12:00 am CITY HOSPITAL

AZAAN:DOCTOR please bataiye mere DAD theek to hojainge nah..

AZAAN'S MOTHER:aap kuch bolte kyon nahi hein DOCTOR!

DOCTOR:dekhein ap log ALLAH pe bharosa rakhein zindagi or maut osi ke hath mein hai

DOCTOR:sar pe bohat gehri chotein aai hein main kuch nahi keh sakta filhal..

Abhi DOCTOR yehi baat karahe hote hein
ke NURSE bhaagti huwi aati hai...

NURSE:DOCTOR jaldi chaleye..patient ki condition critical hogai hai

AZAAN'S MOTHER:AZAANNnnn....Kya keh rahe hein yeh,kya huwa hai tumhare DAD ko.

AZAAN:nahi MOM DAD ko kuch nahi hogaa ap please hosla rakhiye..

DOCTOR tezi se room mein
chala jaata hai jabke AZAAN
I.C.U ke bahar k sheeshe se andar
dekhne lagta hai..
thori der baad nurse bahar aati hai.

NURSE:Apka naam hi AZAAN hai?

AZAAN:yES...kheriat hai nah mere DAD ko kya huwa hai

NURSE:onki halat bohat kharab hogai hai,woh baar baar apka naam lerahe hein plz andar chaliye.

AZAAN andar dakhil hotaa hai
oske DAD bed pe lete hote hein
or chaaro tarf nazrein ghuma rahe hote hein..
aisa lagraha hotaa hai jese onhe kisi cheez ka
intezaar ho.

AZAAN:DAD...

AZAAN ki awaaz pe woh oski tarf
nazrein uthaa kar dekhte hein
or mayoosi se muskurane ki
koshish karte hein..
sath hi ishare se osse apne paas
bethne ke leye kehte hein.

AZAAN:yeh sab kyon huwa DAD..

AZAAN:aap bilkul theek hojainge ham apko bohat jald yahan se lejainge

AZAAN'S FATHER:AZAAN... beta main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon

AZAAN:ji DAD kahiye..

AZAAN'S FATHER:mujhe yeh mehsoos horaha hai beta ke ab main zinda nahi bachoonga

AZAAN:kesi baatein karahe hein aap..kuch nahi hoga apko

AZAAN'S FATHER:dekho beta maut barhaq hai jo insan dunia mein aata hai
osse ALLAH ke paas laut kar bhi jaana hota hai,jab ek insan dunia mein ata hai
oska dil nahi lagraha hotaa kyonke yeh dunia oske leye new hoti hai par ahista ahista
woh isme adjust hone lagta hai,yahan pe ossey kai rishte milte hein or woh onhi mein
kho jaata hai MAA,BAAP,BEHEN,BHAI or phir jab oski AULAAD hoti hai
tab woh apne apko mukammal samajne lagta hai..

insan ko sirf yehi nahi kai manzilein tey karni hoti hein
kuch bhi asaan nahi hotaa par in mushkilo se haar nahi manni chahiye
jitna ALLAH ke kareeb hojaoge khushiyan tumhare kareeb hojaingi..
mujhe muaaf kardena beta agar main tumhe kuch dey nahi paya hoon.

AZAAN:nahi DAD apne toh meri har khushi puri ki hai..ghalti se bhi aisa mat kahein

AZAAN'S FATHER:ab zindagi ke is mor pe main chahta hoon ke tum aagey barho
or zindagi ko samjho iski haqeeqat ko jaano,or ALLAH ke kareeb hojao
meri rooh ko tab hi sakoon milega jab main tumhein surkhuru dekhoonga
meri ek baat yaad rakhna AZAAN..zindagi 1 baar hi milti hai
isme zaroor kuch aisa karke jaana chahiye jisey kisi dosre ko faida miley..
apni or apni MAA ka khayal rakhna..
apne naam ka matlab samjho beta
or neki ki tarf maail hojao..


Bamushkil woh yeh line
puri karpaate hein..
aisa lagraha hotaa hai jese ke
woh yehi kuch kehne ke leye
apni sansein roke huwe theh...
tabhi AZAAN ki ammi bhi room mein
enter hoti hein lekin tab tak shayad boht der hogai hoti hai..

ACHANAK se heart beats gardish karne lagti hein..

AZAAN:DOCTORRRRRRRRRR....PLEASE! dekhiye nah DAD ko kya huwa hai...

