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Airy_Princess

Apr 14 2008, 12:53 AM

Stars In The Scene

M.Kashif Nisar As Ouliyaa Siraj
Uncertainty As Manaab Mir
Irrational Methane As Salman
Princess of Self As Zartasha
Nemo As Naumana
Nomi As Raad
Dark Angel As Nisha
Humzaad As Abid
Seemaf as Seemaab

Ouliyaa: Manaab listen to me ... please Listen to me ...
[manaab ouliyaa ki baat nahi sunti aur chali jati hai aur ouliyaa ussey khara dekhta rehta hai par woh apne ghar chali jaati hai]
seemaab:arey manaab ghar agaein beta ... areesha aur anfaal maza aaya???
Manaab: G ... sab sahi ho gya ami ...[kids ko unn k room main bed par litaa deti hai]
Seemaab: Manaab sab khairiat tou hai na beta?
Manaab: G ami sab thek hai [apne ansoo chupate huye apne room main chali jaati hai uski samajh nahi arha hota hai k ye sab kyun hua aur ouliyaa ... kya ouliyaa aesa kar sakta hai??? ouliyaa tou uski khushiyun ka dushman nahi ho sakta...ghabrahat k aalam main woh ghar ki chatt par chali jaati hai aur khudh se baatien karne lagti hai ... dousri jaanib ouliya bhi apne ghar ki chaat par khara hota hai aur khudh se baatien karne lagta hai ... 2no aasman ko dekh kar shikwaa karne lagte hain]
Manaab: Aesa meray saath hi kyun hua ALLAH g ??? main ne ...
Ouliyaa: Main ne Manaab ko khatam kar dia
Manaab: Ouliyaa tum ne ... woh aesa kaise kar sakta
Ouliyaa: yeh sab mujhse hi kyun hua
Manaab: abb tou mujhe lag raha tha k sab theek ho jaye ga [zaar o qatar dono rouye ja rahe hote hain]
Ouliyaa: sach tou samne aata hi hai...mein ne aik aur bari ghalti kar di k
Manaab: usne mujhse sab kuch chupaaya ... why me???
Ouliyaa: Why me ... ALLAH ... I love her so much tou phir main kesay... [ thandi hawa chal rahi hoti hai ju unn k ansoo'on ko rokne ki koshish karti hai]
Manaab: Kyun??? Main hi kyun???
Ouliyaa: ye ... [hickiyan le kar roune lagta hai]
Manaab: Kyun ALLAH g mera walee tou hamesha mujhe khush dekhna chahta tha tou phir wohi kyun??? woh kyun wohi nikla???
Ouliyaa: Main janta hon mujhe kya karna hai?
Manaab: walee tum hi kyun??? kyun tumhi woh nikle???
[i][manaab zor zor se roune lagti hai aur uski khansi berhti chali jaati hai ... woh buht zor zor se saans leti hai par kuch bann nahi parta aur uski khansi ki shiddat berh jati hai usski ankhon se ansoo tapak rahe hote hain...khanste khanste uss k monh se khoon nikalta hai aur uss k haath par girta hai jisko dekh kar woh heraan reh jaati hai ... uski khansi khatam nahi ho rahi hoti seemaab khansi ki awaz sun kar aur manaab ko uss k room main na pa kar chaat par aati hai manaab neem-behoos pari hoti hai ussky monh par khoon lga hota hai]
Seemab: Mano mera bacha kya hua hai tujhey tu ...
Manaab: Ami ... ami [thaki hui awaz main bolti hai]
Semaab: kuch na hoga beta tumko [pyaar karti hai manaab ko]

Next Morning

Anzalah: Khaan baba ye ouliyaa kahan hai abhi tak nahi aaya khaane ki table par?
Faisal Siraj: Arey aata hi hoga fikar kyun karti ho
Anzalah: yeh larka bhi na ...
[yak damm aik police inspector ghar main dakhil hota hai]
Inspector:Kya app hi ouliya siraj hain? [ouliya ki tarf ishara karte huye]
Anzalah: app ... kyun kya hua hai?
Faisal: khairiat officer??? [hairangi se police ko dekhte huye]
Ouliyaa: g haan mai hi ouliya hon ... Ouliyaa Siraj [stairs se utar kar neechay lounge main aata hai]
Inspector: tou kya app ready hain jaane ko sir?
Ouliyaa: g
Anzalah: arey kaahan??? Matlab kya hai apka?
Inspector: Ma'am app k betay Ouliyaa Siraj ne ye beyaan dia hai k Ajj se 5 saal pehlay 23rd march 2002 ki subah ko aik accident kia tha ... inki car full speed main thi jisko ye control na kar sakay
Anzalah: par woh tou [aik damm baat karte karte rukk jati hai]
Inspector: woh tou kya??? uss hadsey main MR.Kamran Haq ki maut ho gayi aur unnki biwi comma' main hain apka beta ...
Ouliyaa: Jee main ne gunnah kia hai aur main uski saza bughton ga chaleye app ...

