salam.

ik baar phir.

bohat khoob aur har lafz lajwab.hameesha ki tarah hi ab k bhi aap ki shayeri

kamal hay.realy like it.

likhte rahiye humain aap ki post ka intezaar rehta hay,


bohat saari duaain aap k liye aur aap ki soch k liye.

Assalam-o-Alaikum!!

Buhat Zabardast

Hamesha ki tarah aik aur khoobsurat Takhleeq

Very niceeee..........

and beautiful too !!

bahoot khoob atif bahi........
waisay koi itna kahey toh baat maan leni chahiye....kisi ko disturb nahi karna chahiye....

INHEIN SOCHON MEIN BHEEGA HUN
MAIN TANHA BHEEGTA KION HUN!!!!
BOHAT KHUB ATIF BHAI WAQYI HAMESHA KI TARHA LAJAWB HAI APKI YE POST BHI
AUR HAM SAB APNE APKO BOHAT KHUSH NASEEB SAMJHTE HEIN KI HAMEIN APKI ITNI BEHTREEN SHYAERI PADHNE KO MILTI HAI AUR PHIR BHI MERE JAISE GHAI ZIMMEDAR LOG PADHNE MEIN ITNI DER LAGATE HEIN
PAR MUJHE KHUSHI HOTI HAI JAB MAIN ATI HUN APKI GHAZAL SABSE PADHTI HUN
THNX
FIAMANILLAH
DUA

salam bhai jee
bohat hi khoobsurat kawish hai aap ki

khush rahye

Waah
ek baar phir bohat khubsurat aur bohat umdaah nazm....jio Aatif bhaya kia zabardast kalaam share kia hay........

thanks alotttttttttttttttttttttttt for sharing this marvellous nazm...
MAY ALLAH BLESS U EVER

Bohat Shukriya Aap sab ka


Khush rehiya

Aatif

aap ka bhi bahoot bahoot shukarya atif k aapnay etni khoobsoorat nazam hum say share ki. aap say aur tamam deger dostouN say darkhast hai k apni post kartay waqt iss baat ka khayaal rakhaiN k kissi aur forumn ki publicity
HC par nah karaiN nah img maiN aur nah siggy maiN....... hamaiN majbooran aap ki post maiN kuch editing karni paRi. omeed hai k aap ayandah khayal rakhengay.

mukhlis\
AA

ab huM tareef karein gey tO chOta MoOh bari baat hO jaye gi


phr bhi... bOhat khOobsurat nazaM hai!

Mohtaram AA bhaee!
Gusakhi muaaf, ager aap ko pata ho tu main HC per taqreeban 3 saal se hooN aur HC is like my first home. Jab bhee image banata hooN main tu amooman aik forum k liya nahin hota aur uss per kuch nahin likhta mager kabhi kabhi lihk bhee daita hooN. Iss ka hergiz matlab Advertisment nahin hai. Advertise kernay k aur bhee bht se tareeqay haiN. Ager aap ko aisi koee baat nazer aai thee tu aap mujhay pm ker daitay main khud image badal daita ta k aap nahaq iss zehamt se bach saktay aur mairi nazm bhee readable rehti. Anyhow, aainda main khiyaal rakhooN ga.
Khush rehiya
Aatif

atif bhai

aap ka shukarya k aap nay hamari baat samajh li..... aap khud etnay sr. member haiN aap ko to maloom hi hona chahiyeh k apni post / signature k zariyeh aik forum maiN kissi doosray forum ka tazekara kuch monasib naheeN......... hamaiN tawatar say members ki taraf say aap ki post ki mazkoorah shikayat milli thee.
hamaiN omeed hai k aap ayandah ehteyaat karengay aur apni khoob.soorat poetry say hasbay sabiq mustafeed honay ka moqa detay rahengay.

mukhlis
AA

Mairi shikayat kis ne kee






Jee inshAllah aainda khiyaal rakha jaee ga


Khush rehiya

Asalam-0-Alyekum

aaj kafi dino baad yahaan kar chakar laga aur aap ki itni achi NAZAM parhi tu dil bagh bagh ho gaya .... Bohut hi zabar10 bhai jee ...... aap ki tareef main kuch kehna bara mushkil hota hai kyoon ke zameen-e-zehan par ittne alfaz nahi ugte jitne lafzoon say aap ki poetry ki tareef mumkin ho sakay ....... Bohut hi achi nazm likhi hai aap ne .... aur bohut achay jazbat ke saath ........ Sadda Khush rahain .... Ameen

Waalikum as Salam Falak bhaee!
Aap ke muhabbat ka bht bht mashkoor hooN, DuaooN main yaad rakhiya aur aisay he hosla afzaee fermaatay rahain.
Aatif

bohot khoob

Wasalam

Bht Shukriya Sahil, Khush raho

Aatif

salam


bohoot achi lagi nazm ....keep sharing




tahir....

waalikum as salam Bhaee jee!
Kaisay hain aap aur kahan gumm hain? Koee narazgi hai kia?

Nazm ke pasandeedgi ka bht shurkiya

aatif

Mein ney bhi tareef ki thi Mra bhi shukriya ada kar deytey

I m really really sorry Behna G k aap ka shukriya nahin adda ker sakka, actually main kuch dinooN k liya net kamm use ker raha tha so itni tafseeli jaiza nahin lay sakka, baharhaal mairi ghalti hai aur main iss per sherminda hooN, inshAllah aainda khiyaal rakhooN ga.

Umeed hai aap ke naraazgi door ho gaee ho gee?


Jeeti rehiya

Aatif




Sorry 4 the Delay Sis


Bohat bohat shukiya aap kee iss muhabbat aur pazeraee ka


Jeeti rehiya

Assaalm o alaikum Atif

ab baar baar tareef nahiii hoti hai mujh se aik se hi alfaaz se........
buhat achi hai bas isi ko kafi samjho...

yaar waise tumharay zehen maiN itnay khoobsurat alfaaz kahaN se aa jatay hain in khoobsurat khayalat ko alfaaz ka jama' pehnanay k liye...........amazing

me fine or mazay maiN guzar rahi hai alhamdoLillah. buhat kam aana hota hai ab net per
tum sunao kaise guzar rahi.........?
zindagi se baat ho hi jati hai..........she is fine as well

khush raho
mdsr

buhut khobsorat nazm hay jitny bhi tareef kerain kum hay.......

khush rahain Atif bhai

Bht bht shukriya Mdsr

Khush raho

DuaooN main yaad rakhna

kia baat hai NICE

Na janey kiun bhula kar bhee yaad atta hai wo
Maqsoos us main koi tou baat haikami..........

Refreshed

arrey janab...lajawab hai...bht hi takleefdeh ehsah hai...lekin zabardast janab! lafzon mein kis khoobsurti se dhal diya hai aap ne....impressive janab!

salam alikum
atif bhai
bohot khoob nazm hai
khush rahin sada aap..
mazeed ka intizaar rahay ga

bhaiya jani adaab boht hi zaberdast hamesha ki tarha aj yahan a kar aik apna pan feel ho rha hai bhaiya jani ap ka number muj sey missing ho gya hai plz PM me ur num.or mera boht sa pyar or duain ap k liye ap khoob taraqi karain ameen or yeh nazam to hamesha ki tarha dil ko cho gai

Very nice

very nice.