F-A-L-A-K
Mar 21 2006, 02:03 PM
Asalam-0-Alyekum jee
kaise hain aap sab bachay aur palay palay shay dost, ehbab ......
jee tu main ne soocha k kyoon n aik Kahani shuru ki jaye jise hum sab mil kar likhain .... ah0o0
kyoon kaisa IDEA hai ... ab ho ga kia k hum sab mil kar aik Paragraph likhain gay ... aur Shart yeh hai k Kahani ka tempo change na ho ok jee .........
Yeh poranay zamane ki dastaan hai jab loug safar karne k liye cars nahi balke Ghoray (Horses) istamal kiya karte thay aur cheezain laine k liye paise ki jaga "Barter System" istamal kia jata tha matlab yeh k cheez k badle main cheez le sakte hain jaisa k ager aap ko Kapas chahiye tu aap ko Gandum daina ho gi ....
Aik Gwaoun main aik Gareeb kaisaan raha karta tha jis ki omar sirf 18 sal tha aur uske 4 behan bhai aur thay jo sab us say chotay thay ..... uska baap bemaar tha usaay shadeed bukhar tha jo utarne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha aur Maa Gwaoun k Raees k ghar kaam karne jaya karti thi aur wo khud Bechara ape khaaitoun main hal chalaya karta tha...........
JEE tu is say agay aa[ shuru kijiye........... Ah0o0
prem_ki_deewani
Apr 2 2006, 04:17 PM
aik din woh larka hal chala raha thaa.. hal chalaty chalaty jab woh thak gia to aik drakht k neechay saans lainay ko baith gia ...............
F-A-L-A-K
Apr 4 2006, 02:43 AM
Usay kuch bhool mehsoos hoti hai wo Dasterkhwan bechata hai aur us par ROTI nikalta hai k itne main usse aik sadda sunaye deti hai "Beta main bohut bhooka houn muje kuch khane ko de do ALLAH tumhain iska bohut Ajar de ga"
princess
Apr 4 2006, 05:51 AM
to wo apney hisay ma say 1 roti us bazurg ko dey deta ha .. Wo bazarug roti kha ker usko Duva deta ha or ....
prem_ki_deewani
Apr 4 2006, 09:44 AM
aur phir achanak woh bazurag ghaib ho gay ...
princess
Apr 4 2006, 03:29 PM
wo kisaan bechara bara preshan hota ha k ya kia huwa to usko phir us bazurg ki awaaz dobara sunaee deti ha .......
F-A-L-A-K
Apr 7 2006, 02:47 PM
Bazurg kehte hain k "Beta tum ne is tangi k dour main bhi meri madud ki wo bhi sirf aik sadda par ... tum barre aadmi ho jao ALLAH tumhari murad pori kare ..." wo larka un baba jee ka shukriya adda karta hai aur wo baba jee pher kehte hain " Beta aaj Gharob-e-Aftab say pehlay pehlay tak jo khwahish karo gay wo pori ho gi" yeh sun kar larka bohut khush hota hai aur wo baba jee yeh keh kar Gyab ho jate hain ...........
princess
Apr 12 2006, 01:01 AM
jab us kisaan nay ya suna to usko bari khushi huee ... phir wo apna kaam chor chaar ker jaldi jaldi apney ghar gaya takey apney ghar walon say Mashwara ker sakey k konsi khawahish kerni ha
F-A-L-A-K
Apr 14 2006, 03:25 PM
Jab wo khushi khushi apne ghar pohenchta hai tu kia dekhta hai k uski "MAA" Charpayii par hoti hai aur usse dekh kar yoon lagta hai k jaise barsooon ki beemar ho .... "MAA" ko dekh kar wo sab kuch bhool jata hai aur dour kar unke pass jata hai aur poocta hai ...............
*DhanaK*
Apr 18 2006, 08:50 AM
QUOTE(F-A-L-A-K @ Apr 14 2006, 10:25 AM)

Jab wo khushi khushi apne ghar pohenchta hai tu kia dekhta hai k uski "MAA" Charpayii par hoti hai aur usse dekh kar yoon lagta hai k jaise barsooon ki beemar ho .... "MAA" ko dekh kar wo sab kuch bhool jata hai aur dour kar unke pass jata hai aur poocta hai ...............
maa'n,kya hogaya maa'n?
Laila
Apr 19 2006, 09:16 PM
maa'n jawab deti hai "Beta meri tabiyat bohat kharab hai, aaj Raees kay ghar kaam per gayee to us ki biwi ka locket gum ho gaya tha, us nay mujh per chori ka ilzaam laga ker mujhay bohat mara......." Maa'n ki tashweesh naak halat dekh ker lerka soch main per jata hai...
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