Nemo: Lou dekhou tou sahi yeh ouliyaa kesa nikla [saib khate huye] mujhe tou uss par pehlay hi shakk tha
Raad: shaak to tum ko apne souhar par bhi hai abhi tak ...
Nemo: abb tou nahi karti ... par really yeh na ...
Raad: kya ye ... tum har baat ko gossip kyun bana leti ho?
salman: Manaab ka phone aya tha mujhey
Nemo: aur lo manaab b agyi yahan ... Manaab teri tou kismat phout gayi
[safaid rang k kapron main malboos manaab room main dakhil hoti hai ... uski ankhien rou rou kar souji hui hoti hain]
Nemo: kya kya na socha hoga na tum ne k abb dulhan bano gi par tumhara muqadar tou kaala hai
Zartasha: nemo apni bakwaas band karo plz chup kar jao tumhien tars nahi aata kisi par bhi
Nemo: lou main ne tou sach bola hai sab ... Q ... kya nahi hai manaab ka naseeb kala???
[manaab dukhi nazron se nemo ki tarf dekhti hai aur khamosh rehti hai]
Salman: Bakwaas band karo naumana ... kisi k dukh dard kar ehsaas hai tumhien
[manaab k pass akar baithta hai]
Salman: befikar raho Manaab ... Hum ouliyaa ko kari se kari saza dilwaein ge ...
Manaab: Saza [woh aik lafz boli aur dunia rukk si gayi ... waqt thamm gaya]
Salman: Han Saza ouliyaa ko [salman ki samajh nahi araha hota k kya kahe] Main tumhara case laronga ... humare pass gawah hain usko saza milley gi
Manaab: Saza ... waalee ko [uski ankhien nam ho jati hain]
zartasha: Manaab himmat mat haro hum sab tumhare saath hain [manaab k kandhon par haath rakhte huye uska honsla barhati hai]
Manaab: woh ... aesa ... nahi ... kar ... sakta ... haina ... [zartasha ki tarf hasrat bhari nigah dalti hai tou zartasha route huye chali jati hai]

Nisha: Yeh kya hogya aunty??? apne tou kaha tha ye sab karne se manaab ... ouliyaa ka peecha chor degi...
Anzalah: Mujhey kya maloom tha k mera beta itna bara aashiq hai uska
abid: hum ne buht ghalt kia hai
Nisha: pyar main sab kuch jaiz hota hai tumko b tou daulat se pyar tha na aur still hai
Abid: han par
anzalah: abb 5 saal baad yaad araha hai tumko ye sab ... mera beta ... kya hoga ouliyaa ka
Nisha: Aur ye sab plan apka hi tha aunty
Anzalah: pari tou tum hi thien meray peechay k kuch karon
Abid: aesa lag raha hai sab khatam ho raha hai ...
Nisha: kya bakwaas boll rahe ho
Abid: mujhey aesa lagta hai k nayaab sab kuch janti hai
ANzalah: what??? yeh baat tum abb bata rahe ho ... Very Good ... usko tou main
Abid: Nayaab ko app kuch nahi kahiengi Aunty
Anzalah: matt bholo k tum ne kisi ka saath churvayaa hai tumhare pass koi dill nahi tumhara pyar tou paisa hai
Abid: Aunty Please
Nisha: chorien ye sab plz ye ouliyaa ka kuch karien ... kya hoga abb ...

... To Be ContiNuEd ....

~ Salam Pak!stAn ~

Rohan: U know Rijja tum itni paki josheeli Paki ho kay tum ko Pakistan par aik book likhni chaheye ...
Rijja:

acha really ... kesi ... kya likhon ... Pakistan ko guriyaa ki nazar se dekhou ...

[khilkhila kar muskurate huye]
Rohan: Nahi uss book ka naam ho ga Salam Pak!staN

Rijja: u know rohan mujhey kisi bhi cheez se darr nahi lagta ... main buhattttt [ankhien ghumate huye] bahadur hon
Rohan: Oh really ... yani k main tumhara haath na pakron chalte huye ya kabhie bhi ... ryt
Rijja: aur kya ... kisi ki himmat nahi k mera haath pakre ... aur tumko
Rohan: main tou pehlay tum se darta hon ... naraaz buht jaldi ho jati ho ... ghussa naak par rehta hai u kay
Rijja: oye main tou buhat K.O.O.L hon [shaklien banatey huye]
Rohan: han han ... I know [dil hi dil main rijja ki gapon par hanste huye aik daam road par aik bara sa doggie aata hai]
Rijja: Rohan main aik baat tou batana bhool gyi ...
Rohan: kya?
Rijja: woh doggie dekh rahe ho
Rohan: haan
Rijja: Mujhey uss se buhatttttttttttttttttt darr lagta hai
Rohan: par tumko tou kisi se darr nahi lagta tum tou buht B.A.H.A.D.U.R ho

Rijja: arey woh tou main mazak kar rahi thi ... Oyeeeeeee ... bachao woh mery pass araha hai ...

~ Com!ng Th!s Summer ~

VrSoLdIeRs

Apr 14 2008, 01:33 AM

nice addition!!!! yaar jaldi post kiya karo na!!!!

Perplexed Soul

Apr 14 2008, 02:15 AM

zabardast scene

kafi interesting hai

Ouliya jabhi kehta tha ke usne ghalat kia kuch

Kanch k1 gur1a

Apr 14 2008, 02:58 PM

Nisha: Yeh kya hogya aunty??? apne tou kaha tha ye sab karne se manaab ... ouliyaa ka peecha chor degi...
Anzalah: Mujhey kya maloom tha k mera beta itna bara aashiq hai uska
abid: hum ne buht ghalt kia hai
Nisha: pyar main sab kuch jaiz hota hai tumko b tou daulat se pyar tha na aur still hai
Abid: han par
anzalah: abb 5 saal baad yaad araha hai tumko ye sab ... mera beta ... kya hoga ouliyaa ka
Nisha: Aur ye sab plan apka hi tha aunty
Anzalah: pari tou tum hi thien meray peechay k kuch karon
Abid: aesa lag raha hai sab khatam ho raha hai ...
Nisha: kya bakwaas boll rahe ho
Abid: mujhey aesa lagta hai k nayaab sab kuch janti hai
ANzalah: what??? yeh baat tum abb bata rahe ho ... Very Good ... usko tou main
Abid: Nayaab ko app kuch nahi kahiengi Aunty
Anzalah: matt bholo k tum ne kisi ka saath churvayaa hai tumhare pass koi dill nahi tumhara pyar tou paisa hai
Abid: Aunty Please
Nisha: chorien ye sab plz ye ouliyaa ka kuch karien ... kya hoga abb ...

kahani main twist....

