Mohabat may sharat mehsoos hoi... yani gar wo bhool jai to shair osko bhool jai ga?

Yun to nazam bohat rawani may kahi aap nay par zara sa uljha gai hamain... magar kisi ko uljhana bhi asaan nahi so daad kabool kijie

Very nice sharing Tanha ji

Keep sharing wid us

May Allah Bless U

With Regards

Lonely

Assalam-o-ALaikum

Buhat khoosurat

very nice sharing

Dear Aatif Bhai,
Hamesha ki tarha aik bar phir bohat hi khoobsurat tehreer
Sada khush rahein
Umair

Bohat shukriya Friendz for liking my Nazm


Khush rehiya

salam

well very nice post sir jee tusi tay chagay ho

Peacemaker Khush Howa

Assalam o alaikum brother
ab buhat kam aana hota hai net per spcly HC per
kafi dinON k baad aaya to aap ki or Khalish bhai ki do behtareen creations perhne ko mili---vasool ho gaya net per aana

simply superb

PS: bhai aap hote kahaN haiN? Sceince ne mobile isi liye EEJAD kia hai k dostoN WAGHERA se contact maiN raha jae. magar lagta aisa hai k aap to hamaiN WAGHERA main bhi shumaar nahi kerte :S
anyway khush raho or aise hi or aisa hi likhte raho

Mudassir

Aik aik lafaz itnahi umdah or kimatiii

yakin janiey yeah poem mujhey bohat pasend ayiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Thanx for shariing

Mujhay mehsoos hota hai
kay meray dil kay darwaazay pay
teri yaad ki dastak meiN woh shidat nahi baaqi


bahot gehra ehsaas itni khoobsorati say biyaan kiya hai kay alfaaz dil meiN utar gaey...

waah..bahot hi khoob

khush rahiay Atif bhai

buhut khoobsorat nazm hay Aatif bhai

hamesha ki tarah lajawab

bohat khoob

Bohat shukriya Dostoo


Allah aap ko khush rakhay

Very Nice Ur Poetry Thanks For Sharing

Bohat bohat shukriya Shokh

Aap k alfaaz ne bht berha diya maira hosla aap ne

Khush rehiya

Aur haaN kaisi uljhan paida ker dee mairi nazm ne kuch mujhay bhee tu pata challay

Bataiya ga mujhay I m waiting

Thanx a million Lonely but Happy

Khush rehiya

Waalikum as Salam

Bht shukriya

Khush rehiyaa

Thanx a lot

be blessed

Dear Umair

Bohat bohat shukriya iss muhabbat ka

DuaooN main yaad rakhna

bOhat khubsurat nazaM hai... bOhat pasand ayi

Bht shukriya RKR

Khush rehiya

Tumhari yad ki dastak mein wo shiddat nahi baqi
bohat si khas baten hein
jo mujhko aam lagti hein
mere dil mein unhine sun kar koi toofan nahi uthta

Wah Atif bhia kamal kiya hai aur mere pas waqyi alfaz nahi hote apki shayeri ki shan mein kehn eke liye waqyi bohat zabardast hai ye nazm bhi hamesha ki tarha.
thnx for sharing such type of beautiful poetry with us.
thnx again
FIAMANILLAH
DUA

, Mujhay DuaaoN Mein Yaad Rakhna
Jahaan takk mujhay Yaad parta hai Ye Mera Aakhri Jumla tha Tumhari kisi Post kay Jawaab mein , ouss kay Baad kafi saari nazmaiN yahaan share hooien lekin mein reply nahi dey saka ,jiss kay liye Mazratt aur Aaendah bhi shaaed kabhi kabhaar aana ho , wajeh vo'hee hai " Zara See BaySakoon Hai "

DuaaeN Maangtay Lamhay
Mujhay Tum Bhool jaati ho
Magar phir bhi mujhay tum se
Koi shikwa Nahi lekin !!!
Ajab see Baysakooni Hai
Ajab Ekk khof Hai Dil Mein
Mein Tum Ko Bhool jaaoun ga
Kiaa Kehnay ,Bohot Hee achay ,khush raho Aur jaatay jaatay Vohee Kay


Mujhay DuaaoN Mein Yaad Rakhna

Jeeti raho bohat khush raho behna G!
Tumharay iss tarah k khobsoorat alfaaz se maira bht maan aur dil berh jaata hai.
Aainda bhee tumhari muhabbat ka muntazir rahooN ga
Be blessed
Fe aman Allah