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seemaf
Jheel main zeest ki
Kuch aise bhi hotey hain Habab
Jin ko suraj ki kiran aur ujagar karkey
Dil main, yadon ke jharokon main
Sajadeti hhai
Woh jharokey, jo kabhi band nahi hotey hain
Jin main jaltey hian sada, muntazir ankhon ke chiragh
Jin ke paron pe, samandar ki si lehrain hian muheet
Satah-e-aab pe kholi hui ulfat ki kitab
Jiase lehron main samandar ki, bahey mil ke sharab
Narm ro lehron main, jazbat ke shafaf habab
Dil mera, aise hababon ki baqa mangta hai
Aik deewana faqat, ehd-e-wafa mangta hai
Ik habab, apni rawani ko hawa mangta hai

Thanks laila for correcting me smile.gif
Laila
Wah,,,bohat khoob, ... smile.gif , yeh to aisi hi baat hoi, jaisay kuch waqiyaat yaadon ki tehri jheel main kanker ban ker girtay hain, aur jheel kay pani main dairay say bantay chalay jatay hain...yahan bhi wohi baat hoi

Dil mera, Aisay hi Habaon ki baqa mangta hai

poori poem hi kamal hai, very nice choice Seema, rose.gif its fabulous rose.gif




aur haan, Habab word per zabar hota hai, is liyay ussay Habab prounounce kertay hain, smile.gif
Charming_gurl
QUOTE(Laila @ Apr 8 2006, 06:56 PM) [snapback]2133104[/snapback]

Wah,,,bohat khoob, ... smile.gif , yeh to aisi hi baat hoi, jaisay kuch waqiyaat yaadon ki tehri jheel main kanker ban ker girtay hain, aur jheel kay pani main dairay say bantay chalay jatay hain...yahan bhi wohi baat hoi

Dil mera, Aisay hi Habaon ki baqa mangta hai

poori poem hi kamal hai, very nice choice Seema, rose.gif its fabulous rose.gif
aur haan, Habab word per zabar hota hai, is liyay ussay Habab prounounce kertay hain, smile.gif




sahi kaha app nai .. bohut achi ghazal likhi hia
Silent_Ocean


Zabardast poetry 0-headbang.gif Seema zindabad smile.gif Is liye ke seema ki colletion zabardast hai blush.gif



F-A-L-A-K
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm Bohut hi umdda......... Bohut Khooob

Khush rahiye
Dua!!
bahut khoob janab


waisey main uss din issi ko share karnay ka kehrhi thi biggrin.gif
Miss_World2008
bohot zabardast
khud_aashna
Simply Superb smile.gif

intihaai khoobsurat intikhaab
*Kainaat*


nice sharing appi dear 1-kahani.gif
Daanie
wonderful sharing smile.gif
seemaf
QUOTE(Laila @ Apr 8 2006, 06:56 PM) [snapback]2133104[/snapback]

Wah,,,bohat khoob, ... smile.gif , yeh to aisi hi baat hoi, jaisay kuch waqiyaat yaadon ki tehri jheel main kanker ban ker girtay hain, aur jheel kay pani main dairay say bantay chalay jatay hain...yahan bhi wohi baat hoi

Dil mera, Aisay hi Habaon ki baqa mangta hai

poori poem hi kamal hai, very nice choice Seema, rose.gif its fabulous rose.gif
aur haan, Habab word per zabar hota hai, is liyay ussay Habab prounounce kertay hain, smile.gif



Wah buhat khoobsurti se ap ne explain kiya hai 0-headbang.gif zabardast

Thanks u dear for liking aur correcting me smile.gif
Laila
QUOTE(seemaf @ Apr 12 2006, 12:46 PM) [snapback]2134329[/snapback]

Wah buhat khoobsurti se ap ne explain kiya hai 0-headbang.gif zabardast

Thanks u dear for liking aur correcting me smile.gif




ab khoobsurat loug to khoobsurati say hi explain kerain gay na ... blush.gif

ur always welkome, wub.gif
seemaf
QUOTE(Charming_gurl @ Apr 8 2006, 09:51 PM) [snapback]2133132[/snapback]

sahi kaha app nai .. bohut achi ghazal likhi hia


Thanks for liking smile.gif

QUOTE(smartleo @ Apr 9 2006, 06:26 AM) [snapback]2133173[/snapback]



Zabardast poetry 0-headbang.gif Seema zindabad smile.gif Is liye ke seema ki colletion zabardast hai blush.gif




Thanks dear for liking my collection smile.gif

QUOTE(F-A-L-A-K @ Apr 9 2006, 08:39 AM) [snapback]2133193[/snapback]

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm Bohut hi umdda......... Bohut Khooob

