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WAH JEE WAH :X
QUOTE (Manoos Ajnabi @ Oct 16 2008, 11:41 PM) 
WAH JEE WAH :X
Bohat bohat shukriya apka Manoos Ajnabi jee
Khush rehye
Buhat khoob
QUOTE (seemaf @ Oct 17 2008, 03:46 PM)
Buhat khoob
Bohat bohat shukriya apka Seemaf Jee
Khush rehye
wah kaya baat hai bohat khubsurat nazam likhi hai 
wah je wah.. bht khoob
be happy n keep sharing please..
be happy n keep sharing please..
Bahot Khoob
QUOTE (nazo454 @ Oct 17 2008, 06:07 PM)
wah kaya baat hai bohat khubsurat nazam likhi hai
Bohat bohat shukriya apka Nazo jee
Hamesha khush rehye
QUOTE (ManPaki @ Oct 17 2008, 09:44 PM)
wah je wah.. bht khoob
be happy n keep sharing please..
be happy n keep sharing please..
Bohat bohat shukriya apka Usman
Hamesha khush rehye
QUOTE (Mrs.KnOwN_StRaNgEr @ Oct 18 2008, 03:04 AM)
Bahot Khoob
Bohat bohat shukriya apka Mrs Known Stranger Jee
Khush rehye
QUOTE (BeJaan @ Oct 16 2008, 05:35 PM)
i think my poem is a good reply of ur poem
Suno!
Main Jii Rahi Hoon
Jaan Loo
Nummi Ankhon Main Rehti Bhi Rai To Kya
Main Abb Bhi Muskurati Hoon
Suno!
Yeh Dil
Keh Jiss Ko Dekh Na Paye
Yeh Mera Dil
Buht Se Daagh Rakhta Hai
Mager Phir Bhi Dherkta Hai
Ke Main Ne Abb Bhi
Judaioon Ke Taweel Zard Mosmoon Main Bhi
Unn Meethi,Talakh Sari Yadoon Ko
Apny Damann Main Chunn Rakha Hai
To Kya Hua Hai
Jo Tum Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Dya Hai
Wo Sare Mosam Muhabatoon Ke
Meri Mataye e Hayat Hain Wo Puranye Lahmay
Tumhari Yadain,Mera Assasa
Wo Sarey Mosam Muhabaton Ke
Wo Sari Batain
Tumhara Lehja
Gaye Huye Mah O Saal Sarey
Wo Ehde E Rafta
Abhi Bhi Muthi Main Qyed Hain
Wo Sabhi Sitarye
Muhbaton Ke Wo Istaarye
Wo Sabb Isharye
Keh Main Ne Abb Bhi
Judaioon Ke Taweel Zard Mosmoon Main Bhi
Unn Meethi,Talakh Sari Yadoon Ko
Apny Damann Main Chunn Rakha Hai
To Kya Hua Hai
Jo Tum Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Dya Hai
Main Jii Rahi Hoon
Jaan Loo
Nummi Ankhon Main Rehti Bhi Rai To Kya
Main Abb Bhi Muskurati Hoon
Suno!
Yeh Dil
Keh Jiss Ko Dekh Na Paye
Yeh Mera Dil
Buht Se Daagh Rakhta Hai
Mager Phir Bhi Dherkta Hai
Ke Main Ne Abb Bhi
Judaioon Ke Taweel Zard Mosmoon Main Bhi
Unn Meethi,Talakh Sari Yadoon Ko
Apny Damann Main Chunn Rakha Hai
To Kya Hua Hai
Jo Tum Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Dya Hai
Wo Sare Mosam Muhabatoon Ke
Meri Mataye e Hayat Hain Wo Puranye Lahmay
Tumhari Yadain,Mera Assasa
Wo Sarey Mosam Muhabaton Ke
Wo Sari Batain
Tumhara Lehja
Gaye Huye Mah O Saal Sarey
Wo Ehde E Rafta
Abhi Bhi Muthi Main Qyed Hain
Wo Sabhi Sitarye
Muhbaton Ke Wo Istaarye
Wo Sabb Isharye
Keh Main Ne Abb Bhi
Judaioon Ke Taweel Zard Mosmoon Main Bhi
Unn Meethi,Talakh Sari Yadoon Ko
Apny Damann Main Chunn Rakha Hai
To Kya Hua Hai
Jo Tum Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Dya Hai
Bohat Khoob Zabardast
QUOTE (hadeea @ Oct 19 2008, 01:33 AM)
i think my poem is a good reply of ur poem
Suno!
