RULES:

1- Tamam Kirdar koshish karain gay ke jab unke Dialogues chal rahay hoon tu wo wo ager roz na bhi a sakain tu aik din baad tu zaroor ayeen
2- Over Acting is DRAMA main bilkul hi mana hai is liye is baat ko achi tarha Zehan Nasheen kar lijiye.

3- Yeh DRAMA Mo’Aashi , Samaji , Mo’Aasharti aur Tab’qati pehlo’oun par hai is liye Sanjeedgi ka bhi khyal kijiye ga.

4- Dialogues ussi color main likhain jayeen gay jin main KIRDAROUN ke naam ‘main’ likhoon ga.

5- Yeh aik “Family” forum hai is liye Dialogues bolte hoye is baat ka khyal rakhiye ga ke iss Board ko Pur’Aman rehna chahiye aur kaheen hum Board kay Asool-o-Zawabet say tu kinara kash nahi ho rahay.

6- Ager Kirdar kuch Sooch bhi raha hai tu wo bhi aap likhain gay …… jaise ke: ‘koyi shakhas car drive kar raha hai lekin soochta hai ke muje aaj apni AMMI ko khala ke ghar lekar jana hai tu aap yeh cheez BRAKETS main likhain gay’ takay role ke saath sahi insaaf ho sakay

7*- “HG” kay tamam members (Khud role play karne walay bhi) kisi bhi aik SCENE ke khatam hone par us par comment de saktay hain unki Tajaweez aur Tanqeed ko pasand kiya jaye ga lekin beja behas say parheez kijiye ga.

* (is silsalay main aik aur kaam bhi kia ja sakta hai ke Drama tu aik thread main chalta rahay aur batain karne ya tareef-o-tanqeed ke liye aik aur thread start kar di jaye ….. aap dostoo ki kiya Ra’aye hai is bare main …!!!!)

ROLES:

Neha: Kainaat
Kashmala: Sahera
Bahaa: Thirsty Sea
Ebtihaj: Falak
Imad: Dream Marchent

Bilal: Risk Taker
Khurram: Leo the Great

ILham: Sohni Kudi
Col. Sarfaraz: Falak
Haziq: Shokh

Sur'raya: Barsat
Anwer: Seemaf
Max Rodrigues: Shokh

Noor-Jihaan:Mir Sumbul Mir
Farzana: Nani Pari
Asif:Seemaf

Ok.... main neha hoon

NEHA : Bari Behan, Age 26/27, Edu. B.A , Khoobsurat, Sanjeeda aur Mo'atber lekin hasne bolne wali Larki.............


Drama kab shuru ho ga ??

u r rite

Drama...seperate chaley ga...to aik sequence rahey ga....or koi bhi aa ker ous ko perhey ga...to continuity feel ho gi ous ko.....however u can just add about"what will be the next scene and who will be the participants"


Direction (u r director i suppose u will direct what to do next) k liey aik seperate post honi chahiey....so that participents can learn, where the story is going and to do next


and suggestions and comments k liey aik new post hi suit karey g


and Falek g u forgot to attach different colours with the names of different characters




Neha to ap age mein mujh se bari ho , wesey ap ka kirdar kafi mushkil he kuk sanjeeda bhi or hansney bolney vali bhi aik sath


usually jo sanjeeda hota he wo hansta bolta kem hi he

or han Neha g aik baat or


mujh se (i mean Bilal) se bach ker rahey ga, kuk mein kafi shararti hoon

Kitni dafa kaha hay kay ma Col. Sarfaraz aur MAX hoon

Aur comments kay liye thread seprate hi rakhain to behtar ho ga is kay ilawa oppar shaid rule number 7 may aap nay typing error bhi kia hay so check kar lijie

or mera twin brother Khurrem


hello brother, LEO

remeber tum or mein sharati bhi hein or Twin bhi so its going to be a fun


mujh ko kitna shooq tha k mera koi twin ho


ab maza aye ga, hum dono twins seb logon ko maza chaka dein gey,


ab kuk hum dono ki shakel bhi aik jesi he to switch honey mein bhi maza aye ga, Khurem ki jaga bhi BIlal hi ho ga, or log samjhein gey k Khurem ye bongiyan mar raha he




theek he k ap colonl ho, per retired ho, ye kaya k gum her vaqt app logon per taan leti ho

mujh ko to legta he k ap ne sarey charecters ko goliyan mar deni hein, LOLZZZZZZZZZZ

Jee... ye Falak jee ne hi barra bana diya hai werna meri age tu...

ye sanjeeda aur hasnay bolnay wali bhi director sahab ne mix kiya hai

chlain dekhtay hain.. main kaisa character kerti hon phir

aur aap apnay character ki description tu bata deen zara ...

