Apni aik ghazal paish kar raha hooN .. Zameen azeezi Atif (tanha_musafir) ki samjhiye ... unki ghazal saamne nigahooN ke isaraab rehne day ... meiN sirf radeef meiN ma'moli si tabdili hoi hai, unhooN ne 'rehne day' ki radeef ikhtiyaar ki thi aur maiN ne 'rehne dou' batour radeef ikhtiyaar ki hai. Lekin iss khoobsurat zameen ko unhi ki samjha jaaey
Ghazal paish.e.khidmat hai .. ummeed hai aap apni qeemti araa se nawazaiNge.
seemaf
Mar 27 2006, 10:31 PM
Walaikum Assalam
Wah buhat khoobsurat ghazal share ki ap ne
Thanks
tanha_musafir
Mar 28 2006, 01:42 AM
assalam o alikum Khalish bhaee! aaj tu SoS kee kismat jaag gaee k aap ne hamaray saath apna khobsoorat kalam share kiya. Bohat acha lagga Khalish bhaee. Hammm jaisooN ko aap kee rehnumaee kee bohat zaroorat hai aur iss tarah aap ka kalam perhnay se hamm bohat kuch seekhtay hain. Ghazal k baray kuch kehna sooraj ko chiragh dikhaana hai.
Khush rehiya
aatif
*Kainaat*
Mar 30 2006, 03:40 PM
veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy NIce
Ghazal khushboo
Mar 31 2006, 07:33 AM
buhuttt khoob
Savaira
Mar 31 2006, 01:55 PM
VERY NICE.....
WoundedSmile
Mar 31 2006, 06:15 PM
Woh Hisaab Rehney Do ....nice one gee
raja_ki_rani
Apr 2 2006, 03:53 AM
very nice
KnOwN_StRaNgEr
Apr 2 2006, 12:42 PM
nice one.............
Charming_gurl
Apr 8 2006, 09:59 PM
bohut khoob janab zabardastttt Wounderfull
shehlakhan
Apr 10 2006, 05:19 AM
bahut khubsurat ghazal.
F-A-L-A-K
Apr 11 2006, 08:46 PM
Asalam-0-Alyekum
kaise hain aap Khalish bhaiya ...
Umeed karta hoon kay abhi aap muje Bholay nahi hoon gay aur ager bhool gaye hain tu qasoor aap ka nahi main bi tu 2.5 yrs k baas aya hoon na ...
Khair ab baat ho jaye aap ki Ghazal ki ..... Baas janab is say ziada kia kahoon k aik Mukamel Ghazal parhne ko mili hai ...
Goodi GooD bhaiya jani .......... Khush Rahiye
Khalish
Apr 13 2006, 08:46 PM
Salaam Dosto !
Aap sab ka buhot buhot shukriya
tanha_musafir Buhot nawaazish Aatif mohabbat hai aap ki apne bhai se .. Khush RahaiN
Kainat Buhot buhot shukriya
Ghazal + khushboo Buhot buhot shukriya
Savaira Buhot buhot shukriya, buhot nawaazish hai aap ki
WoundedSmile Buhot inaayat hai aap ki
raja_ki_rani Buhot shukriya, buhot nawaazish hai aap ki
lonely_but_happy Buhot shukriya
Charming_gurl Buhot shukriya
shehlakhan Buhot buhot shukriya
F-A-L-A-K Buhot buhot shukriya, buhot nawaazish hai aap ki ... 'be.dard maiN ne tujh ko bhulaaya nahi hunooz' glad to see you back Khush RahaiN
Charming_gurl
Apr 14 2006, 04:28 AM
shukriya ke kia baat hai .. jo cheez achi lagi bas kahi well thanx and u always welcome bhai
main uska lamha-e-mojood hoon magar wo shakhs--fuzool waqt samajh ker guzaarta he mujhe--na bhoolta he na dil main utaarta he mujhe--hamesha maar muhabbat ki maarta he mujhe
doctor_whiteblood
Jun 12 2006, 08:45 PM
bey intaha khiubsurat tehrer janaab ..
kaya kahne ..
Buhaat Zabardaast
Duaon main yaad rakhiye ga
raza
Shajr-e-saya
Mar 14 2007, 09:47 PM
VERY NICE
*AaNsoo
Mar 18 2007, 07:03 AM
buhat khoob ji...
JaBBaR
May 22 2007, 02:28 PM
Haosla nahi dil mein daikhnay ka ta’beerai’n Khuaab jo aankho’n mein hain unko khuaab rehnay do
Bahot hi khoobsorat ghazal share ki hai aap ne Khalish bhai...
khush rahiay
faisal_rwp
Nov 7 2007, 12:31 PM
Shukriaa ...
lailabz
Dec 4 2007, 07:00 PM
QUOTE(Charming_gurl @ Apr 8 2006, 09:59 PM)
bohut khoob janab zabardastttt Wounderfull :)
Beautiful..excellent.
rani aapi
Dec 10 2007, 04:34 AM
BOHUT HI ZABERDAST SHARING HAI KHALISH BHAI YOUN TO POORI GHAZAL KA JAWAB NAHIN MAGAR YEH SHAIR TODIL MAIN UTAR GIYA HAI
CHEEN LO MERA SAB LOUT LO MERI HASTI BUS KITAAB MAIN SOOKHA WOH GULAB REHNAY DO...
*Life*
May 2 2008, 07:45 AM
QUOTE(Khalish @ Mar 27 2006, 10:19 PM)
Azeezaan.e.Mehfil
Apni aik ghazal paish kar raha hooN .. Zameen azeezi Atif (tanha_musafir) ki samjhiye ... unki ghazal saamne nigahooN ke isaraab rehne day ... meiN sirf radeef meiN ma'moli si tabdili hoi hai, unhooN ne 'rehne day' ki radeef ikhtiyaar ki thi aur maiN ne 'rehne dou' batour radeef ikhtiyaar ki hai. Lekin iss khoobsurat zameen ko unhi ki samjha jaaey
Ghazal paish.e.khidmat hai .. ummeed hai aap apni qeemti araa se nawazaiNge.
bhout khoob ,,,very nice wording
**Gohar
May 2 2008, 05:39 PM
Hausla nahin Dil main, dekhney ka Ta'birain Khwab hain jo ankho"n main , un ko khwab rehney Do
Laa Jawaab Khalish Bhaiee.... !!!!
hawwa ki beti
May 6 2008, 05:27 AM
Baa zoQ aur manjhi hui poetry hai aap ki Ghazal kay tumaam ashaar khoobsurat hain is liay kisi shair ko Quote nahin kiya.
Sada khush rahain Mohatram Khuda karey zor e Qalam aur ziada ho Aslam o alaikum............!
Cupid Princess
May 18 2008, 02:49 PM
so sad very sad
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