Ouliyaa: Aunty sab taiyarian kesi ja rahi hain app ki [ghar main enter hotey huye Manaab kay]
Seemab: Buss beta sab sahi chal raha hai shukker hai ALLAH ka
Rubaab: Manaab se milne aye ho itne bahane na lagao jao jaa kar mil lo uss se[muskuratey huye]
Ouliyaa: Jee ja raha hon... [ouliyaa manaab k room main enter hota hai ... Manaab ...
[windchimp bajj rahi hoti hai ... Manaab bathroom main hoti hai ... bathroom ka darwaza khula hua hota hai]
Manaab: Walee [murjhayi nazron se ouliyaa ki tarf dekhti hai ... aur ulti karti hai uss k monh se khoon nikal raha hota hai ... ouliyaa manaab ko iss halat main dekh kar ghabraa jata hai]
Ouliyaa: Manaab ... Manaab yeh tumhien kya hogya hai ... Manaaab
Manaab: walee [uska naam leti hai aur uss ki bazoo'on main beyhoos hojati hai ... uss k monh se nikalta khoon ouliyaa ki white shirt par lag jata hai ouliyaa Manaab ko apni gaud main uthata hai aur hospital le jata hai usi hospital jahan woh jaya karti thi wahan sab ouliyaa k saath chalay jaate hain]

In the Hospital

Ouliyaa: Doctor please Check her ... Please Doctor ... its an emergency case ... yeh Dr.Jamil k paas aati thien
Doctor: Ohhh ... hum abhi call kar k unko bulate hain ... Nurse jaldi idhar aao
Ouliya: Manaab ... [hatho se apne baal peche karta hai ... uss ki heartBeat slow honay lagti hai woh paas pari chair par baith jata hai]
Rubaab: Ouliyaa honsla rakho sab sahi ho jayega
Ouliyaa: Bajo mujhey tou lagta hai k ...
Seemab: Iss k baap k saath bhi aesa hua tha
[sab chup kar k seemaab ki shakal dekhne lagte hain...ouliyaa b hairan ho jata hai]
Ouliyaa: kya keh rahi hain app?
Rubaab: Amma kya baat kar rahe ho app?
Seemaab: Haan main jaanti thi k isko ye takleef aik arse se hai ...
Rubaab: Kya takleef ???
Ouliyaa: Kyaa takleef??? kons ... konsi takleef Amm-Amma [uss se bola nahi ja raha hota]
Seemaab: Mano k abu ko bhi Stomach cancer tha aur wohi hua iss k saath bhi ... unn k saath b aesa hua tha
Ouliyaa: App ne mujhey bataya kyun nahi amma
Seemaab: Manaab tumhien marta nahi dekh sakti thi woh nahi chahti thi k uss k samne tum uss se pehlay marr jao
Ouliyaa: Marna ... Maut ... kya keh rahe ho ammA ... appp Amma app kya keh rahe ho ... main ...
[b][Thing to Remember: In Scene 15 ye baat clear kar di gayi thi k kese Manaab k father ki death hui now remember again if u cant the read post # 24 here http://www.hulchul.net/HC/index.php?showto...37745&st=20 Thankyou A.P]
Seemaab: haan usko 1 saal pehle se khaansi aa rahi thi ... ilaaj k itne paise na thay pass ... woh sumjhi k aam khansi hai aur usko kuch nahi hoga usko tou jeena hai aur meri bitto jeeti rahi uss dard k saath ju tufaan ki tarhan uss main uthte thay...tumhare aanay ki umeed woh khou chuki thi ouliyaa ... phir tum aye uski zindagi badal gayi usko laga sab sahi ho jayega par kuch b sahi na hua...phir tumhari sachayi uss k samne khuli
Ouliyaa: usne mujhey ...
Seemaab: haan usne kisi ko na bataya jis din uspar tumhara raaz khula uss din woh buht roui aur uss din pehli baar route route ussko khoon ki ulti ayi [remember that scene jab manaab seemaab ki gaud main gir k behoos ho jati hai]
Rubaab: usne itna kuch bardasht kia
Seemaab: bardasht kar kar k hi tou uski hadh khatam ho gayi Ruby ... akhir kitna bardasht karti woh ... [aik damm doctor wahan ataa hai]
Doc Jamil: Main ne app logon se pehle hi kaha tha k unnki halaat abb naqabil-e-illaj hai
Ouliyaa: Sir app jitne kahien ge utne paaise de donga main uska hum behtareen se behtareen illaj karvain ge plz sir plz
Doc: okay as u wish ... unka cancer buht zyada phail raha hai jism main u know its fast growing now
Ouliyaa: Sir app paisa matt dekheye ... please ... please ... please ...
Doc: thek hai hum ajj se treatment dety hain jitna ho sakay utni ... unka cancer floating surat main hai aur abhi unse bilkul bola nahi ja raha unki awaz bilkul band hai so app log na hi jaein tou acha hai cuz woh bol na paeingi aur unko dukh hoga

