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seemaf
Feb 3 2007, 07:06 PM
Ik taaza hikayat hai
Sun lo to inaayat hai

Ik shakhs ko dekha tha
Taaron ki tarah ham ne
Ik shakhs ko chaha tha
Apnon ki tarah ham ne
Ik shakhs ko samjha tha
Phoolon ki tarah ham ne

Woh shakhs qayamat tha
Kiya us ki karain baatain
Din us ke liye paida
Aur us ki hi thi raatain
Kam milna kisi se tha
Ham se theen mulaqaatain

Rang us ka shahabi tha
Zulfon main theen mehkaarain
Aankhain theen ke jadoo tha
Palkain theen ke talwaarain
Dushman bhi agar dekhain
Sou jaan se dil haarain

Kuch tum se woh milta tha
Baaton main shabahat main
Haan tum sa hi lagta tha
Shokhi main shararat main
Lagta bhi tumhi sa tha
Dastoor-e-mohabbat main

Woh shakhs hamain ik din
Apnon ki tarah bhoola
Taaron ki tarah dooba
Phoolon ki tarah toota
Phir haath na aaya woh
Ham ne to buhat dhoonda

Tum kis liye chonkey ho
Kab zikr tumahra tha
Kab tum se taqaza hai
Kab tum se shikayat hai

Ik taaza hikaya hai
Sun lo to inayat hai
chupa rustam-2
Feb 3 2007, 10:17 PM
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Silent_Ocean
Feb 3 2007, 11:53 PM
Zabardast!
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Thanks For Sharing smile.gif
hamzaad
Feb 4 2007, 12:52 AM
Mah tal.aton mein husn sab say juda hay uska
Yun lagta hay wo shakhs zamee'n zaad nahi hay
Khalish
Feb 4 2007, 01:01 AM
Buhot khoobsurat nazm kahi hai aap ne .. wah

MaiN ne poori nazm ko ussi manzar meiN parhne ki koshish ki hai jiss manzar ke liye kahi gaee hai. Khoobsurat tasalsul aur tadween.

Din us ke liye paida
Aur us ki hi thi raatain

dosri line ko iss tarah kar daikhiye, Aur uss ke liye raataiN

Tum kis liye chooNke ho .. meiN typo hai, maiN theek kiye dyta hooN smile.gif

Well done ... keep it up.

Khush RahaiN rose.gif rose.gif
Ghazal khushboo
Feb 4 2007, 01:41 AM
buhut hi khoobsorat nazm hay 0-headbang.gif 0-headbang.gif
Khalish
Feb 4 2007, 10:09 AM
QUOTE(Khalish @ Feb 3 2007, 11:01 PM) [snapback]2229858[/snapback]
Buhot khoobsurat nazm kahi hai aap ne .. wah

MaiN ne poori nazm ko ussi manzar meiN parhne ki koshish ki hai jiss manzar ke liye kahi gaee hai. Khoobsurat tasalsul aur tadween.

Din us ke liye paida
Aur us ki hi thi raatain

dosri line ko iss tarah kar daikhiye, Aur uss ke liye raataiN

Tum kis liye chooNke ho .. meiN typo hai, maiN theek kiye dyta hooN smile.gif

Well done ... keep it up.

Khush RahaiN rose.gif rose.gif


MaiN samjha that keh yeh takhleeq aap ki hi hai. Lekin aap tu keh rahi haiN keh poet unknown? Khair mere comments bhi poet unknown ke liye ho gaey haiN.
Abu Adnan
Feb 4 2007, 11:50 AM
QUOTE(seemaf @ Feb 3 2007, 07:06 PM) [snapback]2229720[/snapback]
Ik taaza hikayat hai
Sun lo to inaayat hai

Ik shakhs ko dekha tha
Taaron ki tarah ham ne
Ik shakhs ko chaha tha
Apnon ki tarah ham ne
Ik shakhs ko samjha tha
Phoolon ki tarah ham ne

Woh shakhs qayamat tha
Kiya us ki karain baatain
Din us ke liye paida
Aur us ki hi thi raatain
Kam milna kisi se tha
Ham se theen mulaqaatain

Rang us ka shahabi tha
Zulfon main theen mehkaarain
Aankhain theen ke jadoo tha
Palkain theen ke talwaarain
Dushman bhi agar dekhain
Sou jaan se dil haarain

Kuch tum se woh milta tha
Baaton main shabahat main
Haan tum sa hi lagta tha
Shokhi main shararat main
Lagta bhi tumhi sa tha
Dastoor-e-mohabbat main

