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tanha_musafir

Feb 2 2006, 04:06 PM

FARRAN

Feb 2 2006, 04:55 PM

Aatif bhai this is truly amazing

i am completely spellbounded.

very nice post !!!

imranshah

Feb 2 2006, 05:05 PM

QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Feb 2 2006, 04:06 PM) [snapback]2119372[/snapback]

SHANDAR ..IS IT UR OWN ATTEMPT..??

SAGARKHAN

Feb 2 2006, 05:08 PM

Kamal likha aatiff bhaii lajawab likha

khush raho sadda likhtey rahoo yunheyn

insharah

Feb 2 2006, 05:25 PM

its reallyyyyyy SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBB
bohat bohat KHOOBSORATTTTTT

thanxxxxx for sharing

*Kainaat*

Feb 2 2006, 09:25 PM

Too good............. thanks alot 4 sharing wih us

tanha_musafir

Feb 3 2006, 12:42 AM

Thanx a lot friends for ur Compliments and Replies.

Be Blessed

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Feb 3 2006, 01:39 AM

QUOTE(imranshah @ Feb 2 2006, 05:05 PM) [snapback]2119377[/snapback]

SHANDAR ..IS IT UR OWN ATTEMPT..??

Bohat shukriya

Jee janab, khalistan maira apna kalaam hai

F-A-L-A-K

Feb 3 2006, 02:08 AM

Asalam-0-Alyekum

kaise hain aap Bhiya jani ....

Wah jee Kamal kar diya aik bar pher aap ne ... Bohut hi Umdda ..... KhoooB

Kitni asaani say aap ne kitni bari bari batain kar deen hain na "US" pagal larki say

Khush rahiye aur Likhte rahiye

umairhuda

Feb 3 2006, 04:12 AM

Assalam u Alaikum Aatif Bhai,,,,
Aap kay liey kia kahoo'n kay Allah aap ko aur aap ki shayari ko nazar e bad sey bachaey (Aameen).
Aik martaba phir bohat hi khoobsurat likha hai jo kay dil kay taroo'n ko cher gai hai

Sada khush rahein

Umair

~charming girl~

Feb 3 2006, 02:15 PM

Ab Mien kya Tareeef Karoo Atif Bhai......Suraj Ko Chiragh Dikhaney K Mutradiff ho ga nah....

bass App Khush Rahiye Our Yunhi Humarey Liye Achiiii Achiiii Nazmz likhtey Rahiye..

Allah Hafiz

seemaf

Feb 3 2006, 06:20 PM

Assalam-o-Alaikum

Aik baar phir buhat zabardast shahkar

thanks for sharing

Madhi

Feb 4 2006, 01:29 AM

Very Nice . . . .

lovely_eyes

Feb 4 2006, 01:47 PM

really nice 1

thanx for sharing

tanha_musafir

Feb 4 2006, 08:47 PM

QUOTE(FARRAN @ Feb 2 2006, 04:55 PM) [snapback]2119375[/snapback]

Aatif bhai this is truly amazing

i am completely spellbounded.

very nice post !!!

Thanx Farran for ur compliements and reply

I m really honored

khud_aashna

Feb 4 2006, 11:30 PM

Salam Atif

kia baat hai janab aap ki.....
kuch zayada hi pagal hai shayad Wo "C" larki

buhat maza aaya perh k
keep writing dear
have a nice time
mdsr

need@friend

Feb 4 2006, 11:59 PM

beautiful sharing!!!

Ghazal khushboo

Feb 5 2006, 02:44 AM

woww greattttttttt

lajawab shiri , hamesha ki tarah, jitny bhi tareef kerain wo kum hogy

Thnx Aatif Bhai

tanha_musafir

Feb 5 2006, 10:14 PM

QUOTE(SAGARKHAN @ Feb 2 2006, 05:07 PM) [snapback]2119378[/snapback]

Kamal likha aatiff bhaii lajawab likha

khush raho sadda likhtey rahoo yunheyn

Bohat Nawazish Sagar Bhaiyya iss muhabbat aur pazeraee ka.

