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faisal_rwp

Nov 19 2007, 11:30 PM

faisal_rwp

Nov 19 2007, 11:31 PM

Pardais janey kaa ghum
Kon boojh sakta hay
Pardaision kay aansoo
Kon poonch saktaa hay
Koi bhee nahee hotaa
Jis kay galey lag jaain
Eid kay din bhee hum
Udasion main gum, gaain
Geet woh mohabbat kay
Hum jo gungunatey they
Sochon main, Khayalon main
Aik hotey jatey they
Kis tarah say kat'tee hay
Kis tarah say batlaain
Dil kay zakhm apnon ko
Kis tarah say dikhlaain
Zakhm jo ek nishaanee hain
Chahaton kay bandhan kee
Jo kay hum nay bandhey they
Jo kabhi naa totain gay
Hum hee toot jaain gay
Teray dukh kee kulfat say
Tab hee choot paain gay

hawwa ki beti

Nov 20 2007, 07:01 AM

NICE SHARING

asif shahzad

Nov 20 2007, 08:31 AM

buhat umdha janab

faisal_rwp

Nov 20 2007, 09:22 AM

QUOTE(hawwa ki beti @ Nov 20 2007, 07:01 AM)

NICE SHARING

Thanks Buddy

Take care of your good self

Allah Hafiz

Ghazal khushboo

Nov 20 2007, 11:36 PM

faisal_rwp

Nov 21 2007, 10:57 PM

QUOTE(asif shahzad @ Nov 20 2007, 08:31 AM)

buhat umdha janab

Shukriaa .. Nawazish

Apnaa khayal rakhye ga

Allah Hafiz

faisal_rwp

Nov 28 2007, 09:23 AM

QUOTE(Ghazal khushboo @ Nov 20 2007, 11:36 PM)

Shukriaa GK

Aap ke hosala afzaee kaa

Sabahat.Tasneem

Dec 3 2007, 10:34 AM

bohat hee zabardast ...
main tumharee saree post dekh rahee hoon aur sab kee sab bohat achee hain
aur acha laga tumara yeh sab kaam

faisal_rwp

Dec 7 2007, 11:19 AM

QUOTE(Sabahat.Tasneem @ Dec 3 2007, 10:34 AM)

bohat hee zabardast ...
main tumharee saree post dekh rahee hoon aur sab kee sab bohat achee hain
aur acha laga tumara yeh sab kaam

Zara Nawazee par mashkoor hoon

asif shahzad

Dec 11 2007, 09:06 AM

great.....................

faisal_rwp

Dec 12 2007, 04:15 PM

QUOTE(asif shahzad @ Dec 11 2007, 09:06 AM)

great.....................

bohat shukria asif bhai

*Angel*

Dec 13 2007, 10:33 AM

great one

faisal_rwp

Dec 17 2007, 11:51 PM

QUOTE(*Angel* @ Dec 13 2007, 10:33 AM)

great one

Shukriaa Angel

* SOZ *

Dec 18 2007, 03:16 AM

Very nice

faisal_rwp

Mar 6 2008, 08:07 PM

QUOTE(* SOZ * @ Dec 18 2007, 03:16 AM)

Very nice

Thanks Soz ...

Duaaon main yaad rakhye gaa

Allah Hafiz

FATIMA4U

Mar 7 2008, 07:48 AM

................................it was nice n superb

app ki iss poem ki inspiration se i wrote a few lines on this t (ek chtaa sa geet (little song)

perdes ki but-yaan puchein mujh se saakh-yaan
kaise kahhon hye bheegi meri aakh-yaan
perdes mein paisaa insan buhat kama-aye hai
rishton ka per daman chutta jaa-aaye hai
Ranj iss dill ko jub koi chuu jaa-ayye hai
uss pal dil ka dard koi naa but-taa-aaye hai
kithay wi naa khabraan aaye chapp-yaan
perdes ki but-yaan puchein meri sukh-yaan
(but-yaan+means baatein)
yadon k dareechae khull se jatay thae
jub bhi hum tasweeron se dil behlatay thae
chanda bhi soona soona sa lagta thaa
apna app adhora sa lagtaa thaa
ghum se dil ki meh-filaan suj-yaan
perdes ki but-yaan puchay meri sakh yaan

thanx n keep it up ....

faisal_rwp

Jul 6 2008, 12:06 PM

QUOTE(FATIMA4U @ Mar 7 2008, 07:48 AM)

................................it was nice n superb

app ki iss poem ki inspiration se i wrote a few lines on this t (ek chtaa sa geet (little song)

perdes ki but-yaan puchein mujh se saakh-yaan
kaise kahhon hye bheegi meri aakh-yaan
perdes mein paisaa insan buhat kama-aye hai
rishton ka per daman chutta jaa-aaye hai
Ranj iss dill ko jub koi chuu jaa-ayye hai
uss pal dil ka dard koi naa but-taa-aaye hai
kithay wi naa khabraan aaye chapp-yaan
perdes ki but-yaan puchein meri sukh-yaan
(but-yaan+means baatein)
yadon k dareechae khull se jatay thae
jub bhi hum tasweeron se dil behlatay thae
chanda bhi soona soona sa lagta thaa
apna app adhora sa lagtaa thaa
ghum se dil ki meh-filaan suj-yaan
perdes ki but-yaan puchay meri sakh yaan

thanx n keep it up ....

Wow Very nice Fatima
Do share it separately in SOS Forum.
Very well..

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