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Shidatain Ishq ki mehraj hua karti hain 
bohat khoob likha hai
Thanks for sharing
Khush rehain
bohat khoob likha hai
Thanks for sharing
Khush rehain
QUOTE(Dezire @ Jul 4 2008, 06:43 AM) [snapback]2957037[/snapback]
kucch deekh hi nayee riya hai
poora parh loon pehlay
bohat khoob...i wonder the way how writers play with Words! it is just awsome n grateful!
QUOTE(KnOwN_StRaNgEr @ Jul 4 2008, 11:53 AM) [snapback]2957039[/snapback]
Shidatain Ishq ki mehraj hua karti hain
bohat khoob likha hai
Thanks for sharing
Khush rehain
bohat khoob likha hai
Thanks for sharing
Khush rehain
Pasandeedgi k liay shukriya janab
QUOTE(shafaq @ Jul 5 2008, 08:51 AM) [snapback]2957824[/snapback]
poora parh loon pehlay
aur kitnay din mein perha j'ay ga
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jul 6 2008, 12:41 PM) [snapback]2959393[/snapback]
bohat khoob...i wonder the way how writers play with Words! it is just awsome n grateful!
Yahee to kareegarri hai janab writers ki
acha likha hay Atif bhai nay
jazbaat ka izhar bohat khobi say kiya hay
jazbaat ka izhar bohat khobi say kiya hay
QUOTE(Kashif @ Jul 15 2008, 12:45 PM) [snapback]2976761[/snapback]
acha likha hay Atif bhai nay
jazbaat ka izhar bohat khobi say kiya hay
jazbaat ka izhar bohat khobi say kiya hay
QUOTE(Dezire @ Jul 13 2008, 07:42 PM) [snapback]2973775[/snapback]
Yahee to kareegarri hai janab writers ki
bilkul talent never hides unless chupa k na rakhna ho to
QUOTE(aaminah @ Jul 19 2008, 12:57 PM) [snapback]2981786[/snapback]
bilkul talent never hides unless chupa k na rakhna ho to
lakin kya bela bewafa ha
QUOTE(tension_4u @ Jul 20 2008, 02:33 AM) [snapback]2982958[/snapback]
lakin kya bela bewafa ha
Majboor ho sakti hai baywafa nahein
Baaz cheezain qareeb say wazeh dikhayee nahi dete hain, door ho jain to nazar anay lagti hain magar tab tak bohat der ho chuki hotihay..
Such ..!
Thnx for sharing such a beautiful piece
Such ..!
Thnx for sharing such a beautiful piece
QUOTE(Encrypted @ Aug 18 2008, 07:36 PM) [snapback]3023707[/snapback]
Baaz cheezain qareeb say wazeh dikhayee nahi dete hain, door ho jain to nazar anay lagti hain magar tab tak bohat der ho chuki hotihay..
Such ..!
Thnx for sharing such a beautiful piece
Such ..!
Thnx for sharing such a beautiful piece
Very True
Shukriya
QUOTE(Dezire @ Jul 13 2008, 02:39 PM) [snapback]2973774[/snapback]
aur kitnay din mein perha j'ay ga
main to bhool hi gayi thee ke yahan mera kaam baqi hai
padhnay ka
QUOTE(*DhanaK* @ Aug 21 2008, 08:27 AM) [snapback]3026164[/snapback]
main to bhool hi gayi thee ke yahan mera kaam baqi hai
padhnay ka
padhnay ka
Issay Adhura He Rehnay Dain
wohi mohabat ki jhooti khane ?
QUOTE(king_maker @ Sep 13 2008, 03:26 PM) [snapback]3049915[/snapback]
wohi mohabat ki jhooti khane ?
Kahani aksar jhoot he hoti hai
QUOTE(Dezire @ Jul 4 2008, 11:43 AM) [snapback]2957037[/snapback]
there are so many things which i dont understand and which are contradictory to each other in this short love story.
