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TOOTHPICK


Usay ek toothpick darkaar thee,
charon taraf nazar daali
kitaabon ki qareenay say saji shelve,kitaabein hi kitaabein
toothpick ka dibba wahan kaheen naheen
nazrein sofay say hoti hui flower decoraton wali table tak pahoncheen idhar udhar khhanka daayein baayein,yeh toothpick gaye kahan.
Bedroom ka rukh kiya neatly biccha bistar,side table pa rrakhee kitaabein utthayin lamp ko uttha ke dekha,table ke peechay bhi jhaank liya
"ya ALlah kahan gaya nigoda dibba"
"kaheen kapdon ki cupboard mein kisi nay na daal diya ho chance to naheen magar dekh hi loon"

kapday idhar say udhar udhar say idhar kiye,kapdon ke beech mein zewar ka dibba bhi,khubsurat zewar uski pasand kay,usay bhi band karkay rakh diya,"ab yeh toothpick ka kaam to karnay walay naheen" woh jhuunjhlaayi.
tthak haar ke woh soafay par aakar dhamm say baitth gayi,daant ke dard par ghussa bhi tha ,baitthtay hi koi cheez zameen apr ucchal kar giri ,tooth pick ka dibba tha.
woh muskuraayi,zehen mein kitaabein ,sofa, side table a khubsurat decoration saaf sutthra bistar , zewaraat ka dibba sab ghoom gaya ke jab woh toothpick dhoondh rahi thee to yeh sab kitnay be maani lag rahay thay ,har cheez ki apni bahot ahmiyat khwaah woh toothpick hi kyun na ho!
*Life*
bhoot khoob

acha lika...
Kashif
sahi kaha "har cheez ki apni aik ehamyat hoti hay"

acha likha hay janab
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seemaf
Wah buhat khoob smile.gif

Superb message ok.gif

Thanks for sharing with us dear sis rose.gif
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dili shukriya Life,seema siso and kashif smile.gif

thankyou so much

ham har roz yahi kahani dekhtay hai,barish ho to umbrella say imp kucch bhi naheen,likhna ho to pen/pencil ,kucch erase karna ho to chaha yduniya ke kitnay umbrellas,pens pencils etc etc aajaayein lekin mitaanay ke liye eraser/rubber hi chahiye aur us waqt that is the most imp thing smile.gif

ek mazay ki baat suniye tooth pick/khilaal ki nisbat say smile.gif

hamaray ek buzurg bahot accha qat'a sunaya kartay thay jo yaad reh gaya,funny hai isliye smile.gif

yaar tum bhi kamaal kartay ho
zindigi paaemaal kartay ho
chand tinkay hain asshiyanay mein
tum unheen say khilaal kartay ho ?



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khush rahein aap sab
tihami
bohat khobsorat tahreer shafaq aapa..
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QUOTE(tihami @ Jun 13 2008, 04:33 PM) *
bohat khobsorat tahreer shafaq aapa..



thankyou tihami
i always dream of being a writer,but i guess likhnay ka sha'oor aa naheen raha hai
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khush rahein
Aawaz
QUOTE(shafaq @ Jun 12 2008, 03:32 PM) *
TOOTHPICK
Usay ek toothpick darkaar thee,
charon taraf nazar daali
kitaabon ki qareenay say saji shelve,kitaabein hi kitaabein
toothpick ka dibba wahan kaheen naheen
nazrein sofay say hoti hui flower decoraton wali table tak pahoncheen idhar udhar khhanka daayein baayein,yeh toothpick gaye kahan.
Bedroom ka rukh kiya neatly biccha bistar,side table pa rrakhee kitaabein utthayin lamp ko uttha ke dekha,table ke peechay bhi jhaank liya
"ya ALlah kahan gaya nigoda dibba"
"kaheen kapdon ki cupboard mein kisi nay na daal diya ho chance to naheen magar dekh hi loon"

kapday idhar say udhar udhar say idhar kiye,kapdon ke beech mein zewar ka dibba bhi,khubsurat zewar uski pasand kay,usay bhi band karkay rakh diya,"ab yeh toothpick ka kaam to karnay walay naheen" woh jhuunjhlaayi.
tthak haar ke woh soafay par aakar dhamm say baitth gayi,daant ke dard par ghussa bhi tha ,baitthtay hi koi cheez zameen apr ucchal kar giri ,tooth pick ka dibba tha.
woh muskuraayi,zehen mein kitaabein ,sofa, side table a khubsurat decoration saaf sutthra bistar , zewaraat ka dibba sab ghoom gaya ke jab woh toothpick dhoondh rahi thee to yeh sab kitnay be maani lag rahay thay ,har cheez ki apni bahot ahmiyat khwaah woh toothpick hi kyun na ho!