Khush rahiye



Buhat buhat shukriya ap ki pasandeedgi ka yes.gif

QUOTE(Dua!! @ Apr 9 2006, 02:31 PM) [snapback]2133304[/snapback]

bahut khoob janab
waisey main uss din issi ko share karnay ka kehrhi thi biggrin.gif



Thankoo thankoo yes.gif

Oh achaa .... chalo ab to main ne kardi share blush.gif
Charming_gurl
roth jatay ho to kuch aor haseen lagtay ho----ham nay yeh soch kay tumhein khafa rakha hey
seemaf
QUOTE(Miss_World2008 @ Apr 9 2006, 02:39 PM) [snapback]2133312[/snapback]

bohot zabardast


Thanks smile.gif

QUOTE(khud_aashna @ Apr 9 2006, 05:09 PM) [snapback]2133337[/snapback]

Simply Superb smile.gif

intihaai khoobsurat intikhaab


Thanks for liking:)

QUOTE(Kainat @ Apr 9 2006, 08:40 PM) [snapback]2133408[/snapback]



nice sharing appi dear 1-kahani.gif



Thanks a lot dear wub.gif

QUOTE(Daanie @ Apr 10 2006, 10:19 AM) [snapback]2133523[/snapback]

wonderful sharing smile.gif


Thanks smile.gif
Rubbina
QUOTE(seemaf @ Apr 8 2006, 06:37 PM) [snapback]2133101[/snapback]

Jheel main zeest ki
Kuch aise bhi hotey hain Habab
Jin ko suraj ki kiran aur ujagar karkey
Dil main, yadon ke jharokon main
Sajadeti hhai
Woh jharokey, jo kabhi band nahi hotey hain
Jin main jaltey hian sada, muntazir ankhon ke chiragh
Jin ke paron pe, samandar ki si lehrain hian muheet
Satah-e-aab pe kholi hui ulfat ki kitab
Jiase lehron main samandar ki, bahey mil ke sharab
Narm ro lehron main, jazbat ke shafaf habab
Dil mera, aise hababon ki baqa mangta hai
Aik deewana faqat, ehd-e-wafa mangta hai
Ik habab, apni rawani ko hawa mangta hai

Thanks laila for correcting me smile.gif



SALAM HC & SEEME THIS IS REALY V.NICE LIKE U YAA JO AAP
POITRY HC PAR POST KARTI HAAY AAP KAI TAM POST SUBSAY
PHALY MAY HC PAR PARTA HO UR A REALY VERY NICE LIKE THIS
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ALLAH BLESSS U & ALL HC MEMBER & ALL MUSLIMS TOOO rose.gif
Ghazal khushboo
bay hadd khoob surat intikhab 0-headbang.gif

thnx for sharing 0-love.gif
Savaira
Very Nice SharinG jee...
seemaf
QUOTE(Rubbina @ Apr 18 2006, 10:28 PM) [snapback]2136740[/snapback]

SALAM HC & SEEME THIS IS REALY V.NICE LIKE U YAA JO AAP
POITRY HC PAR POST KARTI HAAY AAP KAI TAM POST SUBSAY
PHALY MAY HC PAR PARTA HO UR A REALY VERY NICE LIKE THIS
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ALLAH BLESSS U & ALL HC MEMBER & ALL MUSLIMS TOOO rose.gif



Walaikum Assalam

Thanks for liking my posts smile.gif


QUOTE(Ghazal + khushboo @ Apr 19 2006, 12:06 AM) [snapback]2136754[/snapback]

bay hadd khoob surat intikhab 0-headbang.gif

thnx for sharing 0-love.gif


Buhat shukriya ghazal... pasanndeedgi ka smile.gif

QUOTE(Savaira @ Apr 19 2006, 02:58 PM) [snapback]2136841[/snapback]

Very Nice SharinG jee...


Thanks for liking jee smile.gif
insharah
bohat bohat bohat Khoooobbbb 0-headbang.gif
really zabardast 0-headbang.gif

thanxxxxx for sharing smile.gif
Charming_gurl
bohut zabardastttt
*DhanaK*
acche zauq ki baat hi juda hai smile.gif
tooo good
keep sharing smile.gif
seemaf
QUOTE(Charming_gurl @ Apr 23 2006, 10:21 PM) [snapback]2138093[/snapback]

bohut zabardastttt

Thanks smile.gif

QUOTE(shafaq @ Apr 24 2006, 09:53 AM) [snapback]2138219[/snapback]

acche zauq ki baat hi juda hai smile.gif
tooo good
keep sharing smile.gif


Baat to Qadardanon ki bhi hoti hai na... warna kaise pata chaley ke achha hai ya bura smile.gif

Thanks for u appreciation wub.gif
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