Khush rehiya

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Feb 5 2006, 10:38 PM

QUOTE(insharah @ Feb 2 2006, 05:25 PM) [snapback]2119381[/snapback]

its reallyyyyyy SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBB
bohat bohat KHOOBSORATTTTTT

thanxxxxx for sharing

Thanx a million for ur compliments and reply.

Be blessed,

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Feb 7 2006, 12:06 AM

QUOTE(Kainat @ Feb 2 2006, 09:25 PM) [snapback]2119397[/snapback]

Too good............. thanks alot 4 sharing wih us

Bohat Shukriya Kainaat

Khush rehiya

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Feb 8 2006, 02:18 PM

Friendz

Miss_World2008

Feb 9 2006, 11:40 AM

bohotttttttttttttttttttttt khoobsoorat nazam
bhai really verry verry nice

tanha_musafir

Feb 9 2006, 10:25 PM

QUOTE(F-A-L-A-K @ Feb 3 2006, 02:08 AM) [snapback]2119433[/snapback]

Asalam-0-Alyekum

kaise hain aap Bhiya jani ....

Wah jee Kamal kar diya aik bar pher aap ne ... Bohut hi Umdda ..... KhoooB

Kitni asaani say aap ne kitni bari bari batain kar deen hain na "US" pagal larki say

Khush rahiye aur Likhte rahiye

wasalam Kashif!

Bohat shukriya nazm kee pazeraee ka.

Khush rehiya

Aatif

soz

Feb 9 2006, 10:54 PM

[color=#6600CC]PURANI BAT LAGTI HAI JO LOG AKSAR GUNGUNATE HEIN
UNHEIN HAM YAD KARTE HEIN JINHEIN HAM BHUL JATE HEIN

WOW ATIF BHAI apki tareef jitni ki jaye utni kam hai atleast mere liye bohat mushkil hai
Dua ki dua yahi hai ki ap hamesha aesi khubsurat poetry share karen aur main use zaruuuuuuuuur padhun aur apko reply karun (Ameen) ab bhi Ameen keh dijiyega ok
FIAMANILLAH[color=#6600CC]

aaireykhushi

Feb 10 2006, 01:58 AM

really mindblowing bhai

tanha_musafir

Feb 11 2006, 04:49 AM

QUOTE(umairhuda @ Feb 3 2006, 04:12 AM) [snapback]2119441[/snapback]

Assalam u Alaikum Aatif Bhai,,,,
Aap kay liey kia kahoo'n kay Allah aap ko aur aap ki shayari ko nazar e bad sey bachaey (Aameen).
Aik martaba phir bohat hi khoobsurat likha hai jo kay dil kay taroo'n ko cher gai hai

Sada khush rahein

Umair

Wasalam Umair!
yeh tumahri muhabbat hai bhaee jo duaooN main yaad rakhtay ho. Nazm kee pasandeedgi ka bohat shukriya.

Jeetay raho

Aatif

*sanjha*

Feb 11 2006, 04:39 PM

zaberdast, shayad mera pass is poetry ki tareef karne k liye alfaz nahi.

socha k teri sadgi pe likhon ek gazal,
lakin tere mayar k alfaz na mil sake.

tanha_musafir

Feb 12 2006, 12:36 AM

QUOTE(~charming girl~ @ Feb 3 2006, 02:14 PM) [snapback]2119465[/snapback]

Ab Mien kya Tareeef Karoo Atif Bhai......Suraj Ko Chiragh Dikhaney K Mutradiff ho ga nah....

bass App Khush Rahiye Our Yunhi Humarey Liye Achiiii Achiiii Nazmz likhtey Rahiye..

