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~Wasi~
Kal Rastey Mein Aik Shakhs dikha......
Khush poosh...Khush atvaar...cehrey per sharafat aur aasudgi mojizan thi....
aik ajeeb si khasish thi uski zaat mein jo mujhey uski janib khaachey gayee....
ham likhariyoon ka yehi masla he k jahan koi ajab sorat dikhi uskey pass manzar khoojney beeth jatey hein.....k shayad kuch ayesa mil jaye jissey apna pait palne ka saman ban jaye.....

Khair aaye ussey miltey hein ....... Shayad hazaron log nazar se guzrey hoongey meri jo khush libaas bhi hoon aur masoom cehra fikar se na aashna... magar uskey cehrey per jo aik udasi ka pal aatehra tha wo hagiz uski shakhsiyat se mail nahi khata tha.....khair qissa mukhtasir.....uski kahani uski zubani sunye ye chorein k usney kitney waqt k baad apni dastaan sunaye aur kyon .... (kahin kahin kahani ka rabt na tootey aur alfaz ki changing karney per majboor hua k ussey tasalsul barqaraar nahi reh pa raha tha )

Mein un logo mein se hoon jin k liye aik mahawra kaha jata hey "Moun Mein Soney Ka Chamcha Ley Kar Paida Hua" Dunya mein aaya. Pehley din se hi maa ki mamta baap ki shafqat ka bharpoor roop paya, jab peron per chalney k qabil hua tu jab bhi haath uthaney ki khuahish ki k maan ki mamta bhari aaghoosh mein ja samaon, Haath uthney se pehley hi Maa la shaor se bandha door k bais foran Aaghoosh mein samo leeti thi....Jahan baap ki chaya ko ssochney ki shuroaat hi ki baap apni mohabbat k saath aan mojod hua..... gharz ye k jis rishtey ko caha k mohabbat talab karon wo sochney se pehley mili...... tadreesi door shuro hua...dosti ki khuahish hui .... bin kahey Jaan se azeez dost mil gaye ..apna khuloos lutaney waley apni khusi ka ziyadah hissa mujhey soopney waley ..... Usttadon ka manzoor-e-nazar...... cacha, chachi ...mama, mami.... sab ki bharpoor mohabbat apna haq samajh kar hasil ki...aur ab tak karraha hoon.....bachpan mein khilono ki khuahish se pehley Samney paye......jesa jeena caha jiya.....konsi khushi thi jo na mili....nojawani k napukhta zehan mein Mohabbat dar aayiii......Cahney ki khuahish hi ki k Samney se Mohabbat ka izhaar hu gaya...Mohabbat hui Shadi Hu Gayiiiii......Bachon ki khuahish se pehley Khosbsorti ki misaal Beta Mila ......Isi tarhan Beti ki Khuahish se pehley Beti Mil gayiiii......Karoobar(Business) mein kamyaabi soochney se pehley Kamyaabi ki Un Uonchai ko choliya Jinper Naslein Lag jati hein Pohachney mein...........
Gharz jo caha paya......Jab caha jo caha kiya.......Balkey yoon kaho k cahney se pehley paya..............Aajj kamyaabi ki choti per Akeela khara soochta hoonnn.....

"~*Mujh se barh kar bad naseeb bhi koi hu ga Dunya mein*~"


Huhhhh... Kabhi khabar hi nahi "Dukh" Kis churya ka naam hey,Gham kisey kehtey hein, Hijr kisey kehtey hein Kitabi Alfaaz hi lagey......Khushi k siwa kuch na mila............Hasrat hui aaj aik Cehrey ko deekh kar k Na libaas ka hoosh....na Nangey paon Aag ugalti zameen per chalney ka hoosh....Bass mastana War chala ja raha hey..............Log kehtey hein "Wo majzoob He Gham ki seerhi se Ishq--e-Haqeeqi tak ja pohcha hey.........Kisi baat ki parwahhh nahi usey....Baba jazb mein aakar kabhi kabhi kisi se baat karta hey Jo kehta he sach hujata hey.....kisi k martey huey bachey ko seeney se chimtaya ......2 mintz mein Bhala changa hu gaya............ Baba Karni Waley ne ajj Rok kar mujh se poocha koi dukh hey tujhey ?
Mein Ne Kaha " Nahiiiiii, Ye kya huta he mujhey nahi khabar!!!!"



Jawab Aaya " Bara Badnaseeb he Tujhey dukh ki nahi khabar.................."