Angel Heart

Apr 14 2008, 04:05 PM

great faree

awesome like always
but inne din baad scene aya or itna chota sa

nd waiting 4 SALAM PAKISTAN

humakiran

Apr 15 2008, 03:15 AM

mera role nahi hai tere darame mai?

Sensitive

Apr 15 2008, 06:55 PM

Zabardast like always

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:30 PM

QUOTE(VrSoLdIeRs @ Apr 14 2008, 01:33 AM) [snapback]2816769[/snapback]

nice addition!!!! yaar jaldi post kiya karo na!!!!

Fanqz ... woh patah me ne scene ye 2 tym likha hai pehlay likha last line par thi main k lyt chali gayi

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:31 PM

QUOTE(nomi87 @ Apr 14 2008, 02:15 AM) [snapback]2816780[/snapback]

zabardast scene

kafi interesting hai

Ouliya jabhi kehta tha ke usne ghalat kia kuch

thankyou ... jee agey agey dekheye hota hai kya

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:32 PM

QUOTE(Kanch k1 gur1a @ Apr 14 2008, 02:58 PM) [snapback]2817210[/snapback]

Nisha: Yeh kya hogya aunty??? apne tou kaha tha ye sab karne se manaab ... ouliyaa ka peecha chor degi...
Anzalah: Mujhey kya maloom tha k mera beta itna bara aashiq hai uska
abid: hum ne buht ghalt kia hai
Nisha: pyar main sab kuch jaiz hota hai tumko b tou daulat se pyar tha na aur still hai
Abid: han par
anzalah: abb 5 saal baad yaad araha hai tumko ye sab ... mera beta ... kya hoga ouliyaa ka
Nisha: Aur ye sab plan apka hi tha aunty
Anzalah: pari tou tum hi thien meray peechay k kuch karon
Abid: aesa lag raha hai sab khatam ho raha hai ...
Nisha: kya bakwaas boll rahe ho
Abid: mujhey aesa lagta hai k nayaab sab kuch janti hai
ANzalah: what??? yeh baat tum abb bata rahe ho ... Very Good ... usko tou main
Abid: Nayaab ko app kuch nahi kahiengi Aunty
Anzalah: matt bholo k tum ne kisi ka saath churvayaa hai tumhare pass koi dill nahi tumhara pyar tou paisa hai
Abid: Aunty Please
Nisha: chorien ye sab plz ye ouliyaa ka kuch karien ... kya hoga abb ...
kahani main twist....

tum ho hi twisty

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:33 PM

QUOTE(Angel Heart @ Apr 14 2008, 04:05 PM) [snapback]2817273[/snapback]

great faree

awesome like always
but inne din baad scene aya or itna chota sa

nd waiting 4 SALAM PAKISTAN

Salam Pakistan INSHA ALLAH iss summer main ayegi

n haan yara I told u na k scene late kyun hua

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:34 PM

QUOTE(humakiran @ Apr 15 2008, 03:15 AM) [snapback]2817898[/snapback]

mera role nahi hai tere darame mai?

ouliyaa ki maa ka role khali hai kareygi

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:34 PM

QUOTE(miss_abbasi @ Apr 15 2008, 06:55 PM) [snapback]2819107[/snapback]

Zabardast like always

Sweet Rep lyk always

Perplexed Soul

Apr 15 2008, 10:36 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 15 2008, 10:31 PM) [snapback]2819245[/snapback]

thankyou ... jee agey agey dekheye hota hai kya

aagay kia aag lag jayegi?

Angel Heart

Apr 15 2008, 10:37 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 15 2008, 10:33 PM) [snapback]2819248[/snapback]

Salam Pakistan INSHA ALLAH iss summer main ayegi

n haan yara I told u na k scene late kyun hua

hmmmm
its ok yara scene inna zabardast hota hay k gila khatam ho jata hay

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:43 PM

I hope iss sat lyt na jaye

Gn0m3r.X

Apr 15 2008, 10:45 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 15 2008, 11:13 PM) [snapback]2819261[/snapback]

I hope iss sat lyt na jaye

I'll pray ke zaroor jaye

, so that u can't torchure anymore

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:48 PM

Bandar kya jaanay adrak ka mazaa

Gn0m3r.X

Apr 15 2008, 10:52 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 15 2008, 11:18 PM) [snapback]2819264[/snapback]

Bandar kya jaanay adrak ka mazaa

It's bandar kya jaanaey adrak ka swaad u bandariya

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:53 PM

QUOTE(nomi87 @ Apr 15 2008, 10:36 PM) [snapback]2819253[/snapback]

aagay kia aag lag jayegi?

May Be ...