Woh shakhs hamain ik din
Apnon ki tarah bhoola
Taaron ki tarah dooba
Phoolon ki tarah toota
Phir haath na aaya woh
Ham ne to buhat dhoonda

Tum kis liye chonkey ho
Kab zikr tumahra tha
Kab tum se taqaza hai
Kab tum se shikayat hai

Ik taaza hikaya hai
Sun lo to inayat hai


kahani jo sonayee hai
hakayat kab parayee hai
hakayat gar parayee hai
maiN bhi to parayaa houN
maaya houN yaa saya houN
ab to maiN paraya houN

jugnoo thaa yaa taraa tha
tum nay kab pokara tha
man aangan sajanaa thaa
mujh ko to bataa naa thaa
phoolouN ko to khilna hai
mangtouN ko hi milna hai

gul o rukhsaar ki bataiN
hijr o wisaal ki ghataiN
tab jeetaiN yaa ab maatain
sonati kiyouN ho salwaataiN
pasand tum ko jo meena thaa
to baRh k thaam lena thaa

bho'laa thaa nah bhoola houN
kabhi tum ko qaboola houN ?
dar dar jo maiN rolaa houN
kissi lamhay bhi dolaaa houN?
sapnouN maiN jo kho jaye
melay maiN woh kab paa.ay

yeh dunya aik melaa hai
kho jayain, woh relaa hai
enayat kia shikayat kia
rewayat kia, hakayat kia
mohabba aik fasanaa hai
maangay jo, diwanaa hai

diwanaa hai, diwaani hai
kahaani yeh porani hai
suntay ho to sunlo tum
mujh ko phir sonani hai
kahani yeh porani hai
raja hai aik raani hai



doctor_whiteblood
Feb 4 2007, 09:34 PM
Behad Khubsuraat Nazaam Chaspan Ki hai Aap ne

Kaya Tasalsul hai aur kya khubsuraat silsala hai

behad Kush Hui Parh Ker ..

Kush Rahen Duaon main Yaad Rakhie Ga

Raza
soz
Feb 5 2007, 12:32 PM
Woh shakhs hamain ik din
Apnon ki tarah bhoola
Taaron ki tarah dooba
Phoolon ki tarah toota
Phir haath na aaya woh
Ham ne to buhat dhoonda

Tum kis liye chonkey ho
Kab zikr tumahra tha
Kab tum se taqaza hai
Kab tum se shikayat hai

Ik taaza hikaya hai
Sun lo to inayat hai

BOHAT HI UMDA BOLE TO EKDAM ZABARADST !!!!

REALLY I DONT HAVE WORDS TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS FOR THIS VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM.
THNX FOR SHARING
FIAMANILLAH
DUA
seemaf
Feb 5 2007, 07:54 PM
QUOTE(_____ @ Feb 3 2007, 10:17 PM) [snapback]2229786[/snapback]
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seemaf
Feb 5 2007, 07:56 PM
QUOTE(smartleo @ Feb 3 2007, 11:53 PM) [snapback]2229835[/snapback]
Zabardast!
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Thanks For Sharing smile.gif


Thanks Ghazal jee rose.gif
seemaf
Feb 6 2007, 04:42 PM
QUOTE(hamzaad @ Feb 4 2007, 12:52 AM) [snapback]2229854[/snapback]
Mah tal.aton mein husn sab say juda hay uska
Yun lagta hay wo shakhs zamee'n zaad nahi hay


Wah buhat khoob smile.gif
KnOwN_StRaNgEr
Feb 6 2007, 04:44 PM
Ik shakhs ko dekha tha
Taaron ki tarah ham ne
Ik shakhs ko chaha tha
Apnon ki tarah ham ne
Ik shakhs ko samjha tha
Phoolon ki tarah ham ne


ahhh....

So nice sharing

Thanks for sharing api

khush rehain

Regards duas.gif
Usman
seemaf
Feb 6 2007, 04:47 PM
QUOTE(Khalish @ Feb 4 2007, 01:01 AM) [snapback]2229858[/snapback]
Buhot khoobsurat nazm kahi hai aap ne .. wah

MaiN ne poori nazm ko ussi manzar meiN parhne ki koshish ki hai jiss manzar ke liye kahi gaee hai. Khoobsurat tasalsul aur tadween.

Din us ke liye paida
Aur us ki hi thi raatain

dosri line ko iss tarah kar daikhiye, Aur uss ke liye raataiN

Tum kis liye chooNke ho .. meiN typo hai, maiN theek kiye dyta hooN smile.gif

Well done ... keep it up.

