouN meiN
Yeh daagh.e.dil kahaaN chalooN se kam haiN!

Wah, yun to sari gazal hi achi kahi aap nay par ye shair bohat mukamal laga