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seemaf

Mar 26 2007, 05:15 PM

آغوشِ صدف جس کے نصیبوں میں نھیں ھے
وہ قطراءنیساں کبھی بنتا نھیں گوھر

Aaghosh-e-sadaf jis ke naseebon main nahi hai
Woh Qatra-e-neesan kabhi banta nahi gohar

KnOwN_StRaNgEr

Mar 26 2007, 05:29 PM

Wah kiya kehnay

aaminah

Mar 27 2007, 04:47 AM

SHARED GOOD 1

soz

Mar 27 2007, 12:02 PM

BOHAT UMDA WAQYI BOHAT KHOOBSURAT SHAIR HAI
THNX FOR SHARING
FIAMANILLAH
DUA

seemaf

Mar 27 2007, 02:15 PM

QUOTE(KnOwN_StRaNgEr @ Mar 26 2007, 05:29 PM) [snapback]2263704[/snapback]

Wah kiya kehnay

Adab arz hai

Eyes2good

Mar 27 2007, 05:37 PM

bohat he acha shair hain

thanks for sharing

~Ejaz~

Mar 28 2007, 02:48 AM

buhat ala

ho sake tu es ko translate bhi kar den sub ke liye

raoirfan

Mar 28 2007, 07:21 AM

QUOTE(seemaf @ Mar 26 2007, 12:15 PM) [snapback]2263695[/snapback]

آغوشِ صدف جس کے نصیبوں میں نھیں ھے
وہ قطراءنیساں کبھی بنتا نھیں گوھر

Aaghosh-e-sadaf jis ke naseebon main nahi hai
Woh Qatra-e-neesan kabhi banta nahi gohar

please is ka matlab samjha dain nahe tu saari raat neend nahe ai gi sadaf ka jo zikar aa giya hai :p

Sham_99

Mar 28 2007, 08:12 AM

really a thought provoking sharing

tks dear

sham

SmiLe_PoiNt

Mar 28 2007, 02:12 PM

vry nice Shair, thnk u

Have a nice Days.
UMER

kamrannoor

Mar 28 2007, 05:14 PM

Ghazal khushboo

Mar 28 2007, 07:08 PM

buhut umda

rubbia

Mar 28 2007, 07:40 PM

very nice

thanx for sharing

Mrs.KnOwN_StRaNgEr

Mar 28 2007, 09:19 PM

Bahot Khoob Seema Jee

*DhanaK*

Mar 28 2007, 11:46 PM

hmmm yeh hai na zabardast sher

Khalish

Mar 29 2007, 12:28 AM

QUOTE(raoirfan @ Mar 28 2007, 05:21 AM) [snapback]2265192[/snapback]

please is ka matlab samjha dain nahe tu saari raat neend nahe ai gi sadaf ka jo zikar aa giya hai :p

Aap ne tu majboor kar diya, aap ki neeNd hamaiN buhot piyaari hai. Iss she'r keh lafzi ma'na yeh haiN keh barish ka voh qatra (bond) jo samanar meiN girta hai agar voh seep (sadaf) ,jo uss waqt samandar ke ooper aajaati hai, keh moh meiN giray tu sadaf usse moti ka roop dey deyti hai .. aur agar aisa na ho tu samandar meiN gir kar voh bhi samandar ka hissa ban jaati hai. Aap issko iss tarah bhi samajh sakte haiN keh maaN ki aaghoosh jiss bacche ko nahi milti ussmeiN koi na koi khaami reh jaati hai ... aik mukamal insaan banne meiN. Isse iss tarah bhi samajh sakte haiN keh jab tak lagan sacchi na ho, insaan apne maqsad meiN kaamyaab nahi hota.

raoirfan

Mar 29 2007, 04:30 AM

QUOTE(Khalish @ Mar 28 2007, 07:28 PM) [snapback]2266236[/snapback]

Aap ne tu majboor kar diya, aap ki neeNd hamaiN buhot piyaari hai. Iss she'r keh lafzi ma'na yeh haiN keh barish ka voh qatra (bond) jo samanar meiN girta hai agar voh seep (sadaf) ,jo uss waqt samandar ke ooper aajaati hai, keh moh meiN giray tu sadaf usse moti ka roop dey deyti hai .. aur agar aisa na ho tu samandar meiN gir kar voh bhi samandar ka hissa ban jaati hai. Aap issko iss tarah bhi samajh sakte haiN keh maaN ki aaghoosh jiss bacche ko nahi milti ussmeiN koi na koi khaami reh jaati hai ... aik mukamal insaan banne meiN. Isse iss tarah bhi samajh sakte haiN keh jab tak lagan sacchi na ho, insaan apne maqsad meiN kaamyaab nahi hota.

thank u sp much sakon aa giya ab soch raha hoon ke seap bani ke moti ke samandr ban jaon

kuch tu ban jaon

umairhuda

Mar 29 2007, 10:18 PM

Simply Beautiful Sharing Seema Jee

Umair

~Ejaz~

Mar 30 2007, 01:14 AM

QUOTE(Khalish @ Mar 29 2007, 12:28 AM) [snapback]2266236[/snapback]