Khush RahaiN rose.gif rose.gif


QUOTE
MaiN samjha that keh yeh takhleeq aap ki hi hai. Lekin aap tu keh rahi haiN keh poet unknown? Khair mere comments bhi poet unknown ke liye ho gaey haiN.


Thanks for liking smile.gif

Its ok smile.gif per ab poet tak kon pohanchaye ga yeh suggetions 1-think.gif
seemaf
Feb 6 2007, 04:50 PM
QUOTE(Abu Adnan @ Feb 4 2007, 11:50 AM) [snapback]2229986[/snapback]
kahani jo sonayee hai
hakayat kab parayee hai
hakayat gar parayee hai
maiN bhi to parayaa houN
maaya houN yaa saya houN
ab to maiN paraya houN

jugnoo thaa yaa taraa tha
tum nay kab pokara tha
man aangan sajanaa thaa
mujh ko to bataa naa thaa
phoolouN ko to khilna hai
mangtouN ko hi milna hai

gul o rukhsaar ki bataiN
hijr o wisaal ki ghataiN
tab jeetaiN yaa ab maatain
sonati kiyouN ho salwaataiN
pasand tum ko jo meena thaa
to baRh k thaam lena thaa

bho'laa thaa nah bhoola houN
kabhi tum ko qaboola houN ?
dar dar jo maiN rolaa houN
kissi lamhay bhi dolaaa houN?
sapnouN maiN jo kho jaye
melay maiN woh kab paa.ay

yeh dunya aik melaa hai
kho jayain, woh relaa hai
enayat kia shikayat kia
rewayat kia, hakayat kia
mohabba aik fasanaa hai
maangay jo, diwanaa hai

diwanaa hai, diwaani hai
kahaani yeh porani hai
suntay ho to sunlo tum
mujh ko phir sonani hai
kahani yeh porani hai
raja hai aik raani hai



Hmmm to yeh KAHANI hai 1-think.gif

Thanku.gif
seemaf
Feb 6 2007, 05:00 PM
QUOTE(doctor_whiteblood @ Feb 4 2007, 09:34 PM) [snapback]2230239[/snapback]
Behad Khubsuraat Nazaam Chaspan Ki hai Aap ne

Kaya Tasalsul hai aur kya khubsuraat silsala hai

behad Kush Hui Parh Ker ..

Kush Rahen Duaon main Yaad Rakhie Ga

Raza


Buhat shukriya pasandeedgi ka smile.gif
seemaf
Feb 6 2007, 05:04 PM
QUOTE(soz @ Feb 5 2007, 12:32 PM) [snapback]2230442[/snapback]
Woh shakhs hamain ik din
Apnon ki tarah bhoola
Taaron ki tarah dooba
Phoolon ki tarah toota
Phir haath na aaya woh
Ham ne to buhat dhoonda

Tum kis liye chonkey ho
Kab zikr tumahra tha
Kab tum se taqaza hai
Kab tum se shikayat hai

Ik taaza hikaya hai
Sun lo to inayat hai

BOHAT HI UMDA BOLE TO EKDAM ZABARADST !!!!

REALLY I DONT HAVE WORDS TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS FOR THIS VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM.
THNX FOR SHARING
FIAMANILLAH
DUA


So nice of u smile.gif

Thanks for liking it rose.gif
seemaf
Feb 6 2007, 05:12 PM
QUOTE(lonely_but_happy @ Feb 6 2007, 04:44 PM) [snapback]2231450[/snapback]
Ik shakhs ko dekha tha
Taaron ki tarah ham ne
Ik shakhs ko chaha tha
Apnon ki tarah ham ne
Ik shakhs ko samjha tha
Phoolon ki tarah ham ne
ahhh....

So nice sharing

Thanks for sharing api

khush rehain

Regards duas.gif
Usman


Ahhh look.gif

Thankooo for liking my selection rose.gif
KnOwN_StRaNgEr
Feb 6 2007, 05:16 PM
QUOTE(seemaf @ Feb 6 2007, 05:12 PM) [snapback]2231475[/snapback]

Ahhh look.gif

Thankooo for liking my selection rose.gif


look.gif

@topic U welcome.gif

seemaf
Feb 6 2007, 05:20 PM
QUOTE(lonely_but_happy @ Feb 6 2007, 05:16 PM) [snapback]2231478[/snapback]
look.gif

@topic U welcome.gif


khud_aashna
Feb 11 2007, 10:12 PM
buhat khoobsurat

keep it up
seemaf
Feb 13 2007, 02:46 PM
QUOTE(khud_aashna @ Feb 11 2007, 10:12 PM) [snapback]2234142[/snapback]
buhat khoobsurat

keep it up


Thanks for liking smile.gif
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