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kamrannoor
ASSALAM_o_ ALIKUM

DOSTO is post main GHAZAL ko complete karna hai.....lekin yaad rahy ke sirf 2 ashaar
is post se new likhny waloon ko HELP hee milay ki or maza bhee atta rahy ga...aik baat kar khassa khayaal rakhna hai ke RADEEF & QAIFIA change nahee hona chiye plzzz


dair kiss baat ki chalo bhaee shuru ho jao smile.gif

shair hai

Haal_e_dIL kia kahain tum se chupa kuch bhee nahee

DiL ke tukray ho gaye ittnay bacha kuch bhee nahee
soz
HAMNE KHUD KO KHO DIYA TUMKO PAANE KE LIYE
KHUD KO KHOYA SO ALAG ,TUMKO PAAYA BHI NAHI

KOSHSIH TO KI HAI ZARA SI PATA NAHI APKO PASAND AYEGA YA NAHI.
FIAMANILLAH
DUA
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Khalish
QUOTE(kamrannoor @ Jan 17 2007, 10:30 PM) [snapback]2223316[/snapback]
ASSALAM_o_ ALIKUM

DOSTO is post main GHAZAL ko complete karna hai.....lekin yaad rahy ke sirf 2 ashaar
is post se new likhny waloon ko HELP hee milay ki or maza bhee atta rahy ga...aik baat kar khassa khayaal rakhna hai ke RADEEF & QAIFIA change nahee hona chiye plzzz
dair kiss baat ki chalo bhaee shuru ho jao smile.gif

shair hai

Haal_e_dIL kia kahain tum se chupa kuch bhee nahee

DiL ke tukray ho gaye ittnay bacha kuch bhee nahee


Mujhe aap ke diye gaey she'r ke pehle misre meiN aik rukn ki kami mehsoos ho rahi hai:

haal.e.dil ab kya kahaiN tum se chupa kuch bhee naheiN
dil ke tukRay ho gaye itne baccha kuch bhee naheiN

Please check and confirm given she'r

Khush RahaiN rose.gif
kamrannoor
QUOTE(soz @ Jan 19 2007, 03:47 PM) [snapback]2224069[/snapback]
HAMNE KHUD KO KHO DIYA TUMKO PAANE KE LIYE
KHUD KO KHOYA SO ALAG ,TUMKO PAAYA BHI NAHI

KOSHSIH TO KI HAI ZARA SI PATA NAHI APKO PASAND AYEGA YA NAHI.
FIAMANILLAH
DUA
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[color="#FF0000"]nice lage rahoo acha hai
kamrannoor
QUOTE(Khalish @ Jan 19 2007, 04:07 PM) [snapback]2224078[/snapback]
Mujhe aap ke diye gaey she'r ke pehle misre meiN aik rukn ki kami mehsoos ho rahi hai:

haal.e.dil ab kya kahaiN tum se chupa kuch bhee naheiN
dil ke tukRay ho gaye itne baccha kuch bhee naheiN

Please check and confirm given she'r

Khush RahaiN rose.gif


hmmm ary its ok khalish

assa kar lety hain no problum
khushi jab hoti ke tum bhee koi shair likhdeti
well........thanks
hamzaad
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