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hahahaha kis book sya chori ki??
net se bez its not mine 
umm agr soocha jaye to kafi depth hay is story main....mujhay to achi lagi...giv'in me new thoughts!!
QUOTE(aaminah @ May 23 2008, 09:12 AM) 
umm agr soocha jaye to kafi depth hay is story main....mujhay to achi lagi...giv'in me new thoughts!!
yes asi hee feeling thi when i read datz ,,,thx u like n felt it
QUOTE(life of wat @ May 23 2008, 09:14 AM)
yes asi hee feeling thi when i read datz ,,,thx u like n felt it
no probs LOW....its my pleasure ...i have got smthing
4m this post
QUOTE(aaminah @ May 23 2008, 09:18 AM)
no probs LOW....its my pleasure ...i have got smthing 4m this post
4m this postthx
iss par kya kaha jayay 
deep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and thought provoking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
QUOTE(M Kashif Nisar @ May 24 2008, 10:05 AM)
iss par kya kaha jayay
q sar per se guzar gayee infect in diz side its was my 1st post i thought for children so dats y...
QUOTE(shahrafiq @ May 24 2008, 10:45 AM)
deep!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and thought provoking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thx
QUOTE(*Life* @ Jun 2 2008, 01:03 PM)
q sar per se guzar gayee infect in diz side its was my 1st post i thought for children so dats y...
nahin sar par say nahin guzra
in fact humour kay sath iss tarah kisi physical disability ka use mujhay acha nahin lagta kiyunke woh to ALLAH ki taraf say aisa hota hay
I hope you understand
QUOTE(Kashif @ Jun 3 2008, 10:31 AM)
nahin sar par say nahin guzra
in fact humour kay sath iss tarah kisi physical disability ka use mujhay acha nahin lagta kiyunke woh to ALLAH ki taraf say aisa hota hay
I hope you understand
in fact humour kay sath iss tarah kisi physical disability ka use mujhay acha nahin lagta kiyunke woh to ALLAH ki taraf say aisa hota hay
I hope you understand
yea got it
QUOTE(*Life* @ Jun 3 2008, 06:30 PM)
yea got it
thanks ji
QUOTE(Kashif @ Jun 3 2008, 10:31 AM)
nahin sar par say nahin guzra
in fact humour kay sath iss tarah kisi physical disability ka use mujhay acha nahin lagta kiyunke woh to ALLAH ki taraf say aisa hota hay
I hope you understand
in fact humour kay sath iss tarah kisi physical disability ka use mujhay acha nahin lagta kiyunke woh to ALLAH ki taraf say aisa hota hay
I hope you understand
umm i think u got it literally,,,literal meaning to waiquea esay hain k hum keh saktay Allah ki marzi main hamara kia dhakhal!
but:
writer nay in cheezon ko symbolically lia hay... like gonga larka...behri larki etc etc i think k in ki depth main reality hi hay k for example in dono ko pata hay k in k Ishq ka anjam kia ho ga n phir bhi miltay hain...so writer compares em wid gona n behri...un k Amal ko portray kia hay not their physical appearence!
(i couldn't edit the above rply 
)^umm i think u got it literally,,,literal meaning to waiquea esay hain k hum keh saktay Allah ki marzi main hamara kia dhakhal!
but:
writer nay in cheezon ko symbolically lia hay... like gonga larka...behri larki etc etc i think k in ki depth main reality hi hay k for example in dono ko pata hay k in k Ishq ka anjam kia ho ga n phir bhi miltay hain.or behri larki phir bhi us ka song sun'nay jati hay(like us k mazoor amal n action ko us ki physicals sey compare kia hay)..so writer compares em wid gonga n behri...un k Amal ko portray kia hay through their physical appearence!
means maflooj-mazoor amal ko mazoor-physicals k through reader ko samjhana(i think literature main is ka koi specific style bhi hay,,dunt know in urdu)
mujhay to yehi laga but everybody doesn't need to agree with this
)^umm i think u got it literally,,,literal meaning to waiquea esay hain k hum keh saktay Allah ki marzi main hamara kia dhakhal!but:
writer nay in cheezon ko symbolically lia hay... like gonga larka...behri larki etc etc i think k in ki depth main reality hi hay k for example in dono ko pata hay k in k Ishq ka anjam kia ho ga n phir bhi miltay hain.or behri larki phir bhi us ka song sun'nay jati hay(like us k mazoor amal n action ko us ki physicals sey compare kia hay)..so writer compares em wid gonga n behri...un k Amal ko portray kia hay through their physical appearence!
