Extract from my upcoming ghazal !
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Full Version: Ws - Jo Beh Jataa
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Jo bah jataa to kar daytaa , tah o balaa woh dunyaa ko
Woh ek aansoo, tere janey pay, jo, palkon pay thehra thaa
wah
nice shair & v nice presentation
nice shair & v nice presentation
Very Nice
QUOTE(hawwa ki beti @ Dec 11 2007, 11:28 PM) [snapback]2621339[/snapback]
wah
nice shair & v nice presentation
nice shair & v nice presentation
Thanks
nice one
Zabardast Shair ha janab
Excellent
kya baat hai
v Nice
v Nice
QUOTE(Dezire @ Dec 11 2007, 11:32 PM) [snapback]2621346[/snapback]
Very Nice
Shukriaa .. nawazish .. meharbani
QUOTE(faisal_rwp @ Dec 11 2007, 03:42 PM) [snapback]2621218[/snapback]
Extract from my upcoming ghazal !
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bohut hi Lajawaab
Wah faisal sahab
main aap kee post sab say pahle parhate hon
bohat ache hote hain
main aap kee post sab say pahle parhate hon
bohat ache hote hain
QUOTE(*Angel* @ Dec 12 2007, 09:56 AM) [snapback]2621627[/snapback]
nice one
Thanks Buddy
Nice one 
QUOTE(Umbreen @ Dec 12 2007, 11:52 AM) [snapback]2621744[/snapback]
Zabardast Shair ha janab
Excellent
Excellent
Thankoooooz
QUOTE(*BJ* @ Dec 12 2007, 01:43 PM) [snapback]2621967[/snapback]
kya baat hai
v Nice
v Nice
Shukriaa
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Nawazish
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Meharbani
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QUOTE (Aawaz @ Dec 15 2007, 07:42 PM) 
bohut hi Lajawaab
Thanks Budddyyy
Bohat Khub
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