ek topic hai kucch members ko wierd lagega,ajeeb lagega,kucch ko serious,kucch ko mazahiyah/serious ,but you know it is a thought,har hc member mukhtalif hai to answers bhi mukhtalif hongay
to bas dil chaha ke poocchoon ke gun haath lag jaaye to zehen mein kya khayal aayega ya kya kareingay
for me main to haath mein uttha bhi loon (dartay dartay) lekin utnay hi aahisatah se zameen par wapas daal doon ,us waqt chahray ke taassur ,,na poocchiye

sirf gun say kaam nahi chalega. agar aap nay gun denaa hi hai to chand 'targets' faraham karna bhi aap hi ki zimmah daari hogi, jin par nishanaah baazi ki mashq kar sakouN jaisay musharraf, bush, etc. r u reday to provide ... aik lambi list hai, jo aap ko pm ki jasakti hai.

mujhay ye bata dain ye gun kahan se millay githankssss

gun utha kar chk karoon ga bullets hain ya nahi... agar hain to nikal loon ga... phir awain trigger daba kar show maroon ga... thats it [:d]

abhi target mujhhay pata ho to post kyun nikalti main
aur aapka target aap jaanein,mere target ko to main target karooongi na
woh kwhtay hain na ke "everyone has to bear his own cross"
"apni apni saleeb" khud utthana padti hai ( saleha abid husain ka novel yaad agaya) yahi naam hai unke ek novel ka, so saleeb bhi aapki aur target bhi aapka

Aik Acha Sa Photoshoot ;)

kaash k maiN bhi jhooTa hota

yaa phir tum hi such.chay hotay

hum tum maiN yeh faraq nah hota

jhooT ki arzee jannat nah hoti

such ki saleeb pay dunyaa nah chaRhti

khash k maiN bhi jhooTa hota......


meri aik nazm... such ki saleeb ... say aik iqtibaas....

main ne kaha agar mil jaaaye
kahan milegi yeh to milnay par pata chalega na

phir awain trigger daba kar show maroon ga... thats it [:d]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how cute
i can kind of picture that
aapnay yeh naheen bataya bullets ka kya kareingay

hmmmm photo shoot of a gunshot ?

waaah bahot khoob AA bhai
aap shaa'ir bhi hain yeh raaz to aaj afshaa huwa,kab shuru kee shaaeri aur pehli nazam ya ghazal kaun see thee,aapke eitebaar se aapka best kalaam kaun sa hai etc etc

sab corrupt logon ko bhoon dalon ga

mujhay buhat shuq hai khaali gun ko bagair load kiye awain chalanay ka... ab within the city firing to nahi kar sakta na

bullets umm... rakh loon ga phir kabhi gaye na city say duur wahan firing karoon ga... cuz wahan kis ko pata chalta hai aerial firing ka

Kabhi is baray mein socha nahi tha achcha sawal kiya hai

Hmm mein us gun ko uthaoon ga,Check karoon ga bullets hain agar bullets huway to 1 2 hawayi fire karoon ga,Kabhi kiye jo nahi hain

Baqi bullets nikal k rakh loon ga nishani k liye k kabhi gun chalayi thi

lol kar lo gal.... maiN shaa'ir to nahi ... bus younHi likhaty likhatay kabhi kabhar kuch manzoom bhi likh jaya karta houN. HC par bhi kabhi kabhaar khalish Bhai ki nazrouN say chup chupa kar post karta raha houN. parody albatta kafi likhee hai jaisay allamaa iqbal ki nazm ham.dardi ... wohi ... tehni pay kissi shajar ki tanhaa... bulbul tha koi odaas baiThaa ... waali to sab nay hi paRhee hogi. iski parody kabhi youN likhee thee.... jo aik moshairay maiN bhi paRhee thee.....


sarkaar k kissi daftar maiN tanhaa
afsar tha koi odaas baiThaa

kahtaa thaa k auditing sar pay aayee
khanay peenay maiN saal guzaraa

pahchouN maiN kiss tarah auditor tak
har file ka hochuka kabaRaa

sunkar afsar ki aah o zaari
clerk koi pass hi say bolaa

hazir houN madad ko maiN tumhaari
clerk houN garchay grade saath kaa

kia baat hai jo file adhoori
palak jhapaktay maiN issay poora karouNga

haiN clerk wohi daftarouN maiN achchay
aatay haiN jo kaam afsarouN kay

pakistan k halatay haazra k pasay manzar maiN 2 maroof ghazlouN ki parody ki thee jo aik monthly maiN gushatha say pewastah maah published howeeN. aap bhi molahiza karaiN.




