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seemaf
Yunhi saj dhaj k rehney sey kahan touqeer banti hai
Dua jazbey na orhey to kahan taseer banti hai

Jigar k zakham hi to daastan mein rang bhartey hain
Wagarna lafz likhney sey kahan tehreer banti hai

Jahan tareekiyan aseeb ki soorat musalat hon
Wahan shamain jalaney sey kahan tanveer banti hai

Shikasta manzaron ki kirchiyan aankhon mein chubti hain
Ke deewanon k khawabon ki kahan tabeer banti hai

Yeh socha thaa barasti aankh uss ko rok ley shyaad
Magar ashkon ki kariyon sey kahan zanjeer banti hai

Hazaar baar ki koshish magar mumkin nahi ----
Bhala khud hi bananey sey kahan taqdeer banti hai
*Kainaat*

superb......... each and every line is great

thanks 4 sharing ur choice
khud_aashna
once again
a very nice sharing
tanha_musafir
Kiya kehnay janab aap ke intekhaab k 0-headbang.gif


Jee khush ho gaya


Khush rehiya

Ghazal khushboo
buhut khobsurat ghazal hay 0-headbang.gif clapping3.gif

lajawab shiri 1-kahani.gif
SAGARKHAN
khoobsorat
lovely_eyes
Hazaar baar ki koshish magar mumkin nahi ----
Bhala khud hi bananey sey kahan taqdeer banti hai


wow zabar10

~charming girl~
Nice sharing smile.gif
Cindrella
Bohat acchi ha rose.gif
Daanie
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Savaira
WAHhH.................................
raat ki rani
Yunhi saj dhaj k rehney sey kahan touqeer banti hai
Dua jazbey na orhey to kahan taseer banti hai

Jigar k zakham hi to daastan mein rang bhartey hain
Wagarna lafz likhney sey kahan tehreer banti hai



wah!!!

kia kehney...! bOhat zabardast!

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Miss_World2008
niceee
Eyes2good
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Saadi
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seemaf
QUOTE(Kainat @ Feb 6 2006, 08:58 PM) [snapback]2120064[/snapback]


superb......... each and every line is great

thanks 4 sharing ur choice



blush.gif Thankoo Dear for liking smile.gif

QUOTE(khud_aashna @ Feb 6 2006, 10:57 PM) [snapback]2120083[/snapback]

once again
a very nice sharing

thanks for ur appreciation smile.gif
seemaf
QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Feb 7 2006, 12:24 AM) [snapback]2120117[/snapback]

Kiya kehnay janab aap ke intekhaab k 0-headbang.gif
Jee khush ho gaya
Khush rehiya


Assalam-o-Alaikum

Thanks for liking smile.gif


QUOTE(Ghazal + khushboo @ Feb 7 2006, 01:24 AM) [snapback]2120127[/snapback]

buhut khobsurat ghazal hay 0-headbang.gif clapping3.gif

lajawab shiri 1-kahani.gif


Thanks Ghazal for liking this Ghazal yes.gif

QUOTE(SAGARKHAN @ Feb 7 2006, 02:00 PM) [snapback]2120177[/snapback]

khoobsorat


Thanks smile.gif
Silent_Ocean
Zabaradast seema! waise ab to mere haathun mein khujli hone lagi hai...soch rahi hun ab ki baar DIARY chura hi lun , kiya khiyal hai aap ka 1-think.gif
seemaf
QUOTE(lovely_eyes @ Feb 7 2006, 04:23 PM) [snapback]2120202[/snapback]

Hazaar baar ki koshish magar mumkin nahi ----
Bhala khud hi bananey sey kahan taqdeer banti hai


wow zabar10


Thanks for liking smile.gif

QUOTE(~charming girl~ @ Feb 7 2006, 04:59 PM) [snapback]2120211[/snapback]

Nice sharing smile.gif


thanks dear smile.gif

QUOTE(raat ki rani @ Feb 8 2006, 04:06 PM) [snapback]2120419[/snapback]

Yunhi saj dhaj k rehney sey kahan touqeer banti hai
Dua jazbey na orhey to kahan taseer banti hai

Jigar k zakham hi to daastan mein rang bhartey hain
Wagarna lafz likhney sey kahan tehreer banti hai
wah!!!

kia kehney...! bOhat zabardast!

thnX 4 sharing rose.gif



Thanks soo much smile.gif

QUOTE(smartleo @ Mar 1 2006, 03:17 AM) [snapback]2124637[/snapback]

Zabaradast seema! waise ab to mere haathun mein khujli hone lagi hai...soch rahi hun ab ki baar DIARY chura hi lun , kiya khiyal hai aap ka 1-think.gif


1-think.gif ap ke iradey naik nahi lagtey mujhey

LOCKER main rakhwa doon gi dairy biggrin.gif

Thanks smile.gif
Aawaz
QUOTE(seemaf @ Feb 6 2006, 01:40 PM) [snapback]2120040[/snapback]

Yunhi saj dhaj k rehney sey kahan touqeer banti hai
Dua jazbey na orhey to kahan taseer banti hai

Jigar k zakham hi to daastan mein rang bhartey hain
Wagarna lafz likhney sey kahan tehreer banti hai

Jahan tareekiyan aseeb ki soorat musalat hon
Wahan shamain jalaney sey kahan tanveer banti hai

Shikasta manzaron ki kirchiyan aankhon mein chubti hain
Ke deewanon k khawabon ki kahan tabeer banti hai

Yeh socha thaa barasti aankh uss ko rok ley shyaad
Magar ashkon ki kariyon sey kahan zanjeer banti hai

Hazaar baar ki koshish magar mumkin nahi ----
Bhala khud hi bananey sey kahan taqdeer banti hai




Zabardastt Seemaf Jeee 0-heartbeat.gif 0-headbang.gif clapping3.gif

Kesee haiN ap ..... rose.gif

duas.gif KhuSh rehaiN... rose.gif
seemaf
QUOTE(Aawaz @ Mar 10 2006, 07:39 AM) [snapback]2126847[/snapback]

Zabardastt Seemaf Jeee 0-heartbeat.gif 0-headbang.gif clapping3.gif

Kesee haiN ap ..... rose.gif

duas.gif KhuSh rehaiN... rose.gif



Assalam-o-Aliikum

Main bilkul theek thaak Allah ka shukar hai smile.gif ap kaisi hain??

Thank u sooo much for liking my selection wub.gif
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