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out standing....poem 
QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Dec 24 2005, 10:37 PM) 
Salam Aatif......kya hal hai...
aik aik Sh'er lajaawab hai our Images nay our ShaaN baRhaa de....
Bohat hi khoobsurat 
Umair
Umair
Mindblowing poem...........thanks for sharing with us
aur main ne notice kiya hai...aap ke signature meen bi ye aa rahi hai
keep up
wah Atif Bhai 
hamesha ki tarah lajawab ghazal aur presentation tu buhut hi umda hay
khush rahain
hamesha ki tarah lajawab ghazal aur presentation tu buhut hi umda hay
khush rahain
assalam o laikum Atif bhai
kaise mizaj hain ?
bohat umda Atif bhai
great
aor yé boali ké duniya choar dé
kiya kehné
khush rahen
kaise mizaj hain ?
bohat umda Atif bhai
great
aor yé boali ké duniya choar dé
kiya kehné
khush rahen
QUOTE(rida_shah @ Dec 25 2005, 03:44 AM)
out standing....poem
RidaKhush rehiya
Aatif
Salaam Bhaijan'
Masha Allah .. bohat umdaah ashaar kahey aapney.. wonderfull. Bhaiya right now i am in my colege lab n i am so touched n moved could not afford not repyling right now!!!.. u have touched my feelings .. this is ur greatness u know that! pls keep giving us such poetry .. i just love that way!!
take care .. keep me in ur duas..
luv'
urz sis'
tabassum'
ALLAH HAFIZ
FIAMANILLAH'
Masha Allah .. bohat umdaah ashaar kahey aapney.. wonderfull. Bhaiya right now i am in my colege lab n i am so touched n moved could not afford not repyling right now!!!.. u have touched my feelings .. this is ur greatness u know that! pls keep giving us such poetry .. i just love that way!!
take care .. keep me in ur duas..
luv'
urz sis'
tabassum'
ALLAH HAFIZ
FIAMANILLAH'
QUOTE(Aawaz @ Dec 25 2005, 07:51 AM)
Salam Aatif......kya hal hai...
aik aik Sh'er lajaawab hai our Images nay our ShaaN baRhaa de....
Wasalam Awaz!
Ghazal aur presentation kee pasandeedgi ka bayhass shukriya.
Khush rehiya,
Aatif
QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Dec 27 2005, 04:48 PM)
Wasalam Awaz!
Ghazal aur presentation kee pasandeedgi ka bayhass shukriya.
Khush rehiya,
Aatif
ATIF BHAII KAMAL KI COMPSING OR US SEY KAM GAZAL
ITNEY SADHA ILFAZ MEIN ITNI UMDAH FEELINGS KAYA BAT HEY AP KI
ITNEY SADHA ILFAZ MEIN ITNI UMDAH FEELINGS KAYA BAT HEY AP KI
QUOTE(umairhuda @ Dec 25 2005, 12:55 PM)
Bohat hi khoobsurat
Umair
Bohat shukriya Umair
QUOTE(Kainat @ Dec 25 2005, 08:53 PM)
Mindblowing poem...........thanks for sharing with us
aur main ne notice kiya hai...aap ke signature meen bi ye aa rahi hai
keep up
Bohat Shukriya Kainaat nazm kee pasandeedgi k liya
Bohat khush rehiya,
Aatif
bohat hi achi hai its realy very nice
Very Nice Tfs
ZABARDAST!!!!!
hmmm zaberdast bhoot khoob janab
Lovely n like always
Assalam o alaikum Atif
yar aaj buhat time k baad aaya the forum per to tumhari hi nazm sab se pehle perhi
its simply Great
kia baat hai yaar.....really buhat maza aaya perh k
waise by the way hotay kahaN ho tum aaj kal???
keep writing
yar aaj buhat time k baad aaya the forum per to tumhari hi nazm sab se pehle perhi
its simply Great
kia baat hai yaar.....really buhat maza aaya perh k
waise by the way hotay kahaN ho tum aaj kal???