After a Week



[ouliyaa manaab k room main dakhil hota hai woh usko dekh kar halka sa muskurati hai]

Manaab: Agaye tum walee [uss se utha nahi ja raha hota]
Ouliyaa: Kesi ho Manaab [usko sahara de kar bithata hai]
Manaab: ahhh [dard se karhati hai] hmmm Buhat pyari walee ki Manaab ju hui
Ouliyaa; jisne walee ko walee nahi sumjha [uska ansoo manaab k hathon par girta hai woh ussk pass chair par baith kar uska haath pakar leta hai]
Manaab: Walee ... ouliyaa ... mera ouliyaa ...mera dil karta hai k jitni baar ho sakay tumhara naam le lon
Ouliyaa: tumhien kuch na hoga ... dekha nahi Manaab abb tum bolne lagi ho [uss k pass ho jata hai]
Manaab: hmmm suna tha mai ne k insaan marne se pehlay bilkul thek ho jata hai walee [muskurati hai] hai na
Ouliyaa: kuch nahi hoga tumhien tum thek ho jaogi ... bus 1 ya 2 saal lagein ge ...aur haan main tumhara intezar karonga ... humare ache waqt ka ...
Manaab: aur agher issi beech main marr gayi tou [halka sa muskurati hai]
Ouliyaa: Manaab aesa matt kaho please ... please aesa matt kaho please ... I love u Manaab ... I love you I cant live without u
Manaab: I love u 2 Ouliyaa ... main jeena chahti hon ... tum hamesha kehte thay k hum paise se sab kuch khareed sakte hain ... tou khareedo na walee ... khareedo meri zindagi ... main marna nahi chahti ... main jeena chahti hon ... Main jeena chahti hon
Ouliyaa: Main harr gaya Manaab ... Main kitna ghalt tha
Manaab: Mujhey Bacha lou walee ... I love you ...

[yehi woh akhri baat thi ju manaab se ouliyaa se kahi...uss raat route route woh dono haath main haath dalay sou gaye aur agli subah jab ouliyaa utha tou...]

Ouliyaa: Manaab ... [uska nazuk sa haath sard hou chuka tha...aaise lag raha tha k woh abhi soui pari hai ... pass chalti machine main dil ki dharkan nazar aani band ho chuki thi]

Funeral Of Manaab

sab Manaab ka janaza le kar jaate hain aur ouliyaa durr khara sab se khamoosh uss ko dafan hote dekh raha hota hai ... Log uss par bechargi ka izhar kar rahe hote hain par ussko aesa maloom hota hai jese usko kuch sunayi nahi de raha...woh apne kamre main akar baithta hai aur apne room ka darwaza banc kar deta hai ... uss andhere main bhi usko Manaab ki jhalak nazar arahi hoti hai ... uski tasveerein deewaron par sajji hoti hain aur uss ki ankhon main dekh rahi hoti hain...usski hansi ki khanak uss k kano main gonj rahi hoti hai ... marne se pehle k uss k alfaaz uss main gonj rahe hote hain
Manaab: Main marna nahi chahti Walee ... main marna nahi chahti ...
woh apni ankhein band karta hai aur sou jata hai ...