wazah rahay k maiN shaa'ir nahi. bus mouNh ka zaiqah badalnay ki khatir kabhi kabhaar aisay hi qaafia paimaayee karta rahta houN. coz i know k poetry meray bus ki cheez nahi. bus baat say baat chali aur aap nay farmaish ki to taameel karna paRi

wah ji wah
Yusaf bhai (apnay baqol) shayer na honay kay bawajood parody to khoob kar laitay hain aap
very good
yeh bhi har kisi kay bas ki baat nahin hoti

adaab arz hai ... bhai yeh to naqal bah motabiq asal hai ... aur naqal karna kia mushkil hai... aakhir school college maiN yehi to kartay rahay thay.

sure why not

main ne kabhi aisa socha na tha lekin ab post karnay ke baad soch rahi hoon,,hmmmmm kaisa lagta hai gun chalana,i mean kisi ko maarna nahene just target shooting
aur kisi ko maarna yeh un dilon ka kaam hai jo patthar mein tabdeel ho chukay hon,total patthar.

bahot hi khoob parody hai AA bhai,really bahot khoob
aur saath mein Allama ki nazm bhi dobarah yaad aagayee jo bachpan mein parhee thee aur asar bhi bahot huwa tha,zehen mein poora scene bhi ghooma tha
can you post it here ? if possible,please and thankyou

ghazlein bhi bahot acchee hain.aapko kehnay ka fun ata hai mashaAllah
aap chahein to inpar islaah le saktay hain shu'ara e karaam se kyunki waqai bahot khoob ghazlein hain.

jaisa ke pehlay main ne likha main ne bhi socha na tha

yaani aap meri tarah gun ko wapas naheen rakheingay chupkay se daayein baayein dekh kar
balke fire karnay ka shauq poora kareingay aur baqi bullets saath bhi la jayeingay,,hmmmm not bad,,not bad

Or kya baaki bullets lo or niklo

Kya pata kal ko phir gun mill jaye or us waqt bullets na huway to phir yeh bullets kaam ayen gay na

aik lateefah:

khawateen k aik resaalay maiN pasandeedah ish'aar ka safah paRh rahaa thaa to aik shair dekh kar chouNk uTh.Tha..... woh ghalib ka shair hai naa kuch iss tarah .... ragouN maiN dauRnay phirnay k hum naheeN qaail, jo aankh hi say nah Tapkay, woh lahoo kia hai... issi ki parody thee. khatoon ka pasandeedah shair yeh thaa:

se.han maiN dauRnay phirnay k hum naheeN qaa'il
jo saas hi ko nah paTkay, woh bahoo kia hai

PS: ittefaq say chahaa ghalib k shair ki yeh 'tauheen' issi khaaksaar nay ki thee. poori ghazal ki parody, pakistan k sab say baRay urdu weekly 'akhbaar e jahaaN maiN chapi thee... iss waqt bus yehi aik shair aur woh bhi 'khatoon' ki pasand par yaad rah gayee jo aik 'doosri khatoon' ko sonaa rahaa houN. enjoy kijyeh

hehe
laikin aisi naqal karna bhi kamal hay
yeh kaam aap jari rakhyay ga .........agar asal shai'ron ki badduaon ka andesha na ho

hehe

aapki door andeshi ki daad de doon phir jaaun

nazm ka bahot bahot shukriya,bahot lutf aaya parhkar,so much to learn from it,..hmmmm.

parody bhi acchee hai,Allah jaanay yeh saas bahu ki "uttha patakh" kab rukaygi (thinking,,,thinking,,)
sher bahot accha hai friends mein sunaaungi haan yeh daayein baayein dekhka ke koi saas na wahan jalwa afroz hon aur yeh sher "aankhon dekha haal" mein na tabdeel ho jaaye .