Allah Hafiz

Bohat Shukriya Behna G in khobsoorat alfaaz main pazeraee k liya.

DuaooN main yaad rakhna

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Feb 13 2006, 03:00 AM

QUOTE(seemaf @ Feb 3 2006, 06:20 PM) [snapback]2119508[/snapback]

Assalam-o-Alaikum

Aik baar phir buhat zabardast shahkar

thanks for sharing

Wasalam Seema G!

Bohat shukriya iss pazeraee k liya. Bohat khush rehiya,

Aatif

seemaf

Feb 13 2006, 06:41 PM

QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Feb 13 2006, 03:00 AM) [snapback]2121428[/snapback]

Wasalam Seema G!

Bohat shukriya iss pazeraee k liya. Bohat khush rehiya,

Aatif

U r welcome

tanha_musafir

Feb 13 2006, 10:23 PM

QUOTE(seemaf @ Feb 13 2006, 06:40 PM) [snapback]2121534[/snapback]

U r welcome

So nice of U

tanha_musafir

Feb 13 2006, 10:39 PM

QUOTE(Madhi @ Feb 4 2006, 01:28 AM) [snapback]2119556[/snapback]

Very Nice . . . .

tanha_musafir

Feb 16 2006, 11:05 PM

QUOTE(lovely_eyes @ Feb 4 2006, 01:46 PM) [snapback]2119614[/snapback]

really nice 1

thanx for sharing

tanha_musafir

Feb 18 2006, 04:03 AM

QUOTE(lovely_eyes @ Feb 4 2006, 01:46 PM) [snapback]2119614[/snapback]

really nice 1

thanx for sharing

Be blessed

tanha_musafir

Feb 20 2006, 02:05 AM

QUOTE(khud_aashna @ Feb 4 2006, 11:29 PM) [snapback]2119712[/snapback]

Salam Atif

kia baat hai janab aap ki.....
kuch zayada hi pagal hai shayad Wo "C" larki

buhat maza aaya perh k
keep writing dear
have a nice time
mdsr

Waslam Dear!

Thanx for the compliements,

Be blessed

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Feb 21 2006, 02:22 AM

QUOTE(Ghazal + khushboo @ Feb 5 2006, 02:44 AM) [snapback]2119755[/snapback]

woww greattttttttt
lajawab shiri , hamesha ki tarah, jitny bhi tareef kerain wo kum hogy

Thnx Aatif Bhai

Bohat Shukriya Behna G!

Jeeti raho, khush raho

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Feb 22 2006, 03:46 AM

QUOTE(need@friend @ Feb 4 2006, 11:58 PM) [snapback]2119717[/snapback]

beautiful sharing!!!

Peacemaker

Feb 23 2006, 08:59 AM

Salam

Yar Atif bahoot nice maza aagaya najanay kia kia yad aagaya apna chota howa ghar or .....

wo ik nazuk c larki this jiil mil c hansi huski
wo ik masoom sa bacha, mujhay jab papa kehta tha
meray ansoo tapktay hain main jab bhi yaad ker ta hoon
tumhari nazam perh ker hi mujhay phir yaaad hai aya
mera masoom sa beta, wo ik nazuk c larki ! ! ! ! !

sach hai tumhari post perh ker aaj dil phir bhar aya well its very nice post i love it. isi lian to yeah kuch likh di. I hope you like my lines..

Peacemaker Khush Howa

tanha_musafir

Feb 23 2006, 10:46 PM

QUOTE(Peacemaker @ Feb 23 2006, 08:59 AM) [snapback]2123617[/snapback]

Salam

Yar Atif bahoot nice maza aagaya najanay kia kia yad aagaya apna chota howa ghar or .....

wo ik nazuk c larki this jiil mil c hansi huski
wo ik masoom sa bacha, mujhay jab papa kehta tha
meray ansoo tapktay hain main jab bhi yaad ker ta hoon
tumhari nazam perh ker hi mujhay phir yaaad hai aya
mera masoom sa beta, wo ik nazuk c larki ! ! ! ! !

sach hai tumhari post perh ker aaj dil phir bhar aya well its very nice post i love it. isi lian to yeah kuch likh di. I hope you like my lines..