Airy_Princess

Apr 15 2008, 10:54 PM

QUOTE(Loner Tech @ Apr 15 2008, 10:52 PM) [snapback]2819267[/snapback]

It's bandar kya jaanaey adrak ka swaad u bandariya

swaad isnt urdu word .... n you ... u ... machar k paye

Perplexed Soul

Apr 15 2008, 11:16 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 15 2008, 10:53 PM) [snapback]2819268[/snapback]

May Be ...

meri mano kahan ho?

haath do mere hathon main

yahan se bhaag chalain

aag lagne wali hai yahan

Airy_Princess

Apr 16 2008, 12:54 AM

QUOTE(nomi87 @ Apr 15 2008, 11:16 PM) [snapback]2819282[/snapback]

meri mano kahan ho?

haath do mere hathon main

yahan se bhaag chalain
aag lagne wali hai yahan

lolzz ... befikar raho next story salam pakistan mazay ki hogi aesi hi

Kanch k1 gur1a

Apr 16 2008, 10:01 AM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 15 2008, 10:32 PM) [snapback]2819246[/snapback]

tum ho hi twisty

mujhe mera role kuch kuch positive hota dikh raha hai
n abid ka bhi

Kashif

Apr 16 2008, 06:44 PM

Ouliyaa: Manaab listen to me ... please Listen to me ...
[manaab ouliyaa ki baat nahi sunti aur chali jati hai aur ouliyaa ussey khara dekhta rehta hai par woh apne ghar chali jaati hai]

aray baat to sun laini thi becharay ki ...... .......us ka qasoor tha bhi ya nahin
aik baar us say clear to kar laitein manaab
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seemaab:arey manaab ghar agaein beta ... areesha aur anfaal maza aaya???
Manaab: G ... sab sahi ho gya ami ...[kids ko unn k room main bed par litaa deti hai]
Seemaab: Manaab sab khairiat tou hai na beta?
Manaab: G ami sab thek hai [apne ansoo chupate huye apne room main chali jaati hai uski samajh nahi arha hota hai k ye sab kyun hua aur ouliyaa ... kya ouliyaa aesa kar sakta hai??? ouliyaa tou uski khushiyun ka dushman nahi ho sakta...ghabrahat k aalam main woh ghar ki chatt par chali jaati hai aur khudh se baatien karne lagti hai ... dousri jaanib ouliya bhi apne ghar ki chaat par khara hota hai aur khudh se baatien karne lagta hai ... 2no aasman ko dekh kar shikwaa karne lagte hain]
Manaab: Aesa meray saath hi kyun hua ALLAH g ??? main ne ...
Ouliyaa: Main ne Manaab ko khatam kar dia
Manaab: Ouliyaa tum ne ... woh aesa kaise kar sakta
Ouliyaa: yeh sab mujhse hi kyun hua
Manaab: abb tou mujhe lag raha tha k sab theek ho jaye ga [zaar o qatar dono rouye ja rahe hote hain]
Ouliyaa: sach tou samne aata hi hai...mein ne aik aur bari ghalti kar di k
Manaab: usne mujhse sab kuch chupaaya ... why me???
Ouliyaa: Why me ... ALLAH ... I love her so much tou phir main kesay... [ thandi hawa chal rahi hoti hai ju unn k ansoo'on ko rokne ki koshish karti hai]
Manaab: Kyun??? Main hi kyun???
Ouliyaa: ye ... [hickiyan le kar roune lagta hai]
Manaab: Kyun ALLAH g mera walee tou hamesha mujhe khush dekhna chahta tha tou phir wohi kyun??? woh kyun wohi nikla???
Ouliyaa: Main janta hon mujhe kya karna hai?
Manaab: walee tum hi kyun??? kyun tumhi woh nikle???
[i][manaab zor zor se roune lagti hai aur uski khansi berhti chali jaati hai ... woh buht zor zor se saans leti hai par kuch bann nahi parta aur uski khansi ki shiddat berh jati hai usski ankhon se ansoo tapak rahe hote hain...khanste khanste uss k monh se khoon nikalta hai aur uss k haath par girta hai jisko dekh kar woh heraan reh jaati hai ... uski khansi khatam nahi ho rahi hoti seemaab khansi ki awaz sun kar aur manaab ko uss k room main na pa kar chaat par aati hai manaab neem-behoos pari hoti hai ussky monh par khoon lga hota hai]
Seemab: Mano mera bacha kya hua hai tujhey tu ...
Manaab: Ami ... ami [thaki hui awaz main bolti hai]
Semaab: kuch na hoga beta tumko [pyaar karti hai manaab ko]

yeh to bohat sad ho gaya :(
donon ko itnay gham kiyun mil rahay hain ...............yeh bhi Khuda ki taraf say aazmayesh hay shayd
laikin qudrat bhi achay bandoN ko hi aazmati hay aksar
manaab to T.B. nahinnnnnn ...........yeh kya ho gaya hay
kaisay zaalim hain woh log jin ki waja say iss haal ko pohanch gayay hain yeh donoN
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Next Morning

Anzalah: Khaan baba ye ouliyaa kahan hai abhi tak nahi aaya khaane ki table par?
Faisal Siraj: Arey aata hi hoga fikar kyun karti ho
Anzalah: yeh larka bhi na ...
[yak damm aik police inspector ghar main dakhil hota hai]
Inspector:Kya app hi ouliya siraj hain? [ouliya ki tarf ishara karte huye]
Anzalah: app ... kyun kya hua hai?
Faisal: khairiat officer??? [hairangi se police ko dekhte huye]
Ouliyaa: g haan mai hi ouliya hon ... Ouliyaa Siraj [stairs se utar kar neechay lounge main aata hai]
Inspector: tou kya app ready hain jaane ko sir?
Ouliyaa: g
Anzalah: arey kaahan??? Matlab kya hai apka?
Inspector: Ma'am app k betay Ouliyaa Siraj ne ye beyaan dia hai k Ajj se 5 saal pehlay 23rd march 2002 ki subah ko aik accident kia tha ... inki car full speed main thi jisko ye control na kar sakay
Anzalah: par woh tou [aik damm baat karte karte rukk jati hai]
Inspector: woh tou kya??? uss hadsey main MR.Kamran Haq ki maut ho gayi aur unnki biwi comma' main hain apka beta ...
Ouliyaa: Jee main ne gunnah kia hai aur main uski saza bughton ga chaleye app ...