Ouliyaa: Kahan ho Manaab ... dekhou main tumhara intezaar nahi kar sakta
Manaab: Acha ju main ne tumhara intezaar kia ...
Ouliyaa: Kuch na Kaho abb hum aik hain ... aur aik dousre k saath hain [ussky honton par haath rakhta hai aur uski ankhein band karta hai aur usko aik jagah le jata hai]
Manaab: Kahan le kar ja rahe ho mujhey
Ouliyaa: Aao tou sahi [Manaab ki ankhon par se haath uthata hai]
Manaab: ... yeh Humara ghar hai ouliyaa .... mein ne apne khwabon ko paanay ki itni koshish ki
Ouliyaa: aur humare ALLAH ne humarey sab khwaab poray kar diye Manaab ... Humara chota sa ghar aur uss k agey pyara sa bagh yehi khwaab tha na humara ...

jahan woh aik dousre ko apna ghar dikhane main magan thay wahan aik aam insaan ki ankh k lye kuch na tha ... unka ghar woh 2 qabrien thien ju wahan thein jahan kabhie unho ne ghar banane ka socha tha ... duniya ne unko wese tou saath na kia haan Maar k aik saath dafn karne ka ehsaan kar dia unpar ... aur wohi unki khushi ka sabab bana ...han ... Kabhie Kabhie Yun Bhi ...
[Aapp sab ko batana chahongi jinho ne iss kahani ko perha k yeh aik sachi kahani thi kisi k pyar ki jiska anjaam yehi hua ... par haqeeqat main inn 2no main se aik insaan abhi b zinda hai aur maut k intezaar main hai k kab uski sansien khatm hon aur woh apne pyar ko paa lay]

THE END

Written by: AIry PrINCESS
a sPECIAL THANKS TO ALLAH G who made me to write it till the end ... my Friends jinki ye story thi ... and they allowed me to write all this ... my Friends who appreciated me in this period Uncertainty and Nemo are very special Names for this ... THankyou Friends ... It was a good experience working with all the hcians ... Thankyou ... Best of Luck in your Life ...

The Show must go on ... so I am Airy Princess with another venture for u people ...

SALAAM PAKISTAN

Its All about the YoUNG* We

Introducing:

BraveHeart As Rohan Sajood Butt
Khushi As Rijja Rehman
Cool Leo As AMMAR Ahmed
Tenha Saima As Huraira Saeed

[this is an introductory song of 4 main characters and the story...so its a bit like as we see music videos for movies now its up to u to imagine ur fullest ]


[Parda uth ta hai aur aik handsome larka Black Background par Blue Jeans aur White Shirt main baitha hota hai khamosh sa kuch sochta hua[Rohaan] ... Song start hota hai]

Rohan: Tere bina jee na paaun
[Huraira ki Entry hoti hai ... aik khoobsurat Mod scod larki in deepPink Gypsy skirt with white top ... aur Rohaan k pass akar baithti hai]

Rohan: Sang tere jee na paaun
[Rijja ki Entry hoti hai aik Lambey walon waali muskurati hui khoobsurat si larki plain red long shirt aur choori daar paijama with long duppatas main uss k samne khaari hoti hai jiski ankhon main hasrat hai par kuch keh nahi paati]

AMMAR: Hoke judaa ab hum milen [aik handsome Bussiness Man Black suit main aata hai aur Rijja ko Rohan se durr le jata hai]

ab na kabhi honge juda --- [Huraira Rohan ki eyes par haath rakhti hai]

Rohaan: ab kya kahu iske siva Rohaan ki jab eyes khulti hain tou samne koi bhi nahi hota sirf aik sheesha hota hai woh akela uss k samne khara hota hai

mann tu talbat tu mann talabat - 2 times

Rohaan khud ko sheeshay main dekhta hai pehlay uss ko apne saath huraira dekhayi deti hai aur aik damm uss ko lagta hai k Rijja uss k saath khari hai

mann tu talbat tu mann talabat - 2 times

Rijja uss sheeshay main baki rehti hai tou kabhie uss k saath Rohaan aata hai aur kabhie Ammar


[dont know what language verse ]

aur uss verse main rohaan ko rijja k saath guzari saari baatein yaad aatien hain

Rohaan: ab kya kahu iske siva
mann tu talbat tu mann talbat - 2
[Rohan ko lagta hai k 2no uss k saath khari hian par woh jab palt kar dekhta hai tou koi b nahi hota]