Peacemaker Khush Howa

Waalikum as Salam PeaceMaker!

Aap ke lines dil ko cho gaeeN bhaee. Aur yeh daikh ker acha lagga k mairi iss kawish ne kisi kay dil kay taroN ko cho liya.

Bohat khush rehiya,

aainda bhee aap kay khobsoorat reply ka intezaar rahay ga,

khush rehiya

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Feb 25 2006, 05:19 PM

Laila

Feb 28 2006, 08:53 AM

Once again ive missed something very special of urz Atif bhai

ab to ham woh ho gayee...woh kya kehtay hain...Speechless, ...

ab kuch aur hi bandobast kerna peray ga, cuz i dont wanna miss more of ur poetry,

simply awesome, superb, bayhadd kamal

Zindagi

Feb 28 2006, 12:55 PM

wah aatif kia kehnay tumhari nazam ke

hamesha hi lajawab likhtay ho.....dil khush ho gaya sach main

khush raho

Amber~

she_ff

Mar 30 2006, 04:07 AM

vry nice

tanha_musafir

Apr 2 2006, 03:01 AM

QUOTE(Laila @ Feb 28 2006, 08:53 AM) [snapback]2124438[/snapback]

Once again ive missed something very special of urz Atif bhai

ab to ham woh ho gayee...woh kya kehtay hain...Speechless, ...

ab kuch aur hi bandobast kerna peray ga, cuz i dont wanna miss more of ur poetry,
simply awesome, superb, bayhadd kamal

Bohat shukriya Siso iss kohobsoorat andaaz e tareef k liyya

mairi aaj nazer perri iss section main apni nazm per

Jeeti raho, khush raho

Aatif

tanha_musafir

Apr 2 2006, 03:23 AM

QUOTE(Zindagi @ Feb 28 2006, 12:55 PM) [snapback]2124442[/snapback]

wah aatif kia kehnay tumhari nazam ke

hamesha hi lajawab likhtay ho.....dil khush ho gaya sach main

khush raho

Amber~

Bayhadd shukriya Amber

QUOTE(she_ff @ Mar 30 2006, 04:06 AM) [snapback]2130475[/snapback]

vry nice

Rubbina

Apr 2 2006, 09:06 PM

QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Feb 2 2006, 04:06 PM) [snapback]2119372[/snapback]

welldon

kiya khub intikhab hay
yha par hum log sonaay walomay say hay agar aap log
aaisahi aachi achi intikhab lay kar aai to wo den dor nahi
jab aap kay kafi fain hongay
hum bhi aap kay aaik fain hay bhotkhob wor achi se poitry kab larahi hayaap

v.v.nice
GOD BLESS U & ALL HC MEMBER & AAL MUSLIM TOO

KnOwN_StRaNgEr

Apr 3 2006, 10:02 PM

^ahan very nice.......... keep it up

tanha_musafir

Aug 14 2006, 04:23 AM

QUOTE(Rubbina @ Apr 2 2006, 09:06 PM) [snapback]2131528[/snapback]

welldon

kiya khub intikhab hay
yha par hum log sonaay walomay say hay agar aap log
aaisahi aachi achi intikhab lay kar aai to wo den dor nahi
jab aap kay kafi fain hongay
hum bhi aap kay aaik fain hay bhotkhob wor achi se poitry kab larahi hayaap

v.v.nice
GOD BLESS U & ALL HC MEMBER & AAL MUSLIM TOO

Bht shukriya Rubina

Khush rehiya

Hesham Ahmed

Dec 23 2006, 01:35 AM

Hmm Good Atif Bahi

Meri Aik Kavita...

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