keep writing
Hamesha ki tarhan bahut khoobsorat
thanks for sharing
thanks for sharing
Assalam-o-Alaikum
Hamesha ki tarah aik aur khoobsurat takhleeq...aur presentation bhi buhat khoob
Thanks for sharing
Hamesha ki tarah aik aur khoobsurat takhleeq...aur presentation bhi buhat khoob
Thanks for sharing
QUOTE(khud_aashna @ Jan 21 2006, 10:03 PM)
Assalam o alaikum Atif
yar aaj buhat time k baad aaya the forum per to tumhari hi nazm sab se pehle perhi
its simply Great
kia baat hai yaar.....really buhat maza aaya perh k
waise by the way hotay kahaN ho tum aaj kal???
keep writing
Waalikum as Salam Hazret Sahib
Kaisay hain aap? Aur wapsi kab huee Gilgit se? Aap se tay yeh hua tha k aap wapis aa ker batain gay aur hamm muntazir hain abhi takk, aaj aap ka muhabbat naama perh ker hairaat bhari khushi huee. Khush rehiya.
Ghazal kee pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriya.
Khush rehiya,
Aatif
QUOTE(seemaf @ Jan 22 2006, 06:56 PM)
Assalam-o-Alaikum
Hamesha ki tarah aik aur khoobsurat takhleeq...aur presentation bhi buhat khoob
Thanks for sharing
Waalikum as Salam Seema G!
Bohat shukriya ghazal kee pasandeedgi ka. Aap hamesha hosla berhati hain.
Khush rehiya
Aatif
QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Jan 23 2006, 02:48 AM)
Waalikum as Salam Seema G!
Bohat shukriya ghazal kee pasandeedgi ka. Aap hamesha hosla berhati hain.
Khush rehiya
Aatif
you are welcome
Ab achhi cheez ko achha hi kaha jaye ga na
chand kia utra hai angan mein kabhi
sun meri jaan tu ye tamanna chor de
MASHAALLAH Atif bhai kia kahen ap to lajawb kar dete hein.
apki shan mein kuch kehne ki koshish karti hun main bhi aj thoda sa ki
Tareef kia karun tere husne bayaan ki
Kaise jazbat ko lafzon mein dhal rakha hai
take care
FIAMANILLAH
sun meri jaan tu ye tamanna chor de
MASHAALLAH Atif bhai kia kahen ap to lajawb kar dete hein.
apki shan mein kuch kehne ki koshish karti hun main bhi aj thoda sa ki
Tareef kia karun tere husne bayaan ki
Kaise jazbat ko lafzon mein dhal rakha hai
take care
FIAMANILLAH
QUOTE
QUOTE(khud_aashna @ Jan 21 2006, 10:03 PM)
Assalam o alaikum Atif
yar aaj buhat time k baad aaya the forum per to tumhari hi nazm sab se pehle perhi
its simply Great
kia baat hai yaar.....really buhat maza aaya perh k
waise by the way hotay kahaN ho tum aaj kal???
keep writing
Waalikum as Salam Hazret Sahib
Kaisay hain aap? Aur wapsi kab huee Gilgit se? Aap se tay yeh hua tha k aap wapis aa ker batain gay aur hamm muntazir hain abhi takk, aaj aap ka muhabbat naama perh ker hairaat bhari khushi huee. Khush rehiya.
Ghazal kee pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriya.
Khush rehiya,
Aatif
Assalam o alaikum Atif
yar aaj buhat time k baad aaya the forum per to tumhari hi nazm sab se pehle perhi
its simply Great
kia baat hai yaar.....really buhat maza aaya perh k
waise by the way hotay kahaN ho tum aaj kal???
keep writing
Waalikum as Salam Hazret Sahib
Kaisay hain aap? Aur wapsi kab huee Gilgit se? Aap se tay yeh hua tha k aap wapis aa ker batain gay aur hamm muntazir hain abhi takk, aaj aap ka muhabbat naama perh ker hairaat bhari khushi huee. Khush rehiya.
Ghazal kee pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriya.
Khush rehiya,
Aatif
Jee janab.....wo to aap ne suna hi ho ga k Dunya gol hai to bhai yehi golai mujhe bhi waheeN le aai jahaN se chala tha main
yani k Karachi........gilgit se us waqt wapsi bhi isi emergency maiN hui thi or ab main Khi maiN hi hota hooN
Sorry tumhaiN inform nahi ker saka tha coz buhat emergency main aya tha Khi
Khair
tum ne bhi kon sa pata ker lia k kahaN hooN mian?
khush raho
mdsr
QUOTE(soz @ Jan 24 2006, 03:32 PM)
chand kia utra hai angan mein kabhi
sun meri jaan tu ye tamanna chor de
MASHAALLAH Atif bhai kia kahen ap to lajawb kar dete hein.
apki shan mein kuch kehne ki koshish karti hun main bhi aj thoda sa ki
Tareef kia karun tere husne bayaan ki
Kaise jazbat ko lafzon mein dhal rakha hai
take care
FIAMANILLAH
Assalam o alikum Soz Behna!