mujhhay akhbaar e jahaan ke baaray mein pata hai ek aur akhbaar "jung" bhi hai i guess.yahan jo meri kaafi balke majority of friends pakistan se taalluq rakhtee hain to akhbaar risaalay digest sab ka pata deti rehtee hain,,,. woh meri khala karachi se aksar cheezein laati theen jo kabhi akhbaar mein lipti hoti theen to ham sab bahot excited ho jaatay thay ke dekho pakistani akhbaar aur phir usmein se news parha kartay thay.

ab to net ki badaulat, aap har roz daily JANG news paper aur weekly mag AKHBAAR-E-JAHAN parh sakti hain.... current affairs k elawah bhi is maiN bahoot kuch interesting hota hai.


http://www.jang.com.pk/jang
http://www.jang.net/jm
http://www.akhbar-e-jehan.com

indian urdu papers inquilaab etc to maiN bhi aksar dekha karta houN balkay HC par bhi ossay post karta raha houN.

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sher bahot accha hai friends mein sunaaungi haan yeh daayein baayein dekhka ke koi saas na wahan jalwa afroz hon aur yeh sher "aankhon dekha haal" mein na tabdeel ho jaaye .

... khud bhi saas bantay howay 'ehteyaat kijyega' warnah "aankhon dekha haal" .... AAP-BEETI bhi ban sakta hai. (plz dont mind just kidding)

ummm if i would find a gun.. I would see n smile n leave the place where it is located

sites ka shukriya,zuroor dekhoongi,parhnay padhanay,ilm o adab ka shauq baherhaal baqi hai

yeh to maloom hai ke sab kucch ab net par parhnay ko mil sakta hai
lucknow (india) se ek akhbaar qaumi aawaaz bhi nikalta hai,should be on the net.
aur Allah se dua hai jo rishta nibhaaun insaf se nibhaaoon,aapke liye aur sab ke liye bhi yahi dua
Ameen

location leave karnay se pehla ysmile kyun kareingee ya gun dekh kar smile kyun kareingee ,,likhiye

well aghar kahi gun milhi tu utha kar... purane dinno ki yaad taza karo gi

paroosiyon ki billiyon ka shikar???

abu adnan aik aur quote karna bhool gaye www.express.com.pk

Main to kayi baar haath main le chiki hon gun .. phir shukriye ke saath wapis rakh deti hoon

aap ko free main gun kaun deta hai... kisi polical party ki sector incharge to nahi

Have seen a lot of em and fired em too, so not a big deal for me

ahan ... wot a cool topic ... I love Gunz n Rosez

We have gun .... ghar main pari hai license b hai uska ... abu ki hai ... aik baar nahi buht baar hath main le kar dekhi hai ... kabhie chalane ka punga nahi kia par its my wish to do so bachy jab ghar k zyada tang karien tou main abu ki pistol nikal leti hon magzine ta kay avien shararton main hi na kaam ho jaye

jis city main aap rehti ho wahan fire karnay ka panga karna bhi nahi wahan to patakha chal jaye to log gharoon say nahi nikaltay

umm... counter strike aur metal gear ki baat nahi ho rahi

khair aisa b nahi hai abb isb ... august main dekho kitny patakhey chaltey hain

MIEN TOU HAATH BHI NA LAGAONGA K NAJANAY KISI NAY ISSAY MURDER HI NA KARDIA HO AUR KHAMA KHA MIEN PHANS JAON...............FORAN SAY PESHTAR UDHAR SAY KHISAK LUNGA

jahan tak humain yaad parta tha aisa hi tha... chalain ji jo patkhay august main chalanay hain july main chala lo kuch hum bhi dekh lain

Beta asli guns

or phir bachon ko darrain gay!!!!!!!

Sawaal apka khoob khatarnaak hai!!!!!

pehlay to bacchay ghar say bahir nahi nikaltay.......

or agar mil bhi gaye to hath nahi lagaongi........

or agar lagaya to goliyan nikal lungi.....

or agar goliyan nikal leen to phir ya to dafna doongi ya phir jala doongi.......

puraanay dinon mein kya huwa tha,daraaiye naheen

apnay munh miyan mitthoo ,yeh bhi har ek ke bas ki baat naheen
dekhiye kitna dil khol kar apni taareef kee hai AA bhai ne

koi batlaao ke ham batlaayein kya
naheen aisa naheen ho sakta ( filmi style mein)

okKKkk
will be interesting if you go into details