salam.gif ShafaQ kisii haiN ap hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

mashaallah.gif bohut zabardast likha haiii

wo kya khetay haiN khy koZay maiN samander ko band kernaa

waQahiii her ChoTii se Chotiii CheeZ ki apni aik ahmiyat hoteee hai

KhuSh rehaiN
Ghazal khushboo
buhut khoobsorat tehreer gp.gif

thanks for sharing shafaq ji rose.gif

keep writing smile.gif
*DhanaK*
QUOTE(Aawaz @ Jun 22 2008, 01:44 PM) *
salam.gif ShafaQ kisii haiN ap hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

mashaallah.gif bohut zabardast likha haiii

wo kya khetay haiN khy koZay maiN samander ko band kernaa

waQahiii her ChoTii se Chotiii CheeZ ki apni aik ahmiyat hoteee hai

KhuSh rehaiN


aawaaz siso
i am sooOOO happy ke aap yahan aayeen smile.gif
shukriya bahot bahot

bilkul sahi ke har cheez ki apni ahmiyat,pen dhhondnay chalo to raastay mein kitnay ki toothpick milein,comb,lipstick ,broom jo bhi mil jaaye pen kakaam pen hi kar sakta hai smile.gif

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QUOTE(Ghazal khushboo @ Jun 22 2008, 07:55 PM) *
buhut khoobsorat tehreer gp.gif

thanks for sharing shafaq ji rose.gif

keep writing smile.gif




ghazal smile.gif
aap to kam kam aanay lagee hain i miss you
shukriya aapka ke aapko tehrreer pasand aayee

aur aapka signature kya hi khoob hai
great choice

Abu Adnan
QUOTE(shafaq @ Jun 12 2008, 09:32 PM) *
TOOTHPICK
Usay ek toothpick darkaar thee,
charon taraf nazar daali
kitaabon ki qareenay say saji shelve,kitaabein hi kitaabein
toothpick ka dibba wahan kaheen naheen
nazrein sofay say hoti hui flower decoraton wali table tak pahoncheen idhar udhar khhanka daayein baayein,yeh toothpick gaye kahan.
Bedroom ka rukh kiya neatly biccha bistar,side table pa rrakhee kitaabein utthayin lamp ko uttha ke dekha,table ke peechay bhi jhaank liya
"ya ALlah kahan gaya nigoda dibba"
"kaheen kapdon ki cupboard mein kisi nay na daal diya ho chance to naheen magar dekh hi loon"

kapday idhar say udhar udhar say idhar kiye,kapdon ke beech mein zewar ka dibba bhi,khubsurat zewar uski pasand kay,usay bhi band karkay rakh diya,"ab yeh toothpick ka kaam to karnay walay naheen" woh jhuunjhlaayi.
tthak haar ke woh soafay par aakar dhamm say baitth gayi,daant ke dard par ghussa bhi tha ,baitthtay hi koi cheez zameen apr ucchal kar giri ,tooth pick ka dibba tha.
woh muskuraayi,zehen mein kitaabein ,sofa, side table a khubsurat decoration saaf sutthra bistar , zewaraat ka dibba sab ghoom gaya ke jab woh toothpick dhoondh rahi thee to yeh sab kitnay be maani lag rahay thay ,har cheez ki apni bahot ahmiyat khwaah woh toothpick hi kyun na ho!


wow kia khoob afsaanchah likha hai... message bhi bahoot acha hai.... woh iqbaal nay kahaa thaa naa k ....nahi koi cheez nikammi khodaa k kaarkhanay maiN ... thanx 4 sharing.
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QUOTE(Abu Adnan @ Jun 23 2008, 08:33 AM) *
wow kia khoob afsaanchah likha hai... message bhi bahoot acha hai.... woh iqbaal nay kahaa thaa naa k ....nahi koi cheez nikammi khodaa k kaarkhanay maiN ... thanx 4 sharing.



aap itna accha likhnay walay AA bhai
yeh bataiye ke ismein kya tarmeem aur izaafah kiya ja sakta hai,kucch guide lines
aaminah
QUOTE(shafaq @ Jun 12 2008, 08:32 PM) *
TOOTHPICK