I m simply speechless on ur beautiful sher and comments.
Jeeti raho,
Khush raho,
Aatif
ASSALAM ALAIKUM
EIK BEHTREEN TEHREER PER MERI TARAF SE DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE
EIK BEHTREEN TEHREER PER MERI TARAF SE DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE
QUOTE(Ghazal + khushboo @ Dec 25 2005, 09:41 PM)
wah Atif Bhai
hamesha ki tarah lajawab ghazal aur presentation tu buhut hi umda hay
khush rahain
Bohat Shukriya aap ka.
Jeeti raho, khush raho
Aatif
bht hi zaberdastttttttttt
QUOTE(M S RAZA @ Dec 26 2005, 05:11 PM)
assalam o laikum Atif bhai
kaise mizaj hain ?
bohat umda Atif bhai
great
aor yé boali ké duniya choar dé
kiya kehné
khush rahen Waslam Raza bhaee!
Main theik hooN aap kaisay hain? arsay baad daikha aap ko?
Ghazal kee pasandeedgi ka shukriya
Khush rehiya
aatif
Asalam-0-Alyekum
kaise hain bhai jee aap ......
Umeed hai zehan k kisi Ba'eed Goshay main meri yaad mehfooz ho gi lehaza pechan laina kuch itna bhi mushkil nahi ho ga aap ke liye ......... theek keh raha houn na bhiya jani ...
Janab aap ki Shayiri kisi kisam ki tareef ki mohtaj na tu pehlay hi thi aur na ab hai ... bohut Acha likha hai aap ne ... Balke main tu kahoun ga k Zor-e-Qalam aur ziada ho gaya hai ... Bohut Khoob
Khush Rahiye Hameshah
kaise hain bhai jee aap ......
Umeed hai zehan k kisi Ba'eed Goshay main meri yaad mehfooz ho gi lehaza pechan laina kuch itna bhi mushkil nahi ho ga aap ke liye ......... theek keh raha houn na bhiya jani ...
Janab aap ki Shayiri kisi kisam ki tareef ki mohtaj na tu pehlay hi thi aur na ab hai ... bohut Acha likha hai aap ne ... Balke main tu kahoun ga k Zor-e-Qalam aur ziada ho gaya hai ... Bohut Khoob
Khush Rahiye Hameshah
Salaam Atif
Hasb.e.dastoor maiN phir dair se aaya hooN .. buhot umdah ghazal kahi hai aap ne, lutf aagaya ..
Meri jaanib se buhot si daad aur mubarakbadi qabool kijiay.
Khush RahaiN
Hasb.e.dastoor maiN phir dair se aaya hooN .. buhot umdah ghazal kahi hai aap ne, lutf aagaya ..
Meri jaanib se buhot si daad aur mubarakbadi qabool kijiay.
Khush RahaiN
QUOTE(F-A-L-A-K @ Jan 27 2006, 02:49 AM)
Asalam-0-Alyekum
kaise hain bhai jee aap ......
Umeed hai zehan k kisi Ba'eed Goshay main meri yaad mehfooz ho gi lehaza pechan laina kuch itna bhi mushkil nahi ho ga aap ke liye ......... theek keh raha houn na bhiya jani ...
Janab aap ki Shayiri kisi kisam ki tareef ki mohtaj na tu pehlay hi thi aur na ab hai ... bohut Acha likha hai aap ne ... Balke main tu kahoun ga k Zor-e-Qalam aur ziada ho gaya hai ... Bohut Khoob
Khush Rahiye Hameshah
Waalikum as Salam FALAK bhaee!
Janab aap hamain bilkul yaad hain. Aur aap ko dobara in action daikh ker bohat acha lagg raha hai. Suniya kaisa raha sab aur abb ruknay k liya ai hain na?
Ghazal kee pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriya. Aap kee muhabbat hai sab k lafzooN se maani kasheed laitay hain.
