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aaireykhushi

Mar 4 2006, 04:45 AM

salam dosto

kiya haal hai sabka main lash pash

hamne ek koshish ki hai umeed hai apko pasund ayegi

plzzz share ur thoughts wid us

tanha_musafir

Mar 4 2006, 05:14 AM

assalam o alikum!

Kiya zaber10 surprise diya hai aap dono ne.

bhaee wah khob likha hai. Nazm pasand aai aap kee. Pehli kawish hee itni shandaar hai tu aagay mazeed behtari aai gee.

Khush rehiya aur aisay hee share kerti rehiya

Aatif

VICKY DAR

Mar 4 2006, 06:56 AM

OYEEE HOYEE KURIYEEE MUJEY SHAIRY KA KAH RAHI THI OR YAH KAYA WAHHHHHHHHH GGGGGGGGGG WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

WAQAI MAI BOHAT ACHI HY....WESEY YAH WAQAI TUMHAREE CHOICE HY WAHHHHHHHHHH YAQEEN NAHI HOO RAHA SEEMAF KERTI TU OR BAAT THI LAKIN TUM NY KAMAL KER DIYA YAH POST KER K SACH MAI BOHAT ACHI HY

Ghazal khushboo

Mar 4 2006, 09:26 AM

aray khushi buhut zabardast hay

aur presentation bhi lajawab well done

khush roho

keep sharing like this

aaireykhushi

Mar 5 2006, 08:14 AM

QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Mar 4 2006, 05:14 AM) [snapback]2125367[/snapback]

assalam o alikum!

Kiya zaber10 surprise diya hai aap dono ne.

bhaee wah khob likha hai. Nazm pasand aai aap kee. Pehli kawish hee itni shandaar hai tu aagay mazeed behtari aai gee.

Khush rehiya aur aisay hee share kerti rehiya

Aatif

walekumsalamz bhai

kiya haal hain apke

nazm pasund karne ka buhat buhat shukriya jee

QUOTE(VICKY DAR @ Mar 4 2006, 06:55 AM) [snapback]2125378[/snapback]

OYEEE HOYEE KURIYEEE MUJEY SHAIRY KA KAH RAHI THI OR YAH KAYA WAHHHHHHHHH GGGGGGGGGG WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

WAQAI MAI BOHAT ACHI HY....WESEY YAH WAQAI TUMHAREE CHOICE HY WAHHHHHHHHHH YAQEEN NAHI HOO RAHA SEEMAF KERTI TU OR BAAT THI LAKIN TUM NY KAMAL KER DIYA YAH POST KER K SACH MAI BOHAT ACHI HY

pasund karne ka shukriya

aur itni heraani wali kiya baat hay zara explain karoge

QUOTE(Ghazal + khushboo @ Mar 4 2006, 09:25 AM) [snapback]2125403[/snapback]

aray khushi buhut zabardast hay

aur presentation bhi lajawab well done

khush roho

keep sharing like this

pasund karne ka buhat shukriya dear

baqi ab seemaf api bhi akar tareef accept kareinge

cooolzee

Mar 5 2006, 01:51 PM

Nice..

Peacemaker

Mar 5 2006, 02:09 PM

salam

nice post

Peacemaker Khush Howa

*Kainaat*

Mar 6 2006, 01:03 AM

very nice...... very very nice

aap dono ko mubarak

VICKY DAR

Mar 7 2006, 07:32 AM

QUOTE(aaireyaaireykhushi @ Mar 5 2006, 08:13 AM) [snapback]2125732[/snapback]

pasund karne ka shukriya

aur itni heraani wali kiya baat hay zara explain karoge

herani wali baat hy na tum or shairy...socha na th socha na th socha na th

Savaira

Mar 7 2006, 04:36 PM

Wah.... Nice jee Nice.....

KeeP SharinG......!

insharah

Mar 7 2006, 04:44 PM

very nice janab

seemaf

Mar 7 2006, 06:22 PM

Assalam-o-Alaikum All

Thanks for liking this poem ....... lekin is main sara kamal to KHUSHI ka hai.... main idea aur wording to us ke hi hian main ne bas thora sa changing de kar arrange kiya hai

Koshish pasand karney ka buhat shukriya

Ghazal khushboo

Mar 7 2006, 06:40 PM

QUOTE(seemaf @ Mar 7 2006, 06:22 PM) [snapback]2126229[/snapback]

Assalam-o-Alaikum All

Thanks for liking this poem ....... lekin is main sara kamal to KHUSHI ka hai.... main idea aur wording to us ke hi hian main ne bas thora sa changing de kar arrange kiya hai

Koshish pasand karney ka buhat shukriya

walaikumsalam seemaf jee

buhut khoobsoorat nazm hay kya hi kehnay ap dono k

keep up da nice very very veryyyy nice work

sada khush rahain

seemaf

Mar 8 2006, 03:50 PM

QUOTE(Ghazal + khushboo @ Mar 7 2006, 06:39 PM) [snapback]2126238[/snapback]

walaikumsalam seemaf jee

buhut khoobsoorat nazm hay kya hi kehnay ap dono k

keep up da nice very very veryyyy nice work

sada khush rahain

Thanks Ghazal for ur admiration

Ghazal khushboo

Mar 9 2006, 07:43 AM

QUOTE(seemaf @ Mar 8 2006, 03:49 PM) [snapback]2126509[/snapback]

Thanks Ghazal for ur admiration

U welcome

seemaf

Mar 9 2006, 02:01 PM

QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Mar 4 2006, 05:14 AM) [snapback]2125367[/snapback]

assalam o alikum!

Kiya zaber10 surprise diya hai aap dono ne.

bhaee wah khob likha hai. Nazm pasand aai aap kee. Pehli kawish hee itni shandaar hai tu aagay mazeed behtari aai gee.

Khush rehiya aur aisay hee share kerti rehiya

Aatif

Walaikum Assalam

Thank u jinab for ur appreciation .... per is ka sab se ziada credit Khushi ko hi jata hai jis ka idea tha yeh

Agey kiya ho Allah janey filhaal to yehi hai bas

Take care

Miss_World2008

Mar 9 2006, 03:24 PM

nice

seemaf

Mar 18 2006, 11:36 AM

QUOTE(Kainat @ Mar 6 2006, 01:03 AM) [snapback]2125879[/snapback]

very nice...... very very nice

aap dono ko mubarak

Thanku so much dear...and thanks from khushi too

QUOTE(Miss_World2008 @ Mar 9 2006, 03:24 PM) [snapback]2126695[/snapback]

nice

Thanks

dr_taurus

Mar 18 2006, 02:04 PM

hmmmmm bohot zabardast bohot achy nazam hay

seemaf

Mar 21 2006, 02:10 PM

QUOTE(dr_taurus @ Mar 18 2006, 02:03 PM) [snapback]2128550[/snapback]

hmmmmm bohot zabardast bohot achy nazam hay

Thanks for ur appreciation

Charming_gurl

Apr 14 2006, 05:12 AM

v nice pic and sharing

Tum Moj Moj Misl-e-Saba Ghoomtay Raho
Kat Jayean Mairee Soch Kay Per Tum Ko Iss Say Kya

seemaf

Apr 18 2006, 03:29 AM

QUOTE(Charming_gurl @ Apr 14 2006, 05:12 AM) [snapback]2134882[/snapback]

v nice pic and sharing
Tum Moj Moj Misl-e-Saba Ghoomtay Raho
Kat Jayean Mairee Soch Kay Per Tum Ko Iss Say Kya

Thanks for liking

and nice shair