Or phir ek dum se MONITOR pe sakoot taari hojata hai
heart beats ruk jaati hein..

DOCTOR:bete ur father IS NO MORE..

DOCTOR:SORRY!

AZAAN ko aisa mehsoos hota hai jese
yeh pal yahin ruk gaya hai,sirf woh hai
or bas har taraf tareeki hi tareeki hai..
koi awaaz nahi sunai derahi hoti
jabke AZAAN ki AMMI zor zor se
rorahi hoti hein..tabhi DOCTOR onko
bahar lejate hein..

1 MONTH LATER^ AZAAN'S HOME

PHONE ki ghanti bajne lagti hai
toh AZAAN ki ammi apne kamre
se nikal kar bahar aati hein..

AZAAN'S MOTHER:HELLO! Assalam-o-alekum..

NAJMA:hello bhabhi...main najma baat karahi hoon

AZAAN'S MOTHER:kesi ho NAJMA..

NAJMA:sab kheriat hai ap sunaiye kesi hein or AZAAN ab kesa hai?

AZAAN'S MOTHER:bata nahi sakti ke kitni takleef hoti hai osey aise dekh ke..

NAJMA:main samaj sakti hoon bhabhi..
apne osey kisi doctor ko dikhaya?

AZAAN'S MOTHER:woh chalne ko razi ho tab nah,jese ek sakoot taari hogaya hai ospe
kuch nahi kehta bas khamoshi se khalaa mein ghoorta rehta hai
boht koshish karti hoon ke college jaaye par nahi manta
1 maheena hogaya hai ab toh imtehaan bhi nazdeek agaye hein..
par shayad haqeeqat woh qabool nahi karpaya ab tak shock mein hai.

NAJMA:ALLAH sab theek kardega bhabhi ap pareshan mat hon,apne os sey baat karne ki koshish ki..

AZAAN'S MOTHER:maine kai baar baat karni chahi par woh kuch nahi sunna chahta hai

NAJMA:acha ab apne aagey kya socha hai?

AZAAN'S MOTHER:bas NAJMA mainne sab ALLAH pe chor diya hai ab wohi koi raasta dikhaega..

NAJMA:beshak bhabhi ALLAH ke har kaam mein maslihat hoti hai
or aap dekhiyega ek din hamara AZAAN bilkul theek hojaega..
shayad kuch waqt chahiye osey...

11:00 pm SOPHIA GIRL'S HOSTEL

RIDA:arey ESHAL tum chat pe ho or main tumhe neeche dhondhti phir rahi thi..

RIDA:aise kya dekh rahi ho asmaan mein?

ESHAL:woh dekh rahi ho RIDA..

RIDA:kya...

ESHAL:CHAAND ko...kitna mukammal or khubsurat lagraha haina

RIDA:haan!

ESHAL:tumhein patah hai chaudhwi ki raat ko agar CHAAND ko dekh kar
ALLAH se dua mangi jaaye toh woh zaroor qabool hoti hai..

RIDA:achaw...sach

ESHAL:haan

RIDA:toh tumne kuch manga?

ESHAL:nahi abhi tak toh nahi..

RIDA:chalo sath mein mangte hein theek hai nah..

ESHAL:OK..

DONO ankhein band karleti hein..

ESHAL:Aye ALLAH meri zindagi kitni ajeeb hai nah,
samaj nahi aata ke meri zindagi ka maqsad kya hai
main nahi janti ke main kyon banai gayi hoon
par kabhi ek ehsaas sa hotaa hai jese ke kuch khaas hai
jo mere leye hai...bas is chaand ko dekh ke
main apse yehi dua mangti hoon ke
meri zindagi ko ek nai raah ek nai simt
dikhaidein taake khushiyon se hamkanar hosakoon..

8:30 am MAIN ROAD

Aaj subah se mausam bohat
khushgawar hotaa hai,
halki halki boonda bandi horahi hoti hai
or FAISLABAD ka husn purey
urooj pe hotaa hai..
darakht,sarkein ek naya hi
manzar pesh karahi hoti hein..
aise mein ESHAL jaldi se
van mein charh jaati hai..

ESHAL:kheriat hai aaj itni der kyon hogai

SILA:haan woh uncle ko aaj nikalne mein der hogai thi thori..

ESHAL:mausam kitna acha horaha haina..