Bilal : Doctor , Good Looking , 24/25 , Shararti

Khurram : Advocate , Good looking , 24/25 , Shararti

(dono judwan bhai hain aur Karachi main hi rehte hain)

apney sath sath apney twin ki description or apna city bhi bata raha hoon

wesey ap or mein dono KHi mein hein, ab kuk mein Doc hoon, to ap jeb bhi bemar hoon plz merey mujh se hi ilaj kervaye ga kuk mein ne kabhi aesey kisi bandey ka ilaj nahi kiya, jo k sanjeeda bhi ho or hans mukh bhi heeheeeeeheeeeeeeeeee lolz

ok ab theek hai..thanks (f)
aur han mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai k ek alag se thread bhi banana chahie jis main sari baten karenge..is bare main..

Hello bro RT

Han g me or u khul k shararat karein gay
Aha ab tumhara shok poora ho jaye ga twins ka or mera bhi shok poora ho jaye ga k mera bhi koi bhai hai
bilkul bilkul hum dono ne mill k in baqi sab ko khoob peetna hai
Na aisa na ho k hum dono ki shakal same ho warna apnay ilaj se mareez tum maaro gay or jail jaoo ga mein
Chalo agar tumharay ilaj se koi patient mar jaye or us k relatives tum per case karden to mein tumhara case lad loo ga
Theek hai na

arright!!! Kool!!

no no no!

me Imad! SOBER

ahmm ahmm!

waiting for....

Aaj kisi bhi waqt main 1st Scene POST kar doon ga .............. ok

aur wo Scene "NEHA" , "KASHMALA" , aur "BAHAA" ka hai ok

kekekekkekekeke

u r welcome my dear twin

jeb aesey do zaberdast twins hoon to hamarey agey kis ki dal gelni he? kekekkekekekke

yaar ab mein itna bora bho doc nahi hoon k mareez ki jaan hi le loon

han ye ho sekta he, k jeb tum kisi client ka case haro or wo tumhari pitai karey, to mein tumhara ilaj karon ga hahahahhaha

OK sir ....

Ok jee

Kahan Seema se mujhey "Anwar" aur "Asif" bana diya


Anwar : Sur'raya ka shoher , Koyi kam nahi karta , Be intaha Lal'chii

Asif: Khoobsurati ka Aseer , M.C.S aur M.A (eng) kia hai , Har khoobsurat cheez inki kamzoori hai , Falsafay ke shookeen hai , Age 31/32

drama kab shuru ho raha hai??aur kahan??
kia isi thread main shuru hoga kia???

DRAMA new thread main shuru ho chuka hai ... aur us thread ko PIN kar diya gaya hai aap check kar lo .......... Ah0o0

acha ok main dekhti hun..
thanks ahhoo

By the way...yahan per lerkon ka role bhi lerkiyon ko kyoon diya ja raha hai...lagta hai qayamat waqai kareeb hai..mardon ka Ka'al per gaya hai...

Aslam Alikum

Je, Bahaa hazir hay apna role play karnay kay lia



Bye the way, Falak, ap say phocna tha ka ap male hay ya female Jaldi dasna

scene 2

where is scene 1

direct scene 2 per kesey aa gaye hum log??????????

Theek dono bhai mill k aik doosray k kaam ayen gay theek hai na my twin bro



Aray bhai scene 1 ho chuka
Ab dekho scene 2 kis ka hota hai

Falak bhai scene 2 kis ka hai

woh chokra sahi to kehria hai..

scene 1 kab hogaya??

aur scene two ap dekhen wahan usko pinned kardia hai baat cheet main..