Wassalam...
Aik Badnaseeb!!!
Forever Green
Excellent !!!!!! ............. n i hv heared dat ke aap is dunya mein jitne dukh uthao ge us dunya mein utne hi sukh milen ge ............Thanks for sharing jee ... rose.gif
TANHA JAAN
WASI BOHUT ACHEE BAATIEN SHARE KI AAP NAY


TC
*DhanaK*
QUOTE(~Wasi~ @ Aug 12 2007, 04:17 AM) *
Kal Rastey Mein Aik Shakhs dikha......
Khush poosh...Khush atvaar...cehrey per sharafat aur aasudgi mojizan thi....
aik ajeeb si khasish thi uski zaat mein jo mujhey uski janib khaachey gayee....
ham likhariyoon ka yehi masla he k jahan koi ajab sorat dikhi uskey pass manzar khoojney beeth jatey hein.....k shayad kuch ayesa mil jaye jissey apna pait palne ka saman ban jaye.....

Khair aaye ussey miltey hein ....... Shayad hazaron log nazar se guzrey hoongey meri jo khush libaas bhi hoon aur masoom cehra fikar se na aashna... magar uskey cehrey per jo aik udasi ka pal aatehra tha wo hagiz uski shakhsiyat se mail nahi khata tha.....khair qissa mukhtasir.....uski kahani uski zubani sunye ye chorein k usney kitney waqt k baad apni dastaan sunaye aur kyon .... (kahin kahin kahani ka rabt na tootey aur alfaz ki changing karney per majboor hua k ussey tasalsul barqaraar nahi reh pa raha tha )

Mein un logo mein se hoon jin k liye aik mahawra kaha jata hey "Moun Mein Soney Ka Chamcha Ley Kar Paida Hua" Dunya mein aaya. Pehley din se hi maa ki mamta baap ki shafqat ka bharpoor roop paya, jab peron per chalney k qabil hua tu jab bhi haath uthaney ki khuahish ki k maan ki mamta bhari aaghoosh mein ja samaon, Haath uthney se pehley hi Maa la shaor se bandha door k bais foran Aaghoosh mein samo leeti thi....Jahan baap ki chaya ko ssochney ki shuroaat hi ki baap apni mohabbat k saath aan mojod hua..... gharz ye k jis rishtey ko caha k mohabbat talab karon wo sochney se pehley mili...... tadreesi door shuro hua...dosti ki khuahish hui .... bin kahey Jaan se azeez dost mil gaye ..apna khuloos lutaney waley apni khusi ka ziyadah hissa mujhey soopney waley ..... Usttadon ka manzoor-e-nazar...... cacha, chachi ...mama, mami.... sab ki bharpoor mohabbat apna haq samajh kar hasil ki...aur ab tak karraha hoon.....bachpan mein khilono ki khuahish se pehley Samney paye......jesa jeena caha jiya.....konsi khushi thi jo na mili....nojawani k napukhta zehan mein Mohabbat dar aayiii......Cahney ki khuahish hi ki k Samney se Mohabbat ka izhaar hu gaya...Mohabbat hui Shadi Hu Gayiiiii......Bachon ki khuahish se pehley Khosbsorti ki misaal Beta Mila ......Isi tarhan Beti ki Khuahish se pehley Beti Mil gayiiii......Karoobar(Business) mein kamyaabi soochney se pehley Kamyaabi ki Un Uonchai ko choliya Jinper Naslein Lag jati hein Pohachney mein...........
Gharz jo caha paya......Jab caha jo caha kiya.......Balkey yoon kaho k cahney se pehley paya..............Aajj kamyaabi ki choti per Akeela khara soochta hoonnn.....

"~*Mujh se barh kar bad naseeb bhi koi hu ga Dunya mein*~"
Huhhhh... Kabhi khabar hi nahi "Dukh" Kis churya ka naam hey,Gham kisey kehtey hein, Hijr kisey kehtey hein Kitabi Alfaaz hi lagey......Khushi k siwa kuch na mila............Hasrat hui aaj aik Cehrey ko deekh kar k Na libaas ka hoosh....na Nangey paon Aag ugalti zameen per chalney ka hoosh....Bass mastana War chala ja raha hey..............Log kehtey hein "Wo majzoob He Gham ki seerhi se Ishq--e-Haqeeqi tak ja pohcha hey.........Kisi baat ki parwahhh nahi usey....Baba jazb mein aakar kabhi kabhi kisi se baat karta hey Jo kehta he sach hujata hey.....kisi k martey huey bachey ko seeney se chimtaya ......2 mintz mein Bhala changa hu gaya............ Baba Karni Waley ne ajj Rok kar mujh se poocha koi dukh hey tujhey ?
Mein Ne Kaha " Nahiiiiii, Ye kya huta he mujhey nahi khabar!!!!"
Jawab Aaya " Bara Badnaseeb he Tujhey dukh ki nahi khabar.................."
Wassalam...
Aik Badnaseeb!!!