ab ouliya kay dil ka bojh .........shayd iss tarah hi halka hoga
laikin asal mujrim kon hayyyyyyyyyyy
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Nemo: Lou dekhou tou sahi yeh ouliyaa kesa nikla [saib khate huye] mujhe tou uss par pehlay hi shakk tha
Raad: shaak to tum ko apne souhar par bhi hai abhi tak ...
Nemo: abb tou nahi karti ... par really yeh na ...
Raad: kya ye ... tum har baat ko gossip kyun bana leti ho?
salman: Manaab ka phone aya tha mujhey
Nemo: aur lo manaab b agyi yahan ... Manaab teri tou kismat phout gayi
[safaid rang k kapron main malboos manaab room main dakhil hoti hai ... uski ankhien rou rou kar souji hui hoti hain]
Nemo: kya kya na socha hoga na tum ne k abb dulhan bano gi par tumhara muqadar tou kaala hai
Zartasha: nemo apni bakwaas band karo plz chup kar jao tumhien tars nahi aata kisi par bhi
Nemo: lou main ne tou sach bola hai sab ... Q ... kya nahi hai manaab ka naseeb kala???
[manaab dukhi nazron se nemo ki tarf dekhti hai aur khamosh rehti hai]
Salman: Bakwaas band karo naumana ... kisi k dukh dard kar ehsaas hai tumhien
[manaab k pass akar baithta hai]
Salman: befikar raho Manaab ... Hum ouliyaa ko kari se kari saza dilwaein ge ...
Manaab: Saza [woh aik lafz boli aur dunia rukk si gayi ... waqt thamm gaya]
Salman: Han Saza ouliyaa ko [salman ki samajh nahi araha hota k kya kahe] Main tumhara case laronga ... humare pass gawah hain usko saza milley gi
Manaab: Saza ... waalee ko [uski ankhien nam ho jati hain]
zartasha: Manaab himmat mat haro hum sab tumhare saath hain [manaab k kandhon par haath rakhte huye uska honsla barhati hai]
Manaab: woh ... aesa ... nahi ... kar ... sakta ... haina ... [zartasha ki tarf hasrat bhari nigah dalti hai tou zartasha route huye chali jati hai]

Nemo nay kitna hurt kiya hay manaab ko ...............itna behis ho jata hay kya insan
Ouliya ki saza kay naam say bhi ro parri hay manaab
duya walo .............koi to insaaf karo
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Nisha: Yeh kya hogya aunty??? apne tou kaha tha ye sab karne se manaab ... ouliyaa ka peecha chor degi...
Anzalah: Mujhey kya maloom tha k mera beta itna bara aashiq hai uska
abid: hum ne buht ghalt kia hai
Nisha: pyar main sab kuch jaiz hota hai tumko b tou daulat se pyar tha na aur still hai
Abid: han par
anzalah: abb 5 saal baad yaad araha hai tumko ye sab ... mera beta ... kya hoga ouliyaa ka
Nisha: Aur ye sab plan apka hi tha aunty
Anzalah: pari tou tum hi thien meray peechay k kuch karon
Abid: aesa lag raha hai sab khatam ho raha hai ...
Nisha: kya bakwaas boll rahe ho
Abid: mujhey aesa lagta hai k nayaab sab kuch janti hai
ANzalah: what??? yeh baat tum abb bata rahe ho ... Very Good ... usko tou main
Abid: Nayaab ko app kuch nahi kahiengi Aunty
Anzalah: matt bholo k tum ne kisi ka saath churvayaa hai tumhare pass koi dill nahi tumhara pyar tou paisa hai
Abid: Aunty Please
Nisha: chorien ye sab plz ye ouliyaa ka kuch karien ... kya hoga abb ...

iss sazishi tollay ko chaurna nahin hay
pata nahin kisi dosray ki zindagi mein aag laga kar kaisay sakoon hasil kar laitay hain aisay log
Ouliya ko to yeh chura lein gay laikin jab Ouliya ko asliyat pata chalay gi to .............

Kashif

Apr 16 2008, 06:46 PM

good going towards end AP
teasers bhi achay hain salam Pakistan kay
issi tarah likhti raho

aur haan likhnay kay sath save kar liya karo

Forever Green

Apr 16 2008, 09:03 PM

WoWwww A.P....Mashallah u to nikharti ja rahi ho writing mein

Great work mara ....... waitin for salaam Pakistan

Airy_Princess

Apr 17 2008, 01:39 AM

QUOTE(Kanch k1 gur1a @ Apr 16 2008, 10:01 AM) [snapback]2819866[/snapback]

mujhe mera role kuch kuch positive hota dikh raha hai
n abid ka bhi

tum end bata do

Airy_Princess

Apr 17 2008, 01:41 AM

QUOTE(M Kashif Nisar @ Apr 16 2008, 06:44 PM) [snapback]2820348[/snapback]

