Tumhara shehar tou bilkul niea andaz wala hai
Humaray shehar main bhi ab koi hum sa nahi milta

bohat khoob bhai

khush rehain

achi kaavish hai bhai... aur presentation bhi bht achi hia...

Khush RahaiN!!!

nice try......

Wah kya khoobsurat baat kahi hai
Tareef ka bohat bohat shukriya
Bohat khush rehye KS jee

Bohat bohat shukriya ManPaki jee So nice of You... Ap bhi khush rehye

Bohat shukriya ibniadam jee

buhut achi ghazal likhy hay apnay

keep sharing.........

Bohat bohat shukriya apka Ghazal Khushboo Sis So nice of YOU... Khush rehye

wah mansoor jee bohat zabardast poetry hai ap ki
ye ake shair mujhay bohat acha laga hai

may pouch pouch harta hoon magar teri adat
kuch na bolna ,mujhay uljhan may rakhna .

Itne khoobsurat alfaaz k liye bohat bohat shukriya Nazo jee
Khush rehye...Umeed hai aayenda bhi apko meri shayeri pasand Aaye gi

[quote name='BeJaan' date='May 7 2008, 09:03 PM' post='2861386']
Itne khoobsurat alfaaz k liye bohat bohat shukriya Nazo jee
Khush rehye...Umeed hai aayenda bhi apko meri shayeri pasand Aaye gi
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your welcome ji zaror pasand aye gi ap ki shairy mujhay
bashartay ap apni shairy post kartay rahain gey tab

Jee inshAllah main to share karta hi rahon ga, meri majboori hai :P
Khush rehye

Khoobsurat poetry selection
thanx for shareing Mohatram

Aslam o alaikum.......!

Bohat bohat shukriya apka HKB hamesha khush rehye

really sad

May u always be safe & sound

So nice of U HKB jee Allah apko bhi apni nazr-e-karam main rakhe, ameen!

Zabardast Ghazal Kahi Aap Ne

nicegrapics nice gazal

Bohat bohat shukriya apka SweetRabia Khush rehye