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BeJaan

Jul 8 2008, 08:18 PM

BeJaan

Jul 8 2008, 08:18 PM

Mrs.KnOwN_StRaNgEr

Jul 8 2008, 08:21 PM

doni hi aik se barh kar aik

khush rahiay aur yoonhi acha sa share kartay rahiay.

BeJaan

Jul 8 2008, 08:31 PM

QUOTE(Kamli @ Jul 8 2008, 08:21 PM)

doni hi aik se barh kar aik
khush rahiay aur yoonhi acha sa share kartay rahiay.

Apka husn-e-nazar hai Kamli jee
Bohat bohat shukriya apka...
Hamesha khush rehye, muskurati rehye

sitara kanwal

Jul 9 2008, 09:53 AM

bohat khoobsorat poems....specially the ist 1...
no words...

janey q log muhabbat kia kartey hain.....Dil k badley dard e dil liya kartey hain....
Tanhai milti hai kabhi mehfil nahi milti....raah e muhabbat me kabi manzil nahi milti...

Dil toot jata hai nakam hota hai...ulfat me logo ka yehi anjam hota hai.....
koi kia janey q ye parwaney....kion machaltey hain ...gham me jaltey hai.....
aahen bhar bhar k deevaney jia kartey hain.............. janey q log muhabbt kia karty hain........

Shahid Sarfrosh

Jul 9 2008, 03:56 PM

Bohat Khub

BeJaan

Jul 9 2008, 07:13 PM

QUOTE(sitara kanwal @ Jul 9 2008, 09:53 AM)

bohat khoobsorat poems....specially the ist 1...
no words...

janey q log muhabbat kia kartey hain.....Dil k badley dard e dil liya kartey hain....
Tanhai milti hai kabhi mehfil nahi milti....raah e muhabbat me kabi manzil nahi milti...

Dil toot jata hai nakam hota hai...ulfat me logo ka yehi anjam hota hai.....
koi kia janey q ye parwaney....kion machaltey hain ...gham me jaltey hai.....
aahen bhar bhar k deevaney jia kartey hain.............. janey q log muhabbt kia karty hain........

Sitara Kanwal jee Tareef karne & Pasand karne par mashkoor hon apka

aur ap ne bohat acha likha & its very true!

Khush rehye hamesha

BeJaan

Jul 9 2008, 07:14 PM

QUOTE(Shahid Sarfrosh @ Jul 9 2008, 03:56 PM)

Bohat Khub

Bohat bohat shukriya apka Shahid Khush rehye

hadeea

Jul 10 2008, 07:09 PM

QUOTE(BeJaan @ Jul 8 2008, 09:18 PM)

Wah Wah mujhe acha nahi lagta but ghazal buht achi hai
qaber ke Katby Ke Liay AIk Shaer

RAHI MAY BAAT BAAT PAY KEHTA THA JIS KO JAAN

WOH SHAKHS AAKHIRASH MUJHAY BEJAAN KAR GIA

hadeea

Jul 10 2008, 07:14 PM

QUOTE(BeJaan @ Jul 8 2008, 09:18 PM)

mera gham aur meri har khushi tumse hai
jaaneman meri zindagi to tumse hai

Buht Khobsurat Poem Hia Janab

BeJaan

Jul 10 2008, 08:09 PM

QUOTE(hadeea @ Jul 10 2008, 07:09 PM)

Wah Wah mujhe acha nahi lagta but ghazal buht achi hai
qaber ke Katby Ke Liay AIk Shaer

RAHI MAY BAAT BAAT PAY KEHTA THA JIS KO JAAN

WOH SHAKHS AAKHIRASH MUJHAY BEJAAN KAR GIA

Kya acha nahi lagta apko?
Ghazal pasand karne ka bohat bohat shukriya

Jee isi sher ki wajah se main ne apna nick BeJaan rakha...

Khush rehye

BeJaan

Jul 10 2008, 08:10 PM

QUOTE(hadeea @ Jul 10 2008, 07:14 PM)

mera gham aur meri har khushi tumse hai
jaaneman meri zindagi to tumse hai

Buht Khobsurat Poem Hia Janab

Bohaaaaaaaat Bohat shukriya apka Hadeea Jee
Hamesha bohat khush rehye

hadeea

Jul 10 2008, 08:26 PM

QUOTE(BeJaan @ Jul 10 2008, 09:09 PM)

Kya acha nahi lagta apko?
Ghazal pasand karne ka bohat bohat shukriya

Jee isi sher ki wajah se main ne apna nick BeJaan rakha...

Khush rehye

sheroon per Wah Wah Kahna acha nahi lagta bhala ap dil ka rona roien aur loog Wah Wah kareen
yeh to zakhamon per namak chirkna ho gia jii

BeJaan

Jul 10 2008, 08:27 PM

QUOTE(hadeea @ Jul 10 2008, 08:26 PM)

sheroon per Wah Wah Kahna acha nahi lagta bhala ap dil ka rona roien aur loog Wah Wah kareen
yeh to zakhamon per namak chirkna ho gia jii

Hehe sahi kaha... Bohat mukhtalif si baat kahi ap ne, magar achi baat kahi
Bohat khush rehye

hawwa ki beti

Jul 11 2008, 12:09 AM

nice poetry selection & nice work
thanx for shareing
aslam o alaikum.........!

BeJaan

Jul 11 2008, 05:10 PM

QUOTE(hawwa ki beti @ Jul 11 2008, 12:09 AM)

nice poetry selection & nice work
thanx for shareing
aslam o alaikum.........!

HKB jee
Bohat bohat shukriya apka
Hamesha khush rehye