Ouliyaa: Manaab listen to me ... please Listen to me ...
[manaab ouliyaa ki baat nahi sunti aur chali jati hai aur ouliyaa ussey khara dekhta rehta hai par woh apne ghar chali jaati hai]

aray baat to sun laini thi becharay ki ...... .......us ka qasoor tha bhi ya nahin
aik baar us say clear to kar laitein manaab
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seemaab:arey manaab ghar agaein beta ... areesha aur anfaal maza aaya???
Manaab: G ... sab sahi ho gya ami ...[kids ko unn k room main bed par litaa deti hai]
Seemaab: Manaab sab khairiat tou hai na beta?
Manaab: G ami sab thek hai [apne ansoo chupate huye apne room main chali jaati hai uski samajh nahi arha hota hai k ye sab kyun hua aur ouliyaa ... kya ouliyaa aesa kar sakta hai??? ouliyaa tou uski khushiyun ka dushman nahi ho sakta...ghabrahat k aalam main woh ghar ki chatt par chali jaati hai aur khudh se baatien karne lagti hai ... dousri jaanib ouliya bhi apne ghar ki chaat par khara hota hai aur khudh se baatien karne lagta hai ... 2no aasman ko dekh kar shikwaa karne lagte hain]
Manaab: Aesa meray saath hi kyun hua ALLAH g ??? main ne ...
Ouliyaa: Main ne Manaab ko khatam kar dia
Manaab: Ouliyaa tum ne ... woh aesa kaise kar sakta
Ouliyaa: yeh sab mujhse hi kyun hua
Manaab: abb tou mujhe lag raha tha k sab theek ho jaye ga [zaar o qatar dono rouye ja rahe hote hain]
Ouliyaa: sach tou samne aata hi hai...mein ne aik aur bari ghalti kar di k
Manaab: usne mujhse sab kuch chupaaya ... why me???
Ouliyaa: Why me ... ALLAH ... I love her so much tou phir main kesay... [ thandi hawa chal rahi hoti hai ju unn k ansoo'on ko rokne ki koshish karti hai]
Manaab: Kyun??? Main hi kyun???
Ouliyaa: ye ... [hickiyan le kar roune lagta hai]
Manaab: Kyun ALLAH g mera walee tou hamesha mujhe khush dekhna chahta tha tou phir wohi kyun??? woh kyun wohi nikla???
Ouliyaa: Main janta hon mujhe kya karna hai?
Manaab: walee tum hi kyun??? kyun tumhi woh nikle???
[i][manaab zor zor se roune lagti hai aur uski khansi berhti chali jaati hai ... woh buht zor zor se saans leti hai par kuch bann nahi parta aur uski khansi ki shiddat berh jati hai usski ankhon se ansoo tapak rahe hote hain...khanste khanste uss k monh se khoon nikalta hai aur uss k haath par girta hai jisko dekh kar woh heraan reh jaati hai ... uski khansi khatam nahi ho rahi hoti seemaab khansi ki awaz sun kar aur manaab ko uss k room main na pa kar chaat par aati hai manaab neem-behoos pari hoti hai ussky monh par khoon lga hota hai]
Seemab: Mano mera bacha kya hua hai tujhey tu ...
Manaab: Ami ... ami [thaki hui awaz main bolti hai]
Semaab: kuch na hoga beta tumko [pyaar karti hai manaab ko]

yeh to bohat sad ho gaya :(
donon ko itnay gham kiyun mil rahay hain ...............yeh bhi Khuda ki taraf say aazmayesh hay shayd
laikin qudrat bhi achay bandoN ko hi aazmati hay aksar
manaab to T.B. nahinnnnnn ...........yeh kya ho gaya hay
kaisay zaalim hain woh log jin ki waja say iss haal ko pohanch gayay hain yeh donoN
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Next Morning

Anzalah: Khaan baba ye ouliyaa kahan hai abhi tak nahi aaya khaane ki table par?
Faisal Siraj: Arey aata hi hoga fikar kyun karti ho
Anzalah: yeh larka bhi na ...
[yak damm aik police inspector ghar main dakhil hota hai]
Inspector:Kya app hi ouliya siraj hain? [ouliya ki tarf ishara karte huye]
Anzalah: app ... kyun kya hua hai?
Faisal: khairiat officer??? [hairangi se police ko dekhte huye]
Ouliyaa: g haan mai hi ouliya hon ... Ouliyaa Siraj [stairs se utar kar neechay lounge main aata hai]
Inspector: tou kya app ready hain jaane ko sir?
Ouliyaa: g
Anzalah: arey kaahan??? Matlab kya hai apka?
Inspector: Ma'am app k betay Ouliyaa Siraj ne ye beyaan dia hai k Ajj se 5 saal pehlay 23rd march 2002 ki subah ko aik accident kia tha ... inki car full speed main thi jisko ye control na kar sakay
Anzalah: par woh tou [aik damm baat karte karte rukk jati hai]
Inspector: woh tou kya??? uss hadsey main MR.Kamran Haq ki maut ho gayi aur unnki biwi comma' main hain apka beta ...
Ouliyaa: Jee main ne gunnah kia hai aur main uski saza bughton ga chaleye app ...