SILA:hmmmm! ek dum romantic type.

ESHAL:OH! romance ki nani..aj test hai oski fikr hai kuch?

SILA:hahaha..woh sab dekha jaega

SILA:or wese bhi tum toh mere barabar mein hi hoti ho nah

ESHAL:yani ke saaf saaf meri copy ka program hai janab ka :P

SILA:aisa hi kuch samaj lo :D

ESHAL:acha picnic ka kuch deside huwa?

SILA:haan saturday ka final huwa hai..

ESHAL:jaa kahan rahe hein ham

SILA:i guess koi nai jagah hai wahan pe JHEEL bhi hai and FOREST bhi

ESHAL:ahan! phir toh yeh ek yaadgar trip rahegi..

TO BE CONTINUE..

yeah yeah 4th episode bi lag gai woo hoo

very emotional........
ALLAH ab isko hidayat de

PHONE ki ghanti bajne lagti hai
toh AZAAN ki ammi apne kamre
se nikal kar bahar aati hein..

AZAAN'S MOTHER:HELLO! Assalam-o-alekum..

NAJMA:hello bhabhi...main najma baat karahi hoon

AZAAN'S MOTHER:kesi ho NAJMA..

NAJMA:sab kheriat hai ap sunaiye kesi hein or AZAAN ab kesa hai?

AZAAN'S MOTHER:bata nahi sakti ke kitni takleef hoti hai osey aise dekh ke..

NAJMA:main samaj sakti hoon bhabhi..
apne osey kisi doctor ko dikhaya?

AZAAN'S MOTHER:woh chalne ko razi ho tab nah,jese ek sakoot taari hogaya hai ospe
kuch nahi kehta bas khamoshi se khalaa mein ghoorta rehta hai
boht koshish karti hoon ke college jaaye par nahi manta
1 maheena hogaya hai ab toh imtehaan bhi nazdeek agaye hein..
par shayad haqeeqat woh qabool nahi karpaya ab tak shock mein hai.

NAJMA:ALLAH sab theek kardega bhabhi ap pareshan mat hon,apne os sey baat karne ki koshish ki..

AZAAN'S MOTHER:maine kai baar baat karni chahi par woh kuch nahi sunna chahta hai

NAJMA:acha ab apne aagey kya socha hai?

AZAAN'S MOTHER:bas NAJMA mainne sab ALLAH pe chor diya hai ab wohi koi raasta dikhaega..

NAJMA:beshak bhabhi ALLAH ke har kaam mein maslihat hoti hai
or aap dekhiyega ek din hamara AZAAN bilkul theek hojaega..
shayad kuch waqt chahiye osey...

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umm pehla jhatka AZAN ko lag gaya mere khayal se ab ahista ahista teek ho jayega...........
ESHAL hai na

12:00 am CITY HOSPITAL
Very sAd emotional sCene



1 MONTH LATER^ AZAAN'S HOME
Bechara always khush rehta ta batameez type ka ta Ab baat b nahi karta :(

Nice episode once again

12:00 am CITY HOSPITAL

...

11:00 pm SOPHIA GIRL'S HOSTEL

RIDA:arey ESHAL tum chat pe ho or main tumhe neeche dhondhti phir rahi thi..
[b]meri tarah chat per jane ki shoqen
RIDA:aise kya dekh rahi ho asmaan mein?
kawa
ESHAL:woh dekh rahi ho RIDA..
chand
RIDA:kya...

ESHAL:CHAAND ko...kitna mukammal or khubsurat lagraha haina
see!! kinni intelligent hun mai
RIDA:haan!

ESHAL:tumhein patah hai chaudhwi ki raat ko agar CHAAND ko dekh kar
ALLAH se dua mangi jaaye toh woh zaroor qabool hoti hai..
wow chaudweena ka chand
RIDA:achaw...sach

ESHAL:haan

RIDA:toh tumne kuch manga?

ESHAL:nahi abhi tak toh nahi..

RIDA:chalo sath mein mangte hein theek hai nah..

ESHAL:OK..

DONO ankhein band karleti hein..