Oho .... aap loog wo wali post dekhain na Jo pin hui hai

Tooti Kahan Kamand title hai Drama ka..OK



Aur Haan maine aik sawal poochna tha... Dierctor sahab

Kamand ka kiya matlab hota hai

Mir jee scene one start ho chuka hai u check to karo sahe se

Director Sahib

Ye daramay ko kis ki nazar laag gai hay

KAMAND

kamand is sort of equipment, it is used for climing on altitudes (like walls, rocks, etc etc)

aik rope ke agey aik iron ka aesa piece laga detey hein jis ki kafi sari nokein hoti hein phir ous ko ghuma ker ous cheez per phinka jata he jis per cherhna ho

ye lohey ka tukra apni special space ki vaja sekisi na kisi cheez mein phans jata he, bus phir rope paker ker oper climb kiya ja sekta he

Laila meyn aghya hon ab tumhen fiker kerney ki kya zarorat hey


yeh dialog naheen mera reply hey




"Choti si Dunya" aap ko kamand ka naheen maloom

kher "Risk taker" ne khob Kamand per "kamand bandhi" hey

tum tu baat hi mat karo na muj say .... Pakki Kat-Tiiiiiiiiiiiii

and i am really very khafa yaaR ............. keh diya na baas keh diya


jee Shayed .......... tabhi main ne chor diya iska Peecha .......... Ah0o0




Wa'Alyekum Salam

Jeeti rahiye Khush rahiye .....

ab tak tu aap ko maloom ho gaya hoon ke main koon hoon

Acha woo ... !!!

sehi... Good and Thanks




kyun ke ye tu main... kabhi bi quess na ker sakti






ab maloom ho gaya

ab main ye sooch rahi hon .. hamary drama meen kamand wala kaam kis ne kerna hai who is going to climb

Participate to mene bhi kya tha lakin ab samajh mein nahin aa raha k kerna kya he

kuch nahi karna baas intazar karna hai ke pher kab acha waqt aye ga ... kyoon ke ab yeh tab hi shuru karun ga ...... Ah0o0





yaaR aap ke samne hi sab kuch hai ... ab bolo jab koyi sahi say interest hi nahi le raha tu main start kar ke karta bhi kiya yeh tu acha hoa bilkul shuru main hi elam ho gaya warna baad main muje bouht dukh hota Ah0o0

yeh waqt aane mein itni der kyun..!!

ya he is right...main bhi yahi dekhrahi thi k koi intrust nahin le raha ziada..
aur agar isi tarha chalta raha to hamari entry to bhool hi jaao aahhoo..
aur log to star plus ki kahanion ka kehte hain k khatam hi nahin hoti..ab log yeh kahenge k inki kahani to shuru hi nahin hoti aur khatam hojati hai..

DRama khatem

jee baja Irshad farmaya aap nay ........ Ah0o0



Ah0o0 jee Ah0o0

ye tu koi baat na hui

sab hi tu pooch rahay hain drama ke liye
phir kon nahi interest ley raha ???

Chala lain na drama...!!!

ok booooooooooooss aur koyi hukam

Shukriyaaaaa

haan khatam drama chalo apne ghar jao ammi pareshan horahi hongi..




ahhoo k bache hamara 2 kilo khoon jala k khud hans rahe hain aahhoo

Meray Liye lkon sa character bacha hai????

mera role kahan hai

Janab main ab nayay siray say ROLES post karun ga tu aap sab aik bar pher thori si mehnat kijiye ga takay ROLE select kar sakain OKies .......... Ah0o0

yeh kia ab role change honge kia??
khuda k waste mujhe koi dhang ka role dedena uncle..plzz

janab meri nazar main tu mera har ROLE dhang ka hi hai ............ Ah0o0 Aunty jee

acha waise kher se yeh drama shuru hone main kitne saal lagenge??
zara humain is baare main aap kuch bataenge??

Jab sab loog poray ho jayeen gay tab start kar doon ga .... Ah0o0

p.s: nice siggy janab

ok jee jesi aapki marzi..
thankas ae meri bachpan ki photto hai..

yeh jhoot bolna bhi bachpan main hi seekha tha kiya