means maflooj-mazoor amal ko mazoor-physicals k through reader ko samjhana(i think literature main is ka koi specific style bhi hay,,dunt know in urdu)
mujhay to yehi laga but everybody doesn't need to agree with this
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jun 5 2008, 06:06 AM)
(i couldn't edit the above rply )^umm i think u got it literally,,,literal meaning to waiquea esay hain k hum keh saktay Allah ki marzi main hamara kia dhakhal!
but:
writer nay in cheezon ko symbolically lia hay... like gonga larka...behri larki etc etc i think k in ki depth main reality hi hay k for example in dono ko pata hay k in k Ishq ka anjam kia ho ga n phir bhi miltay hain.or behri larki phir bhi us ka song sun'nay jati hay(like us k mazoor amal n action ko us ki physicals sey compare kia hay)..so writer compares em wid gonga n behri...un k Amal ko portray kia hay through their physical appearence!
means maflooj-mazoor amal ko mazoor-physicals k through reader ko samjhana(i think literature main is ka koi specific style bhi hay,,dunt know in urdu)
mujhay to yehi laga but everybody doesn't need to agree with this
)^umm i think u got it literally,,,literal meaning to waiquea esay hain k hum keh saktay Allah ki marzi main hamara kia dhakhal!but:
writer nay in cheezon ko symbolically lia hay... like gonga larka...behri larki etc etc i think k in ki depth main reality hi hay k for example in dono ko pata hay k in k Ishq ka anjam kia ho ga n phir bhi miltay hain.or behri larki phir bhi us ka song sun'nay jati hay(like us k mazoor amal n action ko us ki physicals sey compare kia hay)..so writer compares em wid gonga n behri...un k Amal ko portray kia hay through their physical appearence!
means maflooj-mazoor amal ko mazoor-physicals k through reader ko samjhana(i think literature main is ka koi specific style bhi hay,,dunt know in urdu)
mujhay to yehi laga but everybody doesn't need to agree with this
you are right Aaminah
may be writer ka maqsad yehi ho
main nay sirf apni thinking ki baat ki thi kay mujhay zaati taur par physical disability ko humour mein use karna acha nahin lagta ......kiyunke main yeh sochta hoon kay jo banda iss ka shikaar hota hay us par kya guzar rahi hoti ho gi ........waisay mera khyal hay aap nay jitna depth mein iss ko conceive kiya hay utna to shayd us writer nay bhi nahin socha hoga
however, it's good that you take it positively
khush rahein
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jun 5 2008, 06:06 AM)
(i couldn't edit the above rply )^umm i think u got it literally,,,literal meaning to waiquea esay hain k hum keh saktay Allah ki marzi main hamara kia dhakhal!
but:
writer nay in cheezon ko symbolically lia hay... like gonga larka...behri larki etc etc i think k in ki depth main reality hi hay k for example in dono ko pata hay k in k Ishq ka anjam kia ho ga n phir bhi miltay hain.or behri larki phir bhi us ka song sun'nay jati hay(like us k mazoor amal n action ko us ki physicals sey compare kia hay)..so writer compares em wid gonga n behri...un k Amal ko portray kia hay through their physical appearence!
means maflooj-mazoor amal ko mazoor-physicals k through reader ko samjhana(i think literature main is ka koi specific style bhi hay,,dunt know in urdu)
mujhay to yehi laga but everybody doesn't need to agree with this
)^umm i think u got it literally,,,literal meaning to waiquea esay hain k hum keh saktay Allah ki marzi main hamara kia dhakhal!but:
writer nay in cheezon ko symbolically lia hay... like gonga larka...behri larki etc etc i think k in ki depth main reality hi hay k for example in dono ko pata hay k in k Ishq ka anjam kia ho ga n phir bhi miltay hain.or behri larki phir bhi us ka song sun'nay jati hay(like us k mazoor amal n action ko us ki physicals sey compare kia hay)..so writer compares em wid gonga n behri...un k Amal ko portray kia hay through their physical appearence!