ESHAL:Aye ALLAH meri zindagi kitni ajeeb hai nah,
samaj nahi aata ke meri zindagi ka maqsad kya hai
main nahi janti ke main kyon banai gayi hoon
par kabhi ek ehsaas sa hotaa hai jese ke kuch khaas hai
jo mere leye hai...bas is chaand ko dekh ke
main apse yehi dua mangti hoon ke
meri zindagi ko ek nai raah ek nai simt
dikhaidein taake khushiyon se hamkanar hosakoon..
ya ALLAH!! aj kal me yeh dua mangti hun me bore na i want somethin new so kuch nai rah n simt



TO BE CONTINUE.. [/b]




nice!!!
ASHAL ko dekh ker umm muje apna hi khayal ata hai yeh sensible hai aur me nai

ahan nice going classi good job

mara ahsharwar u k saat always yee wla

aww becharey father..

pe khushi puraa filmi tha wo scene thoda reality lao baki sab fitoo hai storii

OR HOYE TRIP MERA SIXTH SENSE KEHRAHA HAI
K UDHER AZAAN BHI HOGAA
LALALALA AM TO0O GUD



VERY NICE ONCE AGAIN KHUSHI ...BEST OF LUCK

12:00 am CITY HOSPITAL

8:30 am MAIN ROAD

Aaj subah se mausam bohat
khushgawar hotaa hai,
halki halki boonda bandi horahi hoti hai
or FAISLABAD ka husn purey
urooj pe hotaa hai..
darakht,sarkein ek naya hi
manzar pesh karahi hoti hein..
aise mein ESHAL jaldi se
van mein charh jaati hai..
[b]umm barish
mera khi
ESHAL:kheriat hai aaj itni der kyon hogai

SILA:haan woh uncle ko aaj nikalne mein der hogai thi thori..

ESHAL:mausam kitna acha horaha haina..
barish ju hoyin.......i can imagine
SILA:hmmmm! ek dum romantic type.

ESHAL:OH! romance ki nani..aj test hai oski fikr hai kuch?
yeh kam az kam me nai muje apne tests ki koi fiker nai hoti me bindas bagir tyri k chali jati hun
SILA:hahaha..woh sab dekha jaega

SILA:or wese bhi tum toh mere barabar mein hi hoti ho nah

ESHAL:yani ke saaf saaf meri copy ka program hai janab ka :P
hahahaha
SILA:aisa hi kuch samaj lo :D

ESHAL:acha picnic ka kuch deside huwa?

SILA:haan saturday ka final huwa hai..

ESHAL:jaa kahan rahe hein ham

muje bi le chalo
SILA:i guess koi nai jagah hai wahan pe JHEEL bhi hai and FOREST bhi

ESHAL:ahan! phir toh yeh ek yaadgar trip rahegi..
forest.interesting muje tu wahan hero se ahem i mean AZAN SE takrao hoga

TO BE CONTINUE.. [/b]

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phanku yara

waise iska matbal kia hua

he hey!!
mere part per koi comment nai
t\dis is not fair na SK

nice going khushi.. but words thore halke use karoo.. i mean easy urdu.. not like sakoot etc...
kafi thrilling hia.. am waiting for Azaan to get better soon n accept the reality..

is ka matlab hai keh mera badbu dar socks

good going khushi

pori tu nahi perhi but jitni perhi interesting hai

ALLAH mujha pori perhna ki hidayat da

acha.... Ummm u'r scene was good too

always assman ko deikh kar baatein karti hoon

koi new baat nahi hei na

aww itne pyare nice commentz

me aake reply deti hoon

jaldi na ana

ewwwwwwwww ganda

ab is ka matlab banta hi yeh ha tu what can i do

ji nai itna ganda matlab nai banta hoga

yes

or friday ko 5th lagaoongi

Ameen

u can ask from khushi

waoh nice comments

v.nice dialogue delivery eshal

thanks for liking kuriye

u r trying to say ashirwad

Velcome

thanko shanko sweeto

maza ayega

woh word life ne bole te khushi ne nai

Velcome Sweety

jis na bhi bola hai

what can i do

u danco

ata nahi hai

phir bi danco

wohi to

uspe bhi barabar ki mehnat ki

SKKKKKKKKK

yaar thore difficult words use karne parte hein na

story mein jaan dalne ke liye wese me ko ye asaan laga thah

but i will try my best to use simple stuff thankz alot for liking

aap araam se read karein fikar not

and thanks alot for reading & liking :ok

Hayeee

Mere Abba jee

Khusi men tumheen nahe choronga

naheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

asa nahe hosakta ..... abba jeeeeeeee

men kisi say bhe baat nahr karo abb