QUOTE(~perfect stranger~ @ Sep 14 2008, 05:30 PM) [snapback]3051047[/snapback]
there are so many things which i dont understand and which are contradictory to each other in this short love story.
Samajh aa jati to theek thaa.. ab nahein aae to aur bhi ziada theek hai
QUOTE(Saadi @ Sep 14 2008, 11:29 PM) [snapback]3051495[/snapback]
Samajh aa jati to theek thaa.. ab nahein aae to aur bhi ziada theek hai
agar ap ko samajh nahi ayi to samajh len kisi se. ap ko samajh aje gi kahan galti he
mohabat b kaha'n sachi hoti hay ?
QUOTE(king_maker @ Sep 15 2008, 03:01 PM) [snapback]3052023[/snapback]
mohabat b kaha'n sachi hoti hay ?
kya pata
haan aaj poora parh liya aisa huwa ke idhar ana hi naheen huwa tha kab say,sirf ftm ya ab sos
khair parh liya poora
don't know what to say
bela pehlay jaisi naheen rahee
iski bahot see wujoohaat ho saktee hain
khair parh liya poora
don't know what to say
bela pehlay jaisi naheen rahee
iski bahot see wujoohaat ho saktee hain
QUOTE(*DhanaK* @ Sep 17 2008, 11:48 PM) [snapback]3055369[/snapback]
haan aaj poora parh liya aisa huwa ke idhar ana hi naheen huwa tha kab say,sirf ftm ya ab sos
khair parh liya poora
don't know what to say
bela pehlay jaisi naheen rahee
iski bahot see wujoohaat ho saktee hain
khair parh liya poora
don't know what to say
bela pehlay jaisi naheen rahee
iski bahot see wujoohaat ho saktee hain
Drama hai sab... bas haqeeqat say qareeb tar hona chahiay
QUOTE(Dezire @ Jul 4 2008, 11:43 AM) [snapback]2957037[/snapback]
QUOTE(Mohsina @ Sep 20 2008, 11:49 AM) [snapback]3058286[/snapback]
nice sharing.waqai mohabbat badlay mein aitabar aur izhar dono mangti hain.
Love is all about giving. No badla in mohabat.
QUOTE(Saadi @ Sep 18 2008, 12:23 AM) [snapback]3055433[/snapback]
Drama hai sab... bas haqeeqat say qareeb tar hona chahiay
drama ?
QUOTE(~perfect stranger~ @ Sep 21 2008, 12:37 AM) [snapback]3058886[/snapback]
Love is all about giving. No badla in mohabat.
no stranger u r wrong.main ne ye kisi ka qoul dohraya hai,naam yaad nahin aarah.lakin mohabbat aitabar aur izhaar mangti hai.haan badlay main faqt mohabbat nahin mangti,isliye k koi b mohabbat karta hai tijarat nahin jo len den karay.QUOTE(Mohsina @ Sep 21 2008, 03:02 PM) [snapback]3059518[/snapback]
no stranger u r wrong.main ne ye kisi ka qoul dohraya hai,naam yaad nahin aarah.lakin mohabbat aitabar aur izhaar mangti hai.haan badlay main faqt mohabbat nahin mangti,isliye k koi b mohabbat karta hai tijarat nahin jo len den karay.
Mohabat to naam hi aitebar ka hai Mohsina ji. doosri baat mukhtalif logon ki mukhtalif thinking mikhtalif approach hoti hai main nahin samajhta k mohabat in return kuch bhi mangti hai, agar mohabat hai.
QUOTE(~perfect stranger~ @ Sep 22 2008, 02:18 PM) [snapback]3060543[/snapback]
Mohabat to naam hi aitebar ka hai Mohsina ji. doosri baat mukhtalif logon ki mukhtalif thinking mikhtalif approach hoti hai main nahin samajhta k mohabat in return kuch bhi mangti hai, agar mohabat hai.
exactly.her kisi ki apni apni thinking hoti hai.magar ajkal aisi shaffaf mohabbat sirf padnay ko milti hai.21 century mein to iss pak jazbay ki dhajiya uda di gai hain.mohabbat k naam pe dhoka detay hain log ,aitabar to kya dengany.
