Tareef k liye apka bohat bohat shukar guzar hon Nazo jee Hamesha khush rehye
BeJaan
Jun 4 2008, 01:48 PM
QUOTE(ManPaki @ Jun 4 2008, 09:52 AM)
WAH MANSOOR KIYA BAAT HAI YAAR BHT HI ZABARDAST GHAZAL HAI... BHT KHOOB...
IK IK SHE'R ZABARDAST AUR LAJAWAAB HAI... BHT HI UMDAA...
PHIR BHI AIK SHE'R QUOTE KARNAY KI GUSTAAKHI KARRAHA HUN
HER CHEHRAY PE HOTA HAI JAB USI KA GUMAAN... HER RASTAA PHIR US K GHAR KYUN NAHI JATAA...
Usman ap ne to tareef ki bhi hadh kar di Really bohat khushi hui k apko yeh chand toote phoote se lafz pasand aaye
Ap ki zarra nawazi hai, varna kis qabil hain hum
Hamesha bohat khush rehye Usman... Jeete rehye
BeJaan
Jun 4 2008, 01:50 PM
QUOTE(shahrafiq @ Jun 4 2008, 10:12 AM)
I think it is the best of your collection,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bohat he zaberdast!!!!!!!!
Apki raaye mere liye bohat khaas hai Pasandeedgi ka shukriya, Khush rehye hamesha!
BeJaan
Jun 4 2008, 01:52 PM
QUOTE(ManPaki @ Jun 4 2008, 10:51 AM)
wah bhai kiya zabardast wording hai.... "ma teri muhabbat hun majboori nahi"
Usman So nice of YOU... Hosla Afzai ka Shukriya Khush rehye
BeJaan
Jun 4 2008, 01:53 PM
QUOTE(ManPaki @ Jun 4 2008, 10:52 AM)
yey bhi bht khooob rahi jee...
Husn-e-nazar hai apka Usman Khush rehye
BeJaan
Jun 4 2008, 01:56 PM
QUOTE(ManPaki @ Jun 4 2008, 10:53 AM)
aur yey tu image k saath bht hi khubsurat wording hai...
Thanks for sharing...
Usman bohat bohat shukriya apka, ap ne har sher par apni raaye ka izhaar kiya... Itna waqat diya, it means a lot to me... Allah apko dheron dher khushian & dil ka sakoon ataa farmaye, ameen Khush rehye
Ghazal khushboo
Jun 4 2008, 02:32 PM
Bejaan bro
buhut achi sharings hain
khush rahiye
ManPaki
Jun 4 2008, 02:40 PM
QUOTE(BeJaan @ Jun 4 2008, 01:56 PM)
Usman bohat bohat shukriya apka, ap ne har sher par apni raaye ka izhaar kiya... Itna waqat diya, it means a lot to me... Allah apko dheron dher khushian & dil ka sakoon ataa farmaye, ameen Khush rehye
yar woh 2 sher hai aur abhi dono hi yaad nahi arahay... poetry yaad rakhnay main bht hi bura hafza hai mera anyway likhta hun toota phoota sher ap is ko complte kar dijyey plz... asal main i wanted to dedicate those to you Bejaan magar haye rii hamari qismat she'r hi nahi yaad arahay...
tujh sy milna khushi ki baat sahi tujh sy milkar udaas rehta hun
aik she'r ka aik hi misra yaad araha hai woh bhi ghalt hai...
tujh sy milta hun tu kuch aur bikhar jata hun...
so ap ko dedicate kiyey hain 2 she'r khud hi complete kar lain...
yar woh 2 sher hai aur abhi dono hi yaad nahi arahay... poetry yaad rakhnay main bht hi bura hafza hai mera anyway likhta hun toota phoota sher ap is ko complte kar dijyey plz... asal main i wanted to dedicate those to you Bejaan magar haye rii hamari qismat she'r hi nahi yaad arahay...
tujh sy milna khushi ki baat sahi tujh sy milkar udaas rehta hun
aik she'r ka aik hi misra yaad araha hai woh bhi ghalt hai...
tujh sy milta hun tu kuch aur bikhar jata hun...
so ap ko dedicate kiyey hain 2 she'r khud hi complete kar lain...
How Sweet Usman So sweet of You... Bohat khushi hui aur itne pyare sherz dedicate karne par
Pehla sher to theek likha hai ap ne, Yadasht apki achi hai MashAllah
Aur doosre sher ka misra awesum hai, Poora sher to mujhe bhi nahi aata
Anyway Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe, ameen!
hawwa ki beti
Jun 6 2008, 05:03 AM
QUOTE(BeJaan @ Jun 4 2008, 09:56 AM)
Usman bohat bohat shukriya apka, ap ne har sher par apni raaye ka izhaar kiya... Itna waqat diya, it means a lot to me... Allah apko dheron dher khushian & dil ka sakoon ataa farmaye, ameen Khush rehye
khoobsurat poetry & image khush rehain Mohatram Aslam o alaikum.........!
miss.roshni
Jun 6 2008, 07:58 AM
QUOTE(BeJaan @ Jun 3 2008, 08:04 PM)
nice sharing..!
BeJaan
Jun 6 2008, 01:25 PM
QUOTE(hawwa ki beti @ Jun 6 2008, 05:03 AM)
khoobsurat poetry & image khush rehain Mohatram Aslam o alaikum.........!