Usay ek toothpick darkaar thee,
charon taraf nazar daali
kitaabon ki qareenay say saji shelve,kitaabein hi kitaabein
toothpick ka dibba wahan kaheen naheen
nazrein sofay say hoti hui flower decoraton wali table tak pahoncheen idhar udhar khhanka daayein baayein,yeh toothpick gaye kahan.
Bedroom ka rukh kiya neatly biccha bistar,side table pa rrakhee kitaabein utthayin lamp ko uttha ke dekha,table ke peechay bhi jhaank liya
"ya ALlah kahan gaya nigoda dibba"
"kaheen kapdon ki cupboard mein kisi nay na daal diya ho chance to naheen magar dekh hi loon"

kapday idhar say udhar udhar say idhar kiye,kapdon ke beech mein zewar ka dibba bhi,khubsurat zewar uski pasand kay,usay bhi band karkay rakh diya,"ab yeh toothpick ka kaam to karnay walay naheen" woh jhuunjhlaayi.
tthak haar ke woh soafay par aakar dhamm say baitth gayi,daant ke dard par ghussa bhi tha ,baitthtay hi koi cheez zameen apr ucchal kar giri ,tooth pick ka dibba tha.
woh muskuraayi,zehen mein kitaabein ,sofa, side table a khubsurat decoration saaf sutthra bistar , zewaraat ka dibba sab ghoom gaya ke jab woh toothpick dhoondh rahi thee to yeh sab kitnay be maani lag rahay thay ,har cheez ki apni bahot ahmiyat khwaah woh toothpick hi kyun na ho!

good one...and message conveyed gud.gif
Ghazal khushboo
QUOTE(shafaq @ Jun 23 2008, 09:27 AM) *
ghazal smile.gif
aap to kam kam aanay lagee hain i miss you
shukriya aapka ke aapko tehrreer pasand aayee

aur aapka signature kya hi khoob hai
great choice


u welcome adb.gif
ji der asal ajkal MASHA ALLAH shadion ka season haina ussy may busy hoon zara smile.gif

i miss you toooooooo Juphi.gif

buhut shukriya apko signature pasand aya ....
ye aik Naat hay jo Junaid Jamshed rose.gif nay perhi hay .. duas.gif
mujhay buhut pasand hay smile.gif
Silent_Ocean
Bohat Acha Aur Informative and Message Diya Hai Aap Ne Siso smile.gif
*DhanaK*
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jun 29 2008, 09:17 PM) *
good one...and message conveyed gud.gif



smile.gif
thankyou aaminah
how are u doing
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QUOTE(Ghazal khushboo @ Jun 29 2008, 10:16 PM) *
u welcome adb.gif
ji der asal ajkal MASHA ALLAH shadion ka season haina ussy may busy hoon zara smile.gif

i miss you toooooooo Juphi.gif

buhut shukriya apko signature pasand aya ....
ye aik Naat hay jo Junaid Jamshed rose.gif nay perhi hay .. duas.gif
mujhay buhut pasand hay smile.gif


jee shadiyon ka season to hai ,is tarf bhi smile.gif
hope you have a good time at all the shaadeees

kucch interesting rasmein baataiye ga
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QUOTE(Silent_Ocean @ Jun 30 2008, 06:33 AM) *
Bohat Acha Aur Informative and Message Diya Hai Aap Ne Siso smile.gif


pasand karnay ka shukriya
khud bhi kucch seekhtee jaati hoon smile.gif


khush rahein
Mrs.KnOwN_StRaNgEr
Waah bahot khoob Shafaq jee

Kitni khoobsorati se yeh baat waziyah kar dii aap ne k har cheez ki ehmiyyat hoti hai khvaah woh ba-zaahir aik tinkay jaisi mamooli hi kyun na ho.

Khush rahiay hamesha rose.gif
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QUOTE(Kamli @ Jun 30 2008, 01:31 PM) *
Waah bahot khoob Shafaq jee

Kitni khoobsorati se yeh baat waziyah kar dii aap ne k har cheez ki ehmiyyat hoti hai [b]khvaah woh ba-zaahir aik tinkay jaisi mamooli hi kyun na ho
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Khush rahiay hamesha rose.gif[/b]




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nice comment
tension_4u
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*DhanaK*
QUOTE(tension_4u @ Jul 2 2008, 03:14 PM) *
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thanks smile.gif nice of you
aaminah
QUOTE(shafaq @ Jun 30 2008, 06:19 PM) *
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thankyou aaminah
how are u doing


welcome.gif Shafaq

Alhumdulilah sab fine,,howz going on ur side? smile.gif
*DhanaK*
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jul 6 2008, 07:36 AM) *
welcome.gif Shafaq

Alhumdulilah sab fine,,howz going on ur side? smile.gif


well and good smile.gif
Allah ka shukr hai
aaminah
QUOTE(shafaq @ Jul 7 2008, 04:52 PM) *
well and good smile.gif
Allah ka shukr hai

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