Rijja: Tere bina jee na paaun -2

[Ammar uska haath pakarta hai par woh uska haath chor deti hai]

sang tere jee na paaun -2

[Rijja Rohaan k pass aanay lagti hai tou woh ghayab ho jata hai]

hoke judaa ab hum milen ab na kabhi honge juda
[Ammar akar dobara Rijja ka haath pakar leta hai[

ab kya kahu iske siva
[rohaan Rijja ko side par khara ho kar dekhne lagta hai

mann tu talbat tu mann talbat - 4

[aaenay k aagey Rohan ko khudh main Rijja nazar aati hai aur Rijja ko khudh main Rohaan]

Ab mil gaye lo phir se hum
subahon ne phir chhuume kadam

[A movie Scene jis main Rohaan ... Rijja ki ankhon par se haath hatata hai aur uss k ird gird phool hi phool hote hain woh pholon k darmeyaan khari hui hoti hai]

kudrat ne haathon se likhen
khud rishten yeh janmon janam ) - 2

[as it is twice tou yahan 2 movie scenes k clips]
[First main Rohaan khara hota hai kharaab mood k saath Huraira aati hai aur uska haath pakarti hai]
[second main Ammar Rijja ko Engagement Ring Pehnata hai]

milke rahenge ham yun sada

[sab woh Black Background main wapis aate hain aur Rohan ka haath huraira k hathon main hota hai aur Rijja ka Ammar k par Rohan aur Rijja aik dousre ko dekh rahe hote hain]

mann tu talbat tu mann talbat - 2

[Rohaan ki ankhein Huraira band karti hai woh khoulta hai tou uss k samne Rijja khari hoti hai aur Huraira Ghayab hoti hai]

ohh my love I am in love
[Rohan Huraira k peeche ja raha hota hai]

I will be there for you
always be there for you
[Huraira agey nikal jati hai aur uska haath peeche se akar Rijja pakarti hai]



[dont know what language verse]

[peechay se akar Rijja ka haath Ammar Pakar leta hai woh hairangi se 2no ko dekhne lagti hai]



dil ke WaRak pe likha
har lafz tere pyar ka
[Movie Scene Clips: AMmar akar Rijja se maafi mang raha hota hai aur Rohaan uss k saath khara hota hai aur dono ko dekh raha hota hai]

yeh waqt ne chaha bahut
lekin na phir bhi meet saka) - 2
[As it is twice to 2 clips]
[First: Rijja Rohaan chaat par kharay khulay aasman k neeche chaandni raat main aik dousre ko daikh rahe hote hain]
[Second: Rijja khari hoti hai Rohaan k saath Ammar zabardasti usko apne saath le jata hai]

har lamha yeh kehne laga
mann tu talbat tu mann talbat - 2

Huraira ja rahi hoti hai aur Rohaan usko Rokk Raha hota hai par woh jaane lagti hai itne main uska dupata ka aik kouna Rohaan k haath main reh jata hai ... aur Rijja Rohaan ka haath pakar rahi hoti hai ... Ammar Rijja aur Rohaan k beech main ajata hai ... Khamoshi chaa jati hai ... aur Sheesha Toot jata hai

[Coming This JUNE ... Written By Airy Princess ... SAlAAM PAKISTAN]

So ab pehli story katam na

dis a new whole different story

Gr8 !!!

U'r story was excellent really appreciated

i really the song u used 2 introduce the 4 characters

so Khushi is Rijja

Very Nice new story

Yeh kya mein 2 pyar karnay walon k beech mein aa gaya

Befikar raho end tak mein he tum dono ki shaadi karwaoon ga

yep yara atlast movie ka end ho gya hai pehli waali I wrote 35 scenes for it.
yep this story was gud I knw ... well hope for the best for next
Thankyou for liking it n appreciating my work

Thankyou So Much for liking the Idea
yep khushi i s Rijja n yara u will also play a character in my movie your name will be Rania ... thek hai k nahi thek

tum ne kya end tak molvi bann jana hai

Awww... chooo cute naa..

