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Leo

Jun 22 2008, 04:21 PM

Sometime I feel you so deep

Sometime I feel you so deep
even! when I try to sleep
I feel you, just around me
silent as a night!!
whispering as the sea.

I hope all of you would like my poetry and reply

Aawaz

Jun 22 2008, 06:50 PM

QUOTE(Leo @ Jun 22 2008, 11:21 AM)

Sometime I feel you so deep

Sometime I feel you so deep
even! when I try to sleep
I feel you, just around me
silent as a night!!
whispering as the sea.

I hope all of you would like my poetry and reply

zabardast

*Life*

Jun 22 2008, 07:46 PM

beautiful

Masoom_Pari

Jun 23 2008, 02:38 PM

QUOTE(Leo @ Jun 22 2008, 04:21 PM)

Sometime I feel you so deep

Sometime I feel you so deep
even! when I try to sleep
I feel you, just around me
silent as a night!!
whispering as the sea.

I hope all of you would like my poetry and reply

Woww

Nice one

expectations always hurts

Jun 23 2008, 03:34 PM

fantastic....very very NICE

Leo

Jun 24 2008, 10:34 AM

thanks to all of you for ur appreciations

*DhanaK*

Jun 25 2008, 10:15 AM

short and sweet
really nice leo

* SOZ *

Jun 25 2008, 05:38 PM

Gr8,

keep writing n keep sharing...