DuaoON main yaad rakhiya ga.
Khush rahain,
Aatif
QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Jan 29 2006, 12:10 PM)
Waalikum as Salam FALAK bhaee!
Janab aap hamain bilkul yaad hain. Aur aap ko dobara in action daikh ker bohat acha lagg raha hai. Suniya kaisa raha sab aur abb ruknay k liya ai hain na?
Ghazal kee pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriya. Aap kee muhabbat hai sab k lafzooN se maani kasheed laitay hain.
DuaoON main yaad rakhiya ga.
Khush rahain,
Aatif
Muje bohut khushi hoye k aap ne muje abhi tak apne Zehan main jaga di hoye hai
jee ab ki baar main Rukne k liye hi aya houn aur Inshah ALLAH ab kafi mouj masti karun ga bhi aur karvaoun ga bhi
Aap bhi Khush rahiye
nice eeeee
QUOTE(F-A-L-A-K @ Jan 30 2006, 03:04 AM)
Muje bohut khushi hoye k aap ne muje abhi tak apne Zehan main jaga di hoye hai
jee ab ki baar main Rukne k liye hi aya houn aur Inshah ALLAH ab kafi mouj masti karun ga bhi aur karvaoun ga bhi
Aap bhi Khush rahiye
Acha lagga jaan ker k aap thehernay k liya aai ho. Acha hai ronaq rahay gee HC per inshAllah.
Khush rehiya
Aatif
QUOTE(tabs @ Dec 27 2005, 03:00 PM)
Salaam Bhaijan'
Masha Allah .. bohat umdaah ashaar kahey aapney.. wonderfull. Bhaiya right now i am in my colege lab n i am so touched n moved could not afford not repyling right now!!!.. u have touched my feelings .. this is ur greatness u know that! pls keep giving us such poetry .. i just love that way!!
take care .. keep me in ur duas..
luv'
urz sis'
tabassum'
ALLAH HAFIZ
FIAMANILLAH'
Wasalam Behna G!
Its ur love that u like n feel my words in the way they are written. I m really honred and thankful to u for ur compliments.
Be blessed
Aatif
assalam o laikum Atif bhai
bohat umda posr share ki hai aap neyi
great kiya kehnéy
aor yé boali ké duniya choar dé
khush rahen
ALLAH HAFIZ........................hkb
bohat umda posr share ki hai aap neyi
great kiya kehnéy
aor yé boali ké duniya choar dé
khush rahen
ALLAH HAFIZ........................hkb
QUOTE(hawwa ki beti @ Feb 1 2006, 09:53 PM)
assalam o laikum Atif bhai
bohat umda posr share ki hai aap neyi
great kiya kehnéy
aor yé boali ké duniya choar dé
khush rahen
ALLAH HAFIZ........................hkb
Bohat shukriya Sis!
I m really honored by ur comments
Jeeti raho
QUOTE(Just Zindagi @ Dec 27 2005, 03:39 PM)
QUOTE(fahiimakhter @ Dec 29 2005, 12:46 PM)
ATIF BHAII KAMAL KI COMPSING OR US SEY KAM GAZAL
ITNEY SADHA ILFAZ MEIN ITNI UMDAH FEELINGS KAYA BAT HEY AP KI
QUOTE(sahera @ Dec 31 2005, 03:51 PM)
QUOTE(MidniteMoon @ Jan 18 2006, 11:42 PM)
Lovely n like always Thanx a million
QUOTE(Dua!! @ Jan 22 2006, 12:45 PM)
Hamesha ki tarhan bahut khoobsorat
thanks for sharing
Bohat Shukriya aap kay comment saur compliemtns ka
QUOTE(Dua!! @ Jan 22 2006, 12:45 PM)
Hamesha ki tarhan bahut khoobsorat
thanks for sharing
Bohat Shukriya aap kay comment saur compliemtns ka
QUOTE(Cancer @ Jan 25 2006, 09:10 AM)
ASSALAM ALAIKUM
EIK BEHTREEN TEHREER PER MERI TARAF SE DAAD QUBOOL KIJIYE
Waalikum as Salam!
Thanx a lot Bhaee G
Be Blessed
Aatif
QUOTE(*khushboo* @ Jan 25 2006, 09:25 PM)
bht hi zaberdastttttttttt
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