ab ouliya kay dil ka bojh .........shayd iss tarah hi halka hoga
laikin asal mujrim kon hayyyyyyyyyyy
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Nemo: Lou dekhou tou sahi yeh ouliyaa kesa nikla [saib khate huye] mujhe tou uss par pehlay hi shakk tha
Raad: shaak to tum ko apne souhar par bhi hai abhi tak ...
Nemo: abb tou nahi karti ... par really yeh na ...
Raad: kya ye ... tum har baat ko gossip kyun bana leti ho?
salman: Manaab ka phone aya tha mujhey
Nemo: aur lo manaab b agyi yahan ... Manaab teri tou kismat phout gayi
[safaid rang k kapron main malboos manaab room main dakhil hoti hai ... uski ankhien rou rou kar souji hui hoti hain]
Nemo: kya kya na socha hoga na tum ne k abb dulhan bano gi par tumhara muqadar tou kaala hai
Zartasha: nemo apni bakwaas band karo plz chup kar jao tumhien tars nahi aata kisi par bhi
Nemo: lou main ne tou sach bola hai sab ... Q ... kya nahi hai manaab ka naseeb kala???
[manaab dukhi nazron se nemo ki tarf dekhti hai aur khamosh rehti hai]
Salman: Bakwaas band karo naumana ... kisi k dukh dard kar ehsaas hai tumhien
[manaab k pass akar baithta hai]
Salman: befikar raho Manaab ... Hum ouliyaa ko kari se kari saza dilwaein ge ...
Manaab: Saza [woh aik lafz boli aur dunia rukk si gayi ... waqt thamm gaya]
Salman: Han Saza ouliyaa ko [salman ki samajh nahi araha hota k kya kahe] Main tumhara case laronga ... humare pass gawah hain usko saza milley gi
Manaab: Saza ... waalee ko [uski ankhien nam ho jati hain]
zartasha: Manaab himmat mat haro hum sab tumhare saath hain [manaab k kandhon par haath rakhte huye uska honsla barhati hai]
Manaab: woh ... aesa ... nahi ... kar ... sakta ... haina ... [zartasha ki tarf hasrat bhari nigah dalti hai tou zartasha route huye chali jati hai]

Nemo nay kitna hurt kiya hay manaab ko ...............itna behis ho jata hay kya insan
Ouliya ki saza kay naam say bhi ro parri hay manaab
duya walo .............koi to insaaf karo
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Nisha: Yeh kya hogya aunty??? apne tou kaha tha ye sab karne se manaab ... ouliyaa ka peecha chor degi...
Anzalah: Mujhey kya maloom tha k mera beta itna bara aashiq hai uska
abid: hum ne buht ghalt kia hai
Nisha: pyar main sab kuch jaiz hota hai tumko b tou daulat se pyar tha na aur still hai
Abid: han par
anzalah: abb 5 saal baad yaad araha hai tumko ye sab ... mera beta ... kya hoga ouliyaa ka
Nisha: Aur ye sab plan apka hi tha aunty
Anzalah: pari tou tum hi thien meray peechay k kuch karon
Abid: aesa lag raha hai sab khatam ho raha hai ...
Nisha: kya bakwaas boll rahe ho
Abid: mujhey aesa lagta hai k nayaab sab kuch janti hai
ANzalah: what??? yeh baat tum abb bata rahe ho ... Very Good ... usko tou main
Abid: Nayaab ko app kuch nahi kahiengi Aunty
Anzalah: matt bholo k tum ne kisi ka saath churvayaa hai tumhare pass koi dill nahi tumhara pyar tou paisa hai
Abid: Aunty Please
Nisha: chorien ye sab plz ye ouliyaa ka kuch karien ... kya hoga abb ...

iss sazishi tollay ko chaurna nahin hay
pata nahin kisi dosray ki zindagi mein aag laga kar kaisay sakoon hasil kar laitay hain aisay log
Ouliya ko to yeh chura lein gay laikin jab Ouliya ko asliyat pata chalay gi to .............

Tum tou pakay senti ho gaye

well its a true story so ...

Airy_Princess

Apr 17 2008, 01:41 AM

QUOTE(M Kashif Nisar @ Apr 16 2008, 06:46 PM) [snapback]2820349[/snapback]

good going towards end AP
teasers bhi achay hain salam Pakistan kay
issi tarah likhti raho

aur haan likhnay kay sath save kar liya karo

chup karo mera makhol na urao

Airy_Princess

Apr 17 2008, 01:42 AM

QUOTE(Forever Green @ Apr 16 2008, 09:03 PM) [snapback]2820492[/snapback]

WoWwww A.P....Mashallah u to nikharti ja rahi ho writing mein

Great work mara ....... waitin for salaam Pakistan

thank you janam again zartasha bano gi

tum meki movie chor k piya desh bhaag gayi thi

Kashif

Apr 18 2008, 05:26 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 17 2008, 01:41 AM) [snapback]2820960[/snapback]

Tum tou pakay senti ho gaye

well its a true story so ...

senti huwa hon mental tum na ho jana

I wish that anjaam dardnaak na ho iss ka

Kashif

Apr 18 2008, 05:29 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 17 2008, 01:41 AM) [snapback]2820961[/snapback]

chup karo mera makhol na urao

makhol kab ura raha hon ...........sahi keh raha hon save kar liya karo
mujhay tp apni 2 lines kay zaya honay ka bhi bohat afsos hota hay aur tum nay poora scene likha tha

Kanch k1 gur1a

Apr 18 2008, 07:48 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 17 2008, 01:39 AM) [snapback]2820955[/snapback]

tum end bata do

nai batana tha kya... hehehe nisha n abid ke ehsaas ki zuban dekh ke to main bhi samjh sakti hun jin emotions ko tum share kar rahi ho woh dil se feel karke maine likha tha.. ke ab kuch positive horahi hia surat-e-haal...

