tanha_musafir
Nov 16 2005, 11:56 PM
Assalam o alikum Khalish Bhaee!
Bohat khushi huee k mairi aur mujh jaisya bohat se aqeedat mandoon ke kahwahish itni jald poori ker dee aap ne, Yakeen janiya bohat se bhee ziyada khushi ho rahi hai. Ghazal kay baaray kuch kehna sooraj ko chiraag dikhana hai. Aap se tu hamm seekhtay hain Khalish bhaee, gahay ba gahay aatay raha kee jiya.
Bohat Dua,
Aatif
Khalish
Nov 17 2005, 12:04 AM
rida_shah
Nov 17 2005, 01:28 AM
nice sharing khalish bhai
Saadi
Nov 18 2005, 07:55 PM
Khalish bhai Good to c u back with this super duper Ghazal 
simply beautiful
seemaf
Nov 19 2005, 03:07 PM
Walaikum Assalam
Yeh rakh chorney wali cheez to nahin thi 
Wonderfull sharing
Shajr-e-saya
Nov 19 2005, 03:11 PM
hamesha ki tarah
Superb.
*Kainaat*
Nov 19 2005, 09:31 PM
Bohat achi poetry hai aap ki...
thanks for sharing!!!
*Akhtar*
Nov 19 2005, 11:06 PM

, Khalish Bhaie Shukriya k aap nay kisi na kisi bahanay hum se kuchh share tau kiya ,chalain Farmaaesh parr hee kiya ,agar aap farmaaesh parr hee hamaiN apnay Khoobsoorat kalaam se nawazaiN gaiN tau phir aik meri bhi Farmaaesh hai Lekin pehlay Maen Aatif ki baat ki Taa'eed karoon ga kay Aap k Kalaam ki Taa'reef karna Sooraj ko Chiraagh Dekhnay K Mut'raa'Dif hai ,Aap tau UstaadoN kay UstaaD haiN So Meray Paaaaaaaaaas Alfaaz nahi k aap ki iss ghazal ya iss se pehlay walay kalaam ki Taa'reef kar sakooN ,aap kay Kalaam ki aik khaasiyet ye hai k seedha seedha DIL maen utarta jata hai aur kaie Bundd KawaaR Kholta jata hai Aur aap jaantay haiN k Bunnd KawaaroN k Peechay Kiaa Kuchh Chupa Hota Hai ,kisi k liye Kachraa aur kisi k liye ouss ki zindagi bharr ka Aa'sa'sa So Bundd DarwaazoN ko Kholtay Raha kareN aur abb meri Farmaaesh hai Apni Laazwaal Ghazal @ KoonjaiN sookhi Hooie JheeloN parr bhi utarti haiN Kabhi ,yahaan aik dafa phir share karaiN , maen zaati taur parr aap ka mashkoor Hoon ga aur shaaed kuchh Din aur yahaaN aanay ka Bahana Mil Jaaey .
ALLAH Hum Sabb Ka Hami-O-Nasir Ho.
Khalish
Nov 20 2005, 12:31 AM
swaseem
Nov 20 2005, 01:39 PM
Khalish bahi bohat zabardast ghazal hai.....
plz app new member's forum mein meri post parh lein "i want my old id"sacredpearl" back" key naam sey hai........
thanx
*DhanaK*
Nov 20 2005, 11:15 PM
Khalish bhai salaam qubool farmaaiye
jawab kaafi tafseeli diya tha aapki is post ka,na jaane kahan ghaaeb hogaya.
khair,,
ghazal hasb e mamool bahot khubsurat hai,aapki shaaeri ki pukhtigi ki hamesha se maddah hoon.
aakhir sher seedha dil mein utar gaya,aankhein bhi nam huin.
khush rahein bahot
itne arse baad aapka kalaam dekh kar dil khush ho gaya,aapki maujoodgi sos mein jaan daal deti hai.
sarosh khan
Nov 21 2005, 11:16 AM
bohot hi umedha khalish bhai kafi arsay baad aap ki koi post parhi hai parh kar lutf a gaya youn hi achi achi posts hum sey share kartay rahiye ga mairi taraf sey dhairoon dhair daad wasool kijye
WoundedSmile
Nov 24 2005, 12:32 PM
Aslamoalikum well .... its a Nice ghazal kafi ebhter cheez hey ,,thanx fot shairing
Rab Rakha
seemel
Nov 29 2005, 01:41 PM
Nice
Mrs.KnOwN_StRaNgEr
Dec 1 2005, 01:28 AM
Salam Khalish Bhai
Kaafi arsa Kay Baad Aap Ki Ghazal PaRhnay Ko Mili....
Har Shair Qaabil E Tareef Hai....Daad Qabool Kijiay Aur Koshish Kijiay K Apnay PaRhnay WaaloN Ko Aisi Khoobsorat Ghazliyaat Say Nawaaztay Raha Kijiay.
Kamli
Raji
Dec 2 2005, 12:40 PM
Khalish jee:
PurKhulooS tasleemaat,
aap kee yeh taraHe ghazal be-intiha KhoobSoorat hai. weise bhi yeh zameen meree nazar meN sab ko hee attract kartee hai.
aap ne miSraH-e-taraH par girah bhi Khoob lagaya hai . 
meree janib se ek kaamyaab taKhleeq par dilee daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
Aap kee mazeed taKhleeqaat ka intizaar rahe gaa
Wassalaam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Jahan Zaib
Dec 6 2005, 10:12 PM
KHalish Bhai! That's a very very nice sharing ...
very good poetry bu you.
I have seen your poetry oon your site & that's also very nice.
I hope you will continue sharing such a nice poetry.
Ghazal khushboo
Dec 7 2005, 01:00 AM
umairhuda
Dec 13 2005, 01:32 PM
Walekum Assalam Khalish Bhai,,
Bohat hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi aur share ki hai aap ney, aik aik shair apni jaga wazan rakhta hai,,, bohat shukriya itni khoobsurat sharing ka
Sada khush rahein
Umair
MidniteMoon
Dec 18 2005, 04:52 PM
~MaiN Apni Zaat Ki TanhaaeyooN MeiN Zinda HooN~
Dil sy Boht Achi lagi khalish bhai.
irfanbobby
Dec 20 2005, 01:11 PM
Assalam Alakium Khalish Bhai,,
Khushboo pyaar ki har aur bikhar jati hai,Tumhare muskrane se hamari duniya bhi muskrati hai,Jab bhi dekhti ho tum pyaar se hamari aur,Saare zamane ki khushiya hamare daman mein chali aati hai.
irfan_bobby79@yahoo.com
Assalam Alakium Khalish Bhai,,
Khushboo pyaar ki har aur bikhar jati hai,Tumhare muskrane se hamari duniya bhi muskrati hai,Jab bhi dekhti ho tum pyaar se hamari aur,Saare zamane ki khushiya hamare daman mein chali aati hai.
irfan_bobby79@yahoo.com
really beautiful and a grate Ghazal, i love this
Zindagi
Dec 23 2005, 08:33 PM
Assalam O Alaikum Khalish Bhai
SOS main aap ki takhleeq mojood ho to SOS ki shan hi aur hoti hai
bohat khoobsurat ghazal share ki hai aap ne........
khush raheye
Zindagi~
sahera
Dec 31 2005, 04:04 PM
bahoot umada
Zindagi
Jan 14 2007, 02:46 PM
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