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BeJaan
May 23 2008, 07:05 PM

*Life*
May 23 2008, 07:13 PM
very deepl n touchy ...great sharing ,.,, good work
Hesham Ahmed
May 24 2008, 01:55 AM
Execellent .. i Like It ..

Great

Khush Rahiye
hawwa ki beti
May 24 2008, 02:39 AM
Just Fantastic
Mrs.KnOwN_StRaNgEr
May 24 2008, 03:24 AM
Bahot Khoob
sweet_angel
May 24 2008, 04:23 AM
zabardusttttttttttttt zabardustttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! am nt into poetries nd al dat so much but jaise he isey parha to VERY TOUCHY i LUV IT THNX FOR SHARRING
rani aapi
May 24 2008, 04:33 AM
bohut khoob rose.gif
KnOwN_StRaNgEr
May 24 2008, 08:02 AM
QUOTE(BeJaan @ May 23 2008, 07:05 PM) *

suno tum waqayi ab laot k nahi aao gey??

wah bohat khoob 0-heartbeat.gif

SUNO....!
Tum loat ao na!
Woh dekho chand nikla hai..,
Sitary jagmagaye hain..,
Hamari muntazir ankhain..,
Duaaen mangti ankhain..,
Tumhain hi sochti aankahin..,
Tumhain hi dhoondti aankahin..,
Tumhain wapis bulati hain!
Yeh dil jab bhi dharakta hai..,
Tumhara naam laita hai..,
Yeh ansoo jab b behty hain,
Tumhare dukh main hi behtay hain..,
Yeh barish jab bhe hoti hai,
Tumhain hi yaad karte hain..,
Khushi koi jo aye b tumharay bin adhoori hai..,
SUNO!
TuM LOAT AAO NA..........

ManPaki
May 24 2008, 11:27 AM
wah Mansoor zabardast sharing hai... rose.gif

last line per tu jaisay waqt thehar sa gaya ho...

suno!
Kya tum Vaqai......
Chalo choro....

wah kiya baat hai jee... gud.gif
nazo454
May 24 2008, 11:36 AM
aha mansoor kaya baat kah dali hai kaya tum waqai chalo charo
ap ki poetry may ittna dard hai k dil tarap utha hai 0-heartbeat.gif crying_anim.gif
seemaf
May 24 2008, 11:44 AM
Buhat khoob rose.gif
shahrafiq
May 24 2008, 12:03 PM
zaberdast!!!!!!!!!!!
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:12 PM
QUOTE(life of wat @ May 23 2008, 07:13 PM) *
very deepl n touchy ...great sharing ,.,, good work

LOW pasand karne & tareef karne ka bohat shukriya rose.gif Hamesha khush rehye
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:13 PM
QUOTE(Hesham Ahmed @ May 24 2008, 01:55 AM) *
Execellent .. i Like It ..

Great

Khush Rahiye

Pasandeedgi ka & tareef k liye apka behadh mashkoor hon Hesham Ahmed jee rose.gif Khush rehye
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:14 PM
QUOTE(hawwa ki beti @ May 24 2008, 02:39 AM) *
Just Fantastic

HKB jee apka bohat shukriya rose.gif Khush rehye
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:15 PM
QUOTE(Kamli @ May 24 2008, 03:24 AM) *
Bahot Khoob

Bohat bohat shukriya apka Kamli rose.gif
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:16 PM
QUOTE(sweet_angel @ May 24 2008, 04:23 AM) *
zabardusttttttttttttt zabardustttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! am nt into poetries nd al dat so much but jaise he isey parha to VERY TOUCHY i LUV IT THNX FOR SHARRING

Yeh jaan kar bohat khushi hui k potery main ziada interest na hone k bawajood apko meri shayeri achi lagi...Bohat bohat shukriya apka Sweet Angel rose.gif Hamesha khush rehye
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:17 PM
QUOTE(rani aapi @ May 24 2008, 04:33 AM) *
bohut khoob rose.gif

Apka bohat shukriya Rani Aapi rose.gif Khush rehye
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:19 PM
QUOTE(KnOwN_StRaNgEr @ May 24 2008, 08:02 AM) *
suno tum waqayi ab laot k nahi aao gey??

wah bohat khoob 0-heartbeat.gif

SUNO....!
Tum loat ao na!
Woh dekho chand nikla hai..,
Sitary jagmagaye hain..,
Hamari muntazir ankhain..,
Duaaen mangti ankhain..,
Tumhain hi sochti aankahin..,
Tumhain hi dhoondti aankahin..,
Tumhain wapis bulati hain!
Yeh dil jab bhi dharakta hai..,
Tumhara naam laita hai..,
Yeh ansoo jab b behty hain,
Tumhare dukh main hi behtay hain..,
Yeh barish jab bhe hoti hai,
Tumhain hi yaad karte hain..,
Khushi koi jo aye b tumharay bin adhoori hai..,
SUNO!
TuM LOAT AAO NA..........


Pasand karne ka bohat bohat shukriya KS jee rose.gif

Aur jo nazam ap ne share ki hai, awesum Seedha dil ko chhu liya ...Khush rehye
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:20 PM
QUOTE(ManPaki @ May 24 2008, 11:27 AM) *
wah Mansoor zabardast sharing hai... rose.gif

last line per tu jaisay waqt thehar sa gaya ho...

suno!
Kya tum Vaqai......
Chalo choro....

wah kiya baat hai jee... gud.gif

Usman itni ziada tareef & Pasand karne ka par apka intehai mashkoor hon adb.gif rose.gif
Bohat khush rehye hamesha
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:21 PM
QUOTE(nazo454 @ May 24 2008, 11:36 AM) *
aha mansoor kaya baat kah dali hai kaya tum waqai chalo charo
ap ki poetry may ittna dard hai k dil tarap utha hai 0-heartbeat.gif crying_anim.gif

Nazo jee roye to nahi :( khush rehye hamesha rose.gif Itni ziada tareef ka bohat bohat shukriya...& pliz hamesha khush rehye...
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:23 PM
QUOTE(seemaf @ May 24 2008, 11:44 AM) *
Buhat khoob rose.gif

Seemaf jee apka bohat shukriya rose.gif Khush rehye
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:24 PM
QUOTE(shahrafiq @ May 24 2008, 12:03 PM) *
zaberdast!!!!!!!!!!!

Bohat bohat shukar guzar hon Shahrafiq jee rose.gif Khush rehye
Ghazal khushboo
May 24 2008, 08:29 PM
buhut khoob

gud.gif image
BeJaan
May 24 2008, 08:50 PM
QUOTE(Ghazal khushboo @ May 24 2008, 08:29 PM) *
buhut khoob

gud.gif image

Ghazal Khushboo Sis, pasand karne par apka bohat mashkoor hon rose.gif Khush rehye
shhh!!!
May 25 2008, 11:27 AM
really great sharing!!!!!!!1 rose.gif
Silent_Ocean
May 25 2008, 08:33 PM

Bohat Khoob smile.gif
BeJaan
May 26 2008, 01:37 PM
QUOTE(shhh!!! @ May 25 2008, 11:27 AM) *
really great sharing!!!!!!!1 rose.gif

Pasandeedgi ka bohat bohat shukriya rose.gif
BeJaan
May 26 2008, 01:39 PM
QUOTE(Silent_Ocean @ May 25 2008, 08:33 PM) *

Bohat Khoob smile.gif

Silent Ocean Jee apka bohat bohat shukriya rose.gif
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