Amaizing Story AP, great....

aur Songs is soooo beautiful. Miss abbasi ne sahi kaha.. buhat achay song se introduction karwaya

aur wo jo Sheeshay walay scene. to buhat he aalaa..

wo meko ek song yaad ayaa...

chaahaa tha buhat
na chahein tujhe
chahat pe magar
aitibaaar nahiiii

.....

well I am damn sure u people will love ur characters ... Its my promise .... KKYB was a totally Emotional saga while Salaam Pakistan has different colours of life ... wohi ju ajkal pak main chal raha hai ... young generation k saath hota kya hai ... its also a true story with true incidents par mene jinki ye story hai real lyf main unn se poch kar iska end change kar dia hai ... so hope for the best ... aur ganay tou aaise aaise hon ge k pocho matt hahahaha sop g hero tou khushi hua abb dekhte hain heroine kese khush hoti hain

[b]aaawwww.......sad ending....................given its a true story, shouldnt make fun of it. its really sad indeed. prayers for the peace of both.

very well handled. congrats AP for having one milestone achieved. u r always welcome. u deserve all appreciation. i believe new movie shall rock too. stay happy. love.. take care.
good luck for new cast .... time pr aya jaya krna shooting pr

p.s: nemo .. kahan hai nemo .... hey nemo contact me in any way.

Yep!! wel it was worth all the time & effort
u Welcome

Acha wow dats gr8 can't wait for my Entry

Ofcourse me neh sahi kaha

yep u shouldnt make fun of them cuz these 2 chracters are very close to me so ... nemo aati hai hamesha scene par rep karne janab ... Thankyou Yara ... It took a year to complete it ... fishon ... Thanks again for ur co-operation ... hope the next ones will be rocking u 2 take carez

it will be in first scene

wohaaa AP great great

but kuch kami hai

aisa kiu mien kahan hun ..

acha meri surprise wali entry


wo wo!!


CHALO BEST OF LUCK!!!

MUVIE MAZEY KI LAGRAHI HAI BAS CHETI CHETI STRT KARO

Welcome


gr8!!

kammii hai....

hehe, wo ji abi to bas movie ka trailor laga hai,,,

haaan ji, SA ki surprise entry ka intezaar rahay gaa...

i think abi us scene ki shooting chal rai hai,

haha,

waaqie AP, bas jaldi jaldi start karo movie........

SALAM PAKISTAN

aauuuuuuu i c.......

jaldi se movie start karoo intezaar rahe ga sab ki First Entry ka.........

kaisay kaisay hoti hai........

hadh ho gayi yar teri tay tere tidd ch koi gal vi nahi rehni kaddi

acha tou ghabra nahi first scene main u ki entry kar dongi ... ager u ko thora sa ghalt banati tu ne fair rouna tha

islye sabar kar okay

thankyou for the luck

buss g har movie ki tarhan ye bhi Friday ko hi release hogi Salaaaaaaammmmmm Pakistan

hey Nice Sigi

G hero g appse dates tou le lein hain main ne

baki sab se bhi le li hain tou w8 kesa phir

Bus dua karo k sab sahi ho ameen

Funeral Of Manaab

sab Manaab ka janaza le kar jaate hain aur ouliyaa durr khara sab se khamoosh uss ko dafan hote dekh raha hota hai ... Log uss par bechargi ka izhar kar rahe hote hain par ussko aesa maloom hota hai jese usko kuch sunayi nahi de raha...woh apne kamre main akar baithta hai aur apne room ka darwaza banc kar deta hai ... uss andhere main bhi usko Manaab ki jhalak nazar arahi hoti hai ... uski tasveerein deewaron par sajji hoti hain aur uss ki ankhon main dekh rahi hoti hain...usski hansi ki khanak uss k kano main gonj rahi hoti hai ... marne se pehle k uss k alfaaz uss main gonj rahe hote hain
Manaab: Main marna nahi chahti Walee ... main marna nahi chahti ...
woh apni ankhein band karta hai aur sou jata hai ...