Airy_Princess

Apr 19 2008, 12:57 AM

QUOTE(M Kashif Nisar @ Apr 18 2008, 05:26 PM) [snapback]2824148[/snapback]

senti huwa hon mental tum na ho jana

I wish that anjaam dardnaak na ho iss ka

nahi main ne senti-mental hona chorr dia hai abb logon ko karti hon

Airy_Princess

Apr 19 2008, 12:58 AM

QUOTE(M Kashif Nisar @ Apr 18 2008, 05:29 PM) [snapback]2824155[/snapback]

makhol kab ura raha hon ...........sahi keh raha hon save kar liya karo
mujhay tp apni 2 lines kay zaya honay ka bhi bohat afsos hota hay aur tum nay poora scene likha tha

tabhie tum hans rahe ho

ura lo makhol

Airy_Princess

Apr 19 2008, 01:01 AM

QUOTE(Kanch k1 gur1a @ Apr 18 2008, 07:48 PM) [snapback]2824521[/snapback]

nai batana tha kya... hehehe nisha n abid ke ehsaas ki zuban dekh ke to main bhi samjh sakti hun jin emotions ko tum share kar rahi ho woh dil se feel karke maine likha tha.. ke ab kuch positive horahi hia surat-e-haal...

haila tera dil bara pyara hai :frendz:

humakiran

Apr 19 2008, 06:44 AM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 15 2008, 01:34 PM) [snapback]2819249[/snapback]

ouliyaa ki maa ka role khali hai kareygi

lol

mujhe pehle shuru se bata ye story hai kia kehaan se shuru hui aur characters kon hain aur ye tum likh rahi ho na? cuz ye to continuation hai na. aur ye salam pakistan teaser matlab?

Airy_Princess

Apr 20 2008, 04:55 PM

yep yep ye main hi likh rahi hon

kya me kahani nahi likh sakti ... salam pakistan new movie hai ... ju summer main start karongi ... Teaser means trailor

Kanch k1 gur1a

Apr 20 2008, 05:26 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 19 2008, 01:01 AM) [snapback]2824966[/snapback]

haila tera dil bara pyara hai :frendz:

Kashif

Apr 20 2008, 08:51 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 19 2008, 12:57 AM) [snapback]2824959[/snapback]

nahi main ne senti-mental hona chorr dia hai abb logon ko karti hon

hehe
sahi ja rahi ho larki.........

Kashif

Apr 20 2008, 08:52 PM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 19 2008, 12:58 AM) [snapback]2824962[/snapback]

tabhie tum hans rahe ho

ura lo makhol

aray itna acha mashwara diya tha aur tum ko makhol lagta hay

humakiran

Apr 21 2008, 09:33 AM

QUOTE(Airy_Princess @ Apr 20 2008, 07:55 AM) [snapback]2828265[/snapback]

yep yep ye main hi likh rahi hon

kya me kahani nahi likh sakti ... salam pakistan new movie hai ... ju summer main start karongi ... Teaser means trailor

acha acha thik hai.

mai b apna novel yehaan post ker sakti hu kia hc characters per?

Airy_Princess

Apr 22 2008, 12:57 AM

haan haan sure y not

Uncertainty

Apr 24 2008, 12:37 PM

Fit hai Hit hai ...

Naumana tera mun kala ... sahi kehtay hain mun chitta honay se dil chitta nahi hota :p Raad ko sunayi nahi se raha thaa keh us ki bivi ki abolay ja rehi hai ... Mardon ki aqal kay bhi kia kehnay ..

Khr .. Ouliya ne agr surrender Manab ko impress kernay k liay kia hai to chame on him .. coz khud ko arrest to wo pehle bhi kra sakta thaa .. Liar na ho to .. but if he is right to i believe sab theek hi ho jaye ga ,,

aur AP .. aik indian movie ki tarah end pr hi saray raaz faash kray gi ... lol ...

anyway, very nice.... good luck for next

Silent_Ocean

Apr 24 2008, 03:35 PM

Acha Likha Hai

~Nemo~

May 5 2008, 03:47 AM

woww lolzz bohat acha scene tha sisoo g gud work!

Airy_Princess

May 5 2008, 04:40 PM

QUOTE(Uncertainty @ Apr 24 2008, 12:37 PM) [snapback]2836246[/snapback]

Fit hai Hit hai ...

Naumana tera mun kala ... sahi kehtay hain mun chitta honay se dil chitta nahi hota :p Raad ko sunayi nahi se raha thaa keh us ki bivi ki abolay ja rehi hai ... Mardon ki aqal kay bhi kia kehnay ..

Khr .. Ouliya ne agr surrender Manab ko impress kernay k liay kia hai to chame on him .. coz khud ko arrest to wo pehle bhi kra sakta thaa .. Liar na ho to .. but if he is right to i believe sab theek hi ho jaye ga ,,

aur AP .. aik indian movie ki tarah end pr hi saray raaz faash kray gi ... lol ...

anyway, very nice.... good luck for next

lou koi holly flick b dekhi hai aaisi jis ka raaz starting main fash hua ho

Airy_Princess

May 5 2008, 04:41 PM

QUOTE(Silent_Ocean @ Apr 24 2008, 03:35 PM) [snapback]2836869[/snapback]

Acha Likha Hai

Thankyou so much sis

Airy_Princess

May 5 2008, 04:42 PM

QUOTE(~Nemo~ @ May 5 2008, 03:47 AM) [snapback]2855966[/snapback]

woww lolzz bohat acha scene tha sisoo g gud work!

thankyou janab