Atif Saeed ka HC id kya hai ?
QUOTE(silenteyes @ Sep 24 2008, 08:15 AM) [snapback]3062679[/snapback]
Atif Saeed ka HC id kya hai ?
tanha musafir
Mere andr Sirf Tum Ho
Luvly sharing saadi siso
Luvly sharing saadi siso
QUOTE (MidniteMoon @ Oct 16 2008, 03:43 PM) 
Mere andr Sirf Tum Ho
Luvly sharing saadi siso
Luvly sharing saadi siso
MOhabbat bas aisi he hoti hay ......hur waqt izhaar ko tarsi se.....umeed aur naumeedi ki kashti ki sawaar hoti hay.magar aik baat toh hay yeh ragOn mey basti hay......aur zinda rehti hay.
waisay sadi yah doonoon koon haain? Beela n Atif??
n us bacharay ka letter kahan say chouri kia hay?
n us bacharay ka letter kahan say chouri kia hay?
QUOTE (sahera @ Oct 18 2008, 06:39 PM)
MOhabbat bas aisi he hoti hay ......hur waqt izhaar ko tarsi se.....umeed aur naumeedi ki kashti ki sawaar hoti hay.magar aik baat toh hay yeh ragOn mey basti hay......aur zinda rehti hay.
haan yaar kuch to hota he hoga .. tabhi to itna shore kartay hein muhabbat k naam per log
QUOTE (tihami @ Oct 18 2008, 11:17 PM)
waisay sadi yah doonoon koon haain? Beela n Atif??
n us bacharay ka letter kahan say chouri kia hay?
n us bacharay ka letter kahan say chouri kia hay?
sochnay ki baat hai k aakhir hein kon yeh donon ...
aap he kar lain yeh kaam bhi .. u knw mein nay kabhi socha nahein na
QUOTE (Saadi @ Oct 18 2008, 08:40 PM)
sochnay ki baat hai k aakhir hein kon yeh donon ...
aap he kar lain yeh kaam bhi .. u knw mein nay kabhi socha nahein na
aap he kar lain yeh kaam bhi .. u knw mein nay kabhi socha nahein na
wohi tu main kah raha houn k ab tu yah kaam start kar do
QUOTE (Saadi @ Oct 18 2008, 08:38 PM)
haan yaar kuch to hota he hoga .. tabhi to itna shore kartay hein muhabbat k naam per log
shoor......haan shoor bilkul waisa jaisa tanhayee mey hota hay ......ya phir us raat jab poora chand aur samunder ki baycheni huwaoN ko apnay karb ki dastaan sunaa rahe hoti hay. aur phr cheekh cheekh kay thak haar kar khamosh hojata hay.....chand ahista ahista din ba din nazaron se oojhal hona shuru hojata hay aur phir kuch dinoo kay baad poora jalwagar hota hay. naye imtihaan lenay
QUOTE (tihami @ Oct 19 2008, 12:51 AM)
wohi tu main kah raha houn k ab tu yah kaam start kar do
kyon? Ab koi behtari ki umeed to nahein lag gaee mujh say??
QUOTE (sahera @ Oct 19 2008, 01:24 PM)
shoor......haan shoor bilkul waisa jaisa tanhayee mey hota hay ......ya phir us raat jab poora chand aur samunder ki baycheni huwaoN ko apnay karb ki dastaan sunaa rahe hoti hay. aur phr cheekh cheekh kay thak haar kar khamosh hojata hay.....chand ahista ahista din ba din nazaron se oojhal hona shuru hojata hay aur phir kuch dinoo kay baad poora jalwagar hota hay. naye imtihaan lenay
khair..