means maflooj-mazoor amal ko mazoor-physicals k through reader ko samjhana(i think literature main is ka koi specific style bhi hay,,dunt know in urdu)
mujhay to yehi laga but everybody doesn't need to agree with this
walsaid im agreed
QUOTE(Kashif @ Jun 5 2008, 08:48 AM)
you are right Aaminah
may be writer ka maqsad yehi ho
main nay sirf apni thinking ki baat ki thi kay mujhay zaati taur par physical disability ko humour mein use karna acha nahin lagta ......kiyunke main yeh sochta hoon kay jo banda iss ka shikaar hota hay us par kya guzar rahi hoti ho gi ........waisay mera khyal hay aap nay jitna depth mein iss ko conceive kiya hay utna to shayd us writer nay bhi nahin socha hoga
however, it's good that you take it positively
khush rahein
may be writer ka maqsad yehi ho
main nay sirf apni thinking ki baat ki thi kay mujhay zaati taur par physical disability ko humour mein use karna acha nahin lagta ......kiyunke main yeh sochta hoon kay jo banda iss ka shikaar hota hay us par kya guzar rahi hoti ho gi ........waisay mera khyal hay aap nay jitna depth mein iss ko conceive kiya hay utna to shayd us writer nay bhi nahin socha hoga
however, it's good that you take it positively
khush rahein
umm ap ki baat bhi sahi hay disability ka shikar jo hu us per kia guzar rahi ho gi
but i think writing techniques and esp. tanz 0 mazah main reader ki emotions ko capture karna aur usey soochnay par majboor karna asal maqsad hota hay..chahay usey disabilities ka sahara hi lena paray
ab ap yeh bhi sooch saktey hain[ap k point of view sey] k writer reader ko in disable pplz ki feelings sey hamain aashna karwana chahta hay ta k hamaray ander Ehsas paida hu..etc etc
ummm lecture kutch zyada ho gya hay
Thanku
ap bhi khush rahain
QUOTE(*Life* @ Jun 5 2008, 05:58 PM)
walsaid im agreed
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jun 10 2008, 09:44 AM)
umm ap ki baat bhi sahi hay disability ka shikar jo hu us per kia guzar rahi ho gi
but i think writing techniques and esp. tanz 0 mazah main reader ki emotions ko capture karna aur usey soochnay par majboor karna asal maqsad hota hay..chahay usey disabilities ka sahara hi lena paray
ab ap yeh bhi sooch saktey hain[ap k point of view sey] k writer reader ko in disable pplz ki feelings sey hamain aashna karwana chahta hay ta k hamaray ander Ehsas paida hu..etc etc
ummm lecture kutch zyada ho gya hay
Thanku
ap bhi khush rahain
but i think writing techniques and esp. tanz 0 mazah main reader ki emotions ko capture karna aur usey soochnay par majboor karna asal maqsad hota hay..chahay usey disabilities ka sahara hi lena paray
ab ap yeh bhi sooch saktey hain[ap k point of view sey] k writer reader ko in disable pplz ki feelings sey hamain aashna karwana chahta hay ta k hamaray ander Ehsas paida hu..etc etc
ummm lecture kutch zyada ho gya hay
Thanku
ap bhi khush rahain
baat phir wohi hay Aaminah
aap thik keh rahi hain aur tanz-o-mizah mein aisa kar laina bhi koi ajeeb baat nahin
main nay to sirf apni personal feeling ka zikar kiya tha
iss tarah positivly conceive karna achi baat hay
you
ji
QUOTE(Kashif @ Jun 11 2008, 08:39 AM)
baat phir wohi hay Aaminah
aap thik keh rahi hain aur tanz-o-mizah mein aisa kar laina bhi koi ajeeb baat nahin
main nay to sirf apni personal feeling ka zikar kiya tha
iss tarah positivly conceive karna achi baat hay
you ji
aap thik keh rahi hain aur tanz-o-mizah mein aisa kar laina bhi koi ajeeb baat nahin
main nay to sirf apni personal feeling ka zikar kiya tha
iss tarah positivly conceive karna achi baat hay
you
jialright...i hope i didn't offended ur personal opinion
my pleasure
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jun 12 2008, 07:35 AM)
alright...i hope i didn't offended ur personal opinion
my pleasure
my pleasure
not at all ji ........
you presented a positive description in fact
khush rahein
achi khaani ha lakin thori sad 
QUOTE(Kashif @ Jun 12 2008, 08:10 AM)
not at all ji ........
you presented a positive description in fact
khush rahein
you presented a positive description in fact
khush rahein
khush rahain
QUOTE(tension_4u @ Jul 6 2008, 12:20 AM)
achi khaani ha lakin thori sad
yes
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jul 6 2008, 12:34 PM)
khush rahain
always welcome ji
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