Azeezan-e-bazm

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

is bazm meN ek aur nazm jo hai tu bohat puraani lekn us ka yeh rang ek ustaad kee rehnumayii kee mara'oon-e-minnat hai.
yeh nazm hai tu vazan meN aur kayee saaree cheezooN meN paband bhi lekin maiN ise phir bhi ek aazaad nazm ka naam dooNgii keh kaheeN saaree jaghooN par maiN ne paband nazm ke uSoolooN ko thoRa hai aur aisa jaan bhooj kar kiya gaya hai keh nah-karne kee Soorat meN is nazm kee rooH faut ho jaatee

apnee aara se zaroor navaaziye gaa

dua go wa talib-e-dua
Zahida Raees :Raji:

asslam o allikum
dear RAJI.
iss ke tareef ya tankeed na karnay par iss nazm kay sath ziyadti
hogi
yeh aik waqi lajawab nazm hai
jo mujhay bohat pasand aai hai
aumeed hai ainda bhi hum ko aesi he nazmain parhnay ko milain
ge
allah hafiz

SOBI MALIK .........

Assalaam O Alaikum

Zahida aapi aik shaagird ustaad k kalaam per tanqeed keray yeh to kisii surat bhii mumkin naheiN ... Itna zaroor kehna chaahta hooN k aap bohot bohot achchha likhti haiN ... Rab ul Izzat aap k qalam ko mazeed zor atay ferma'ay ... Ameen!

Qassim Mirza :Qassim:

Salam Raji G!
Lafz nahin hai paas mairay k main iss khobsoorat takhleeq k baaray main kuch kahooN. Aap bayhadd acha likhti hain aur aap ke soch aur andaaz bohat munfarid hain. Hamesha hee lutf aata hai aap ka kalam perh ker. Allah aap k kalam ko mazeed taraqee atta karay (Ameen)
Khush rahain,
Aatif

Kia kahoo'n es kay siwa kay bohat hi khoobsurat
Thanks for sharing with us.
Umair

Walaikum Assalam Sobi Malik jee:

jis moHabbat aur KhulooS se aap ne is taKhleeq kee pazeeraayii kee hai maiN dil kee ghairahyioN se aap kee mamnoon hooN. aap ko yeh nazm achee lagee yeh jaan kar Khushii hoovii.
maiN bhi yeh umeed kartee hooN keh aahinda bhi aap isee taraH se meree taKhleeqaat par likhtee raheNgee aur share karne ka HoSlaaH baRhaatee raheNgee.

Khush rahiye

Wassalaam

Zahida Raees :Raji:

nice rajji jee waki bohat he payari hai
main dowa go hoon k aap mazeed acha likain

Nice

Raji


bhut hi khobsurat kalaam hay apka

khush rahiya

Qassim Bhai:
Walaikum Assalaam,
jeete rahiye, Khush rahiye,


aap ke KhulooS aur moHabbat kee maiN dil kee ghairahiyoN se shukrguzaar hooN.

aray yeh aap ne kyaa keh diya... maiN aur ustaad... aisa tu kisee Soorat mumkin hai hee naheeN, keh yeh darjah jin logoN ke paas hai vohii is ke laheq heN aur vohii isko nibhaa sakte heN aur nibhaa rahe heN.

aap aur deegar nau-mashqooN kee thoRee bohat rehnumahii karna tu maiN apnaa farz samajhtee hooN keh baHeciyat-e-insaan ham sab ka ek doosre par thoRaa bohat to Haq hai

apnii dua'oN meN yaad rakhiye gaa.

mamnoon-o-talib-e-dua

aap kee Aapii

Bahut khoobsorat

Aadaab,Aatif SaaHeb:

sab se pahle tu taKheer se Khat ka jawab dene ke liye bohat ma'azrat Khwah hooN keh zindagi kee deegar maSroofiyat is qadar baRh gayii heN keh net ke liye waqt nikaalnaa qadre mushkil hogayaa hai.
aap ne jin lafzooN se meree taKhleeqaat ko sarahaa hai uskaa shukriyah adaa karne ke liye mere paas alfaaz naheeN heN.

apnee dua'oN meN jagah deejiye gaa
mamnoon-o-talib-e-dua
Zahida Raees :Raji:




Umair Huda jee bohat bohat shurkiyah keh aap ko yeh taKhleeq pasand aayii.

Khush rahiye

Bohat acha lihkti hain aap... its really nice

keep sharing

VERYY VERYY NICE....

bohat hee pyaare Khat ke liye bohat bohat bohat shukriyah qubool keejiye.

dua'a go wa taalibe-e-dua'a

Zahida Raees :Raji:

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