QUOTE (Saadi @ Oct 19 2008, 10:36 AM)
kyon? Ab koi behtari ki umeed to nahein lag gaee mujh say??
na ji aisee umeeed tu rakhnee hi nahen chahyya, jis k pora hounay ki umeed na hu.....
waisay aik baat hay muhabbat ki saree kahanyaan aik jaise hi lagtee hain... when I read this I thought k aisa hi kuch kaheen aur say bhi sun/parh chuka houn,,,,,,,,,,,
QUOTE (tihami @ Oct 19 2008, 02:41 PM)
na ji aisee umeeed tu rakhnee hi nahen chahyya, jis k pora hounay ki umeed na hu.....
phir sochnay ki baat kar kaisy li aap nay ?
Assalam o alikum Friendz!
Arsay baad yahan aana hua aur yeah daikh ker acha lagga k mairi iss kawish ko aap logooN ne itna sera'aha aur pasand kia. Jo sawalaat aap k zehan main haiN aap pooch saktay hain. Tihami bhaee muhabbat ki sabhi kahaniyaan aik c hoti hain bass naam aur kirdaar badal jaatay hain.
Thanx Sadi for following this post
regards
Aatif
Arsay baad yahan aana hua aur yeah daikh ker acha lagga k mairi iss kawish ko aap logooN ne itna sera'aha aur pasand kia. Jo sawalaat aap k zehan main haiN aap pooch saktay hain. Tihami bhaee muhabbat ki sabhi kahaniyaan aik c hoti hain bass naam aur kirdaar badal jaatay hain.
Thanx Sadi for following this post
regards
Aatif
QUOTE (tanha_musafir @ Oct 20 2008, 12:52 PM)
Assalam o alikum Friendz!
Arsay baad yahan aana hua aur yeah daikh ker acha lagga k mairi iss kawish ko aap logooN ne itna sera'aha aur pasand kia. Jo sawalaat aap k zehan main haiN aap pooch saktay hain. Tihami bhaee muhabbat ki sabhi kahaniyaan aik c hoti hain bass naam aur kirdaar badal jaatay hain.
Thanx Sadi for following this post
regards
Aatif
Arsay baad yahan aana hua aur yeah daikh ker acha lagga k mairi iss kawish ko aap logooN ne itna sera'aha aur pasand kia. Jo sawalaat aap k zehan main haiN aap pooch saktay hain. Tihami bhaee muhabbat ki sabhi kahaniyaan aik c hoti hain bass naam aur kirdaar badal jaatay hain.
Thanx Sadi for following this post
regards
Aatif
Walaikum Aslaam Janab
Janab ham nay to aap kay Naam par Special Section banaya hoa hay , Phir bhi aap Arsay baad chaker lagatay hain.
Ziada arsa door na raha karain.. Kuch kuch hota hay QUOTE (tanha_musafir @ Oct 20 2008, 02:52 PM)
Assalam o alikum Friendz!
Arsay baad yahan aana hua aur yeah daikh ker acha lagga k mairi iss kawish ko aap logooN ne itna sera'aha aur pasand kia. Jo sawalaat aap k zehan main haiN aap pooch saktay hain. Tihami bhaee muhabbat ki sabhi kahaniyaan aik c hoti hain bass naam aur kirdaar badal jaatay hain.
Thanx Sadi for following this post
regards
Aatif
Arsay baad yahan aana hua aur yeah daikh ker acha lagga k mairi iss kawish ko aap logooN ne itna sera'aha aur pasand kia. Jo sawalaat aap k zehan main haiN aap pooch saktay hain. Tihami bhaee muhabbat ki sabhi kahaniyaan aik c hoti hain bass naam aur kirdaar badal jaatay hain.
Thanx Sadi for following this post
regards
Aatif
Wasalam! can i ask one thing? poochna fir bhi hai khaniyaan aik jaise kaise ho sakti hein? jub anjam he aik jese nahin hote! naa kirdar aur na her insaan ki soch aik jesi hotti hai ! haan ye ho sakta hai kuch similarities hoon ! ye thora confliction hai kindly bata dein me ko khush rahein
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