Main Jii Rahi Hoon
Jaan Loo
Nummi Ankhon Main Rehti Bhi Rai To Kya
Main Abb Bhi Muskurati Hoon
Suno!
Yeh Dil
Keh Jiss Ko Dekh Na Paye
Yeh Mera Dil
Buht Se Daagh Rakhta Hai
Mager Phir Bhi Dherkta Hai
Ke Main Ne Abb Bhi
Judaioon Ke Taweel Zard Mosmoon Main Bhi
Unn Meethi,Talakh Sari Yadoon Ko
Apny Damann Main Chunn Rakha Hai
To Kya Hua Hai
Jo Tum Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Dya Hai
Wo Sare Mosam Muhabatoon Ke
Meri Mataye e Hayat Hain Wo Puranye Lahmay
Tumhari Yadain,Mera Assasa
Wo Sarey Mosam Muhabaton Ke
Wo Sari Batain
Tumhara Lehja
Gaye Huye Mah O Saal Sarey
Wo Ehde E Rafta
Abhi Bhi Muthi Main Qyed Hain
Wo Sabhi Sitarye
Muhbaton Ke Wo Istaarye
Wo Sabb Isharye
Keh Main Ne Abb Bhi
Judaioon Ke Taweel Zard Mosmoon Main Bhi
Unn Meethi,Talakh Sari Yadoon Ko
Apny Damann Main Chunn Rakha Hai
To Kya Hua Hai
Jo Tum Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Dya Hai
Main Jii Rahi Hoon
Jaan Loo
Nummi Ankhon Main Rehti Bhi Rai To Kya
Main Abb Bhi Muskurati Hoon
Suno!
Yeh Dil
Keh Jiss Ko Dekh Na Paye
Yeh Mera Dil
Buht Se Daagh Rakhta Hai
Mager Phir Bhi Dherkta Hai
Ke Main Ne Abb Bhi
Judaioon Ke Taweel Zard Mosmoon Main Bhi
Unn Meethi,Talakh Sari Yadoon Ko
Apny Damann Main Chunn Rakha Hai
To Kya Hua Hai
Jo Tum Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Dya Hai
Wo Sare Mosam Muhabatoon Ke
Meri Mataye e Hayat Hain Wo Puranye Lahmay
Tumhari Yadain,Mera Assasa
Wo Sarey Mosam Muhabaton Ke
Wo Sari Batain
Tumhara Lehja
Gaye Huye Mah O Saal Sarey
Wo Ehde E Rafta
Abhi Bhi Muthi Main Qyed Hain
Wo Sabhi Sitarye
Muhbaton Ke Wo Istaarye
Wo Sabb Isharye
Keh Main Ne Abb Bhi
Judaioon Ke Taweel Zard Mosmoon Main Bhi
Unn Meethi,Talakh Sari Yadoon Ko
Apny Damann Main Chunn Rakha Hai
To Kya Hua Hai
Jo Tum Ne Sab Kuch Bhulla Dya Hai
Fantastic, apki nazm bohat hi shandaar hai, awesum...Ek ek lafz dil main utrta chala geya...
Bohat khoobsurat
Khush rehye
QUOTE (Silent_Ocean @ Oct 19 2008, 05:31 AM)
Bohat Khoob Zabardast
Bohat bohat shukriya apka Silent Ocean jee
Khush rehye
very nice 
Bohat bohat shukriya apka Soz
Hamesha khush rehye
Hamesha khush rehye
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