Aap ne tu majboor kar diya, aap ki neeNd hamaiN buhot piyaari hai. Iss she'r keh lafzi ma'na yeh haiN keh barish ka voh qatra (bond) jo samanar meiN girta hai agar voh seep (sadaf) ,jo uss waqt samandar ke ooper aajaati hai, keh moh meiN giray tu sadaf usse moti ka roop dey deyti hai .. aur agar aisa na ho tu samandar meiN gir kar voh bhi samandar ka hissa ban jaati hai. Aap issko iss tarah bhi samajh sakte haiN keh maaN ki aaghoosh jiss bacche ko nahi milti ussmeiN koi na koi khaami reh jaati hai ... aik mukamal insaan banne meiN. Isse iss tarah bhi samajh sakte haiN keh jab tak lagan sacchi na ho, insaan apne maqsad meiN kaamyaab nahi hota.

Khalish bhai
buhat hi umda tashreeh ki hai aap ne

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 12:20 PM

QUOTE(aaminah @ Mar 27 2007, 04:47 AM) [snapback]2264104[/snapback]

SHARED GOOD 1

Thanks Aaminah

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 12:34 PM

QUOTE(soz @ Mar 27 2007, 12:02 PM) [snapback]2264289[/snapback]

BOHAT UMDA WAQYI BOHAT KHOOBSURAT SHAIR HAI
THNX FOR SHARING
FIAMANILLAH
DUA

Thanks for liking my sharing

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 12:40 PM

QUOTE(eyes2good @ Mar 27 2007, 05:37 PM) [snapback]2264678[/snapback]

bohat he acha shair hain

thanks for sharing

Thanks for liking

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 12:47 PM

QUOTE(Ejaz Hussain (SE) @ Mar 28 2007, 02:48 AM) [snapback]2265120[/snapback]

buhat ala

ho sake tu es ko translate bhi kar den sub ke liye

Thanks a Lot

Urdu ki bhi translation??

Ap ne poori koshish ki thi mujhey mushkil main daalney ki .... Per thanks to Khalish bhai jinhon ne meri mushkil asan kardi

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 12:54 PM

QUOTE(raoirfan @ Mar 28 2007, 07:21 AM) [snapback]2265192[/snapback]

please is ka matlab samjha dain nahe tu saari raat neend nahe ai gi sadaf ka jo zikar aa giya hai :p

I think ab ap ko afaqa hua hoga

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 12:58 PM

QUOTE(Sham_99 @ Mar 28 2007, 08:12 AM) [snapback]2265224[/snapback]

really a thought provoking sharing

tks dear
sham

Its so nice to see u back

Thanks Dear

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 01:03 PM

QUOTE(Where U Can Find Me @ Mar 28 2007, 02:12 PM) [snapback]2265533[/snapback]

vry nice Shair, thnk u

Have a nice Days.
UMER

For liking

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 01:18 PM

QUOTE(shafaq @ Mar 28 2007, 11:46 PM) [snapback]2266214[/snapback]

hmmm yeh hai na zabardast sher

Buhat shukriya Shafaq jee

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 01:28 PM

QUOTE(Khalish @ Mar 29 2007, 12:28 AM) [snapback]2266236[/snapback]

Iss she'r keh lafzi ma'na yeh haiN keh barish ka voh qatra (bond) jo samanar meiN girta hai agar voh seep (sadaf) ,jo uss waqt samandar ke ooper aajaati hai, keh moh meiN giray tu sadaf usse moti ka roop dey deyti hai .. aur agar aisa na ho tu samandar meiN gir kar voh bhi samandar ka hissa ban jaati hai. Aap issko iss tarah bhi samajh sakte haiN keh maaN ki aaghoosh jiss bacche ko nahi milti ussmeiN koi na koi khaami reh jaati hai ... aik mukamal insaan banne meiN. Isse iss tarah bhi samajh sakte haiN keh jab tak lagan sacchi na ho, insaan apne maqsad meiN kaamyaab nahi hota.

Buhat khoobsurat andaz se explain kiya hai ap ne is shair ko

seemaf

Mar 30 2007, 01:35 PM

QUOTE(umairhuda @ Mar 29 2007, 10:18 PM) [snapback]2267410[/snapback]

Simply Beautiful Sharing Seema Jee

Umair

Thanks for liking

raoirfan

Mar 31 2007, 07:40 PM

QUOTE(seemaf @ Mar 30 2007, 07:54 AM) [snapback]2268013[/snapback]

I think ab ap ko afaqa hua hoga

afaqa kahan faaqa start ho giya hai. shair sun sun ke tu main poet banne wala hoon aur aap logon ko tu pata hai poets ke saath ham loog karte kiya hain is liya main practice kar raha hoon faqoon ki ;)