very nice effort

plus aapka signature,too good
Umbreen
Bohat Achi ha
Thanks for such a nice sharing
Take care
KnOwN_StRaNgEr
smile.gif

Awesome sharing like always rose.gif
khush rehain
Regards rose.gif
Danger boys
QUOTE(Forever Green @ Aug 13 2007, 07:34 AM) *
Excellent !!!!!! ............. n i hv heared dat ke aap is dunya mein jitne dukh uthao ge us dunya mein utne hi sukh milen ge ............Thanks for sharing jee ... rose.gif

Hey,
howz u going ,i wanna ask u a question ,how can u write ur name in glitter and animation reply me please,
please add me on ur freind list
Masoom_Pari
insan dukh aur nakamiyan dekh ker HEERA ban jata hai

us main bohat sii qualities dukhon ko dekhnay k baad bhi paida hoti hain

hmm achi koshish hai Wasi ............. rose.gif
* SOZ *
Lajawab..........keep up the gud work...
~Wasi~
QUOTE(Forever Green @ Aug 13 2007, 08:34 AM) *
Excellent !!!!!! ............. n i hv heared dat ke aap is dunya mein jitne dukh uthao ge us dunya mein utne hi sukh milen ge ............Thanks for sharing jee ... rose.gif



Dukh aur sukh tu lazmi cheezain hain.... Us dunya k kya kehney ....wahan ka tu sirf tasawwur hi kiya ja sakta hey.... 0-baby.gif
~Wasi~
QUOTE(TANHA JAAN @ Aug 15 2007, 03:00 AM) *
WASI BOHUT ACHEE BAATIEN SHARE KI AAP NAY
TC



Thanks TJ.... rose.gif
~Wasi~
QUOTE(shafaq @ Aug 15 2007, 10:38 AM) *
very nice effort

plus aapka signature,too good



Shukriya tehreer pasand karney ka..... & Also My Siggi.....smile.gif
~Wasi~
QUOTE(Umbreen @ Aug 15 2007, 01:12 PM) *
Bohat Achi ha
Thanks for such a nice sharing
Take care



Shukriya pasandeedgi ka.... rose.gif
~Wasi~
QUOTE(KnOwN_StRaNgEr @ Aug 16 2007, 05:04 PM) *
smile.gif

Awesome sharing like always rose.gif
khush rehain
Regards rose.gif



Thanku.gif
~Wasi~
QUOTE(Masoom_Pari @ Sep 3 2007, 11:43 PM) *
insan dukh aur nakamiyan dekh ker HEERA ban jata hai

us main bohat sii qualities dukhon ko dekhnay k baad bhi paida hoti hain

hmm achi koshish hai Wasi ............. rose.gif



Zindagi main kisi bhi kefiyat ka us waqt tak accurate andza nahi lagaya ja sakta .... k jab tak uska dosra aks na deekh liya jaye..... Pasandeedgi ka shukriya rose.gif
~Wasi~
QUOTE(* SOZ * @ Sep 5 2007, 04:54 AM) *
Lajawab..........keep up the gud work...



Thanku.gif
fahiimakhter
Barha Badnasib hey tu Tujhey Dukh ki nahi khaber

Bohat hi khoobsorat tehrir or bohat hi khoobsorat khayal

jab sey yeah afsan parah hey yeah ilfaz merey zehan key darichon per dastak dey rahey hain

Sukh or khushiyan zindagi guzarney ka sahara hotin hain per yeah dukh bhi kabhi kabhi itna taktwar hota hey key zindagi ko sanwar deta hey

bohat hi khoobsorat tehrir hey likhtey rahiey
Bore Na Kar
smile.gif gud one
Silent_Ocean

Qismat Ki Baat Hai , Mein Ne Aik Islami Book Mein Parha Ke HAZRAT MUSA (AS) Ne KHUDA Se Poocha K , "Mein Tujhey Kaha Dhoondun ?" To ALLAH Ne, "Farmaya K Un Logon K Paas Jin K Dil Tootey Huwe Hein"

Aam Mara Zindigi Mein Ham Logon Se Hamdardi To Karte Hein Magar Apnayit K Saath Nahein , Mazeed Uss Ka Dil Dukha Detey Hein. Yeh To Wohi Jaane Jo Iss DUKH Se Guzar Chuka Ho Ya Guzar Raha Ho.

Nice Sharing Wasi , Keep It Up rose.gif
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