Ouliyaa: Kahan ho Manaab ... dekhou main tumhara intezaar nahi kar sakta
Manaab: Acha ju main ne tumhara intezaar kia ...
Ouliyaa: Kuch na Kaho abb hum aik hain ... aur aik dousre k saath hain [ussky honton par haath rakhta hai aur uski ankhein band karta hai aur usko aik jagah le jata hai]
Manaab: Kahan le kar ja rahe ho mujhey
Ouliyaa: Aao tou sahi [Manaab ki ankhon par se haath uthata hai]
Manaab: ... yeh Humara ghar hai ouliyaa .... mein ne apne khwabon ko paanay ki itni koshish ki
Ouliyaa: aur humare ALLAH ne humarey sab khwaab poray kar diye Manaab ... Humara chota sa ghar aur uss k agey pyara sa bagh yehi khwaab tha na humara ...

jahan woh aik dousre ko apna ghar dikhane main magan thay wahan aik aam insaan ki ankh k lye kuch na tha ... unka ghar woh 2 qabrien thien ju wahan thein jahan kabhie unho ne ghar banane ka socha tha ... duniya ne unko wese tou saath na kia haan Maar k aik saath dafn karne ka ehsaan kar dia unpar ... aur wohi unki khushi ka sabab bana ...han ... Kabhie Kabhie Yun Bhi ...
[Aapp sab ko batana chahongi jinho ne iss kahani ko perha k yeh aik sachi kahani thi kisi k pyar ki jiska anjaam yehi hua ... par haqeeqat main inn 2no main se aik insaan abhi b zinda hai aur maut k intezaar main hai k kab uski sansien khatm hon aur woh apne pyar ko paa lay]

THE END

Written by: AIry PrINCESS
...

I didn't read it all well all the red bit just the new story ...But the last bit is really sad :(
But i thing i wanted to ask jiski abi death huwi hei yani ki Manaab his partner was Quliyaa right?? n now dat they have passed away dey have met eachother yani ki after death ? i didn't read all dis frm the start jus the ones u used 2 PM me islliye i'm not dat up to date

It's a very nice story

hehehe, koi nai.. feeer kiii hoyaaa...... tidd apna apna... :P

achaa naaa, bas jaldi jaldi Friday aaayy bassss

Thnxz sweety i u'r Avi

Nopes M.A I gave a philosophical touch in the last C dear Manaab ki death hoti hai n ouliyaa uss k funeral k baad akar kamre main baitha n he died as u didnt read the last episodes ... ouliya had heart problem ... so in the end they both died ... yeh tou tha ju kahani main ne likhi par yeh kahani jin logon ki hai aur true hai unn 2no lovers main se aik ki death hui thi n 2nd k lye lyf maut se bhi batar ho gayi thi got it now

yaar ajj friday hai

hahaa,

tussi kenddii oo tey mann leendayy aaan ji.....

aakher Hamaray Character mei JAAN to aap k DIALOGUES se he paray gi naa....

G janab apka chracter aur meki movie rocking hain

Ji, Inshallah sab sahi aur SALAMAT ho ga

aaryyy wo wala salamat nai.. :P

bassssssss ab intezaaar nai hoo raaa bas jaldi jaldi jaldi..... Friday aayyy

balke yaar Friday to aa gaya hai, 12 bajj gae hein

lolz tum kya star plus k dramas k aik character jesa kehte ho ... "arey woh wala nahi woh"

kal jab app aaogey tou app manzar-e-aam par achuke ho gey

ohhh yh i shud have read dem properly
i get it now
A True Love Story
Nice

Welcome

its ok ... thankyou once again

Loo kar loo galll....

mei to STAR PLUS nai daikhtaa.. mei LARKAAA hooon ji........

Ahemm Ahemm..... bas kal mei Suited Booted hoo k HC pe aaon ga....

hain kiu kiu kiu miene kia kardia

kia ghalt banati?

chalo ji kal friday hai tana tana

hain tou kya larke star + nahi dekhte

naha bhi aana

Thankyou so much Janu sis

buss abb 2nd movie iss k opposite sumjho :p

[b]so that is the end two lives ...........but not the end of love
we often wish for the good things but the world and fate are also facts in our lives and every thing is not happened like we plan or wish for.

congrats to writer for successfully completing it although we are sad to read the sad end of it
as a whole nice effort AP

Thankyou so much Sir G ... zaroor parheyega ... Salaaam Pakistannnnnnnnnnnn

rula dia yaar tumne dil ko lag gaya end mere.. sachi rouna agaya