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tanha_musafir

Sep 15 2006, 02:14 AM

Assalam o alikum Ehliyaan e Zoq
Kal pehli daffa aik geet c nazm likhnay ke jussarat kee hia, Dertay Dertay Aap kee mehfil main laaya hooN, apni aara se mustafeed fermaiya ga.

Reply ka muntazir RahooN ga

Aatif

وہی ایک چہرہ

Tumhaari Hansi k GulabooN main daikha Wohi aik Chehra
SawalooN main daikha JawabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Wohi aarzoo thee k paani pe rakh k qadam main chalooN gee
Wohi justajoo thee k main urr sakki tu gagan choo sakooN gee
KahooN kia k kitnay hijabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Wohi shokhiyaan jinn se lipti huee zindagi muskuraee
Wohi khankhanaata sa lehjja k dil main muhabbat jagaee
Mujhay yun lagga jaisay khawabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Wohi Khawaab-zarooN ke baatain Wohi ChaanD TarooN k qissay
Wohi TitliyuN, Jugnao'On ke Katha, AbsharooN k qissaay
Inhi barishooN main, SahabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Tumhari nigahooN main likhi udaasi kee tehreer daikhi
Dhanak muskurahat main lipti huee ghamm kee tasweer daikhi
Judaee k kitnay azabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Ghazal khushboo

Sep 15 2006, 03:01 AM

walaikumsalam Aatif bhai

buhut buhutttttttttttttt khoobsorat nazm meray pas alfaz hi nahi hain ......

khush rahain

kamrannoor

Sep 15 2006, 04:09 PM

Assalam_0_alikum!! ATIF BHAI...
Well.......mere pass kehnay ko bohat sare wordz hain
kia baat hai.....wohat achi hai......
(khankhanaata) ye jo word use kia hai na kia baat hai

F-A-L-A-K

Sep 15 2006, 04:55 PM

Bohut Bohut aur Bohut KhooooooooooooB

Shokh

Sep 15 2006, 06:00 PM

Tumhari nigahooN main likhi udaasi kee tehreer daikhi
Dhanak muskurahat main lipti huee ghamm kee tasweer daikhi
Judaee k kitnay azabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Is maktay par daad ka ye phool kabool kijie

*Kainaat*

Sep 15 2006, 08:35 PM

Wa Leikum salam Bhai,

Its beautiful poem... From start to End

Veryyy Nice.. Bohat acha Geet

soz

Sep 16 2006, 03:02 PM

Tumhari nigahooN main likhi udaasi kee tehreer daikhi
Dhanak muskurahat main lipti huee ghamm kee tasweer daikhi
Judaee k kitnay azabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

BOHAT HI BEHTREEN APKI HAR TEHREER KI TARHAN
SHUKRIYA ATIF BHAI
FIAMANILLAH
DUA

insharah

Sep 16 2006, 05:34 PM

Zabardast
hamesha kii tarha bohat hi khoooooooooooooooooooob

tanha_musafir

Sep 17 2006, 04:36 AM

Bohat shukriya dostoo iss muhabbat aur pazeraee kaa

DuaooN main yaad rakhna

seemaf

Sep 18 2006, 05:16 PM

Assalam-o-Alaikum

Buhat zabardast .... Buhat achha geet likha hai ap ne Hamesha ki tarah wonderfull

Silent_Ocean

Sep 18 2006, 07:55 PM

Walekum Salam Atif bhai

Bohat acha geet likha hai iss ke liye meri taraf se dherun mubarak baad

kingofisialkot

Sep 18 2006, 09:38 PM

Bohat Khoob !

khud_aashna

Sep 18 2006, 11:15 PM

Wa alaikum assalalm mohtermi
Janab hamesha ki taraH hi behtareen cheez lae haiN aap............ab k sinf change ker di magar miyaar wohi hai...........yaar kabhi track se hatt bhi jaya kero..........HAR WAQT KA LIKHNA TUJHE BADNAAM NA KER DE

any way kaise ho or sab log kaise hiaN ghar main?
khush raho

Mudassir

tenha_saima

Sep 18 2006, 11:17 PM

QUOTE(tanha_musafir @ Sep 14 2006, 09:14 PM)

Assalam o alikum Ehliyaan e Zoq
Kal pehli daffa aik geet c nazm likhnay ke jussarat kee hia, Dertay Dertay Aap kee mehfil main laaya hooN, apni aara se mustafeed fermaiya ga.

Reply ka muntazir RahooN ga

Aatif

وہی ایک چہرہ

Tumhaari Hansi k GulabooN main daikha Wohi aik Chehra
SawalooN main daikha JawabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Wohi aarzoo thee k paani pe rakh k qadam main chalooN gee
Wohi justajoo thee k main urr sakki tu gagan choo sakooN gee
KahooN kia k kitnay hijabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Wohi shokhiyaan jinn se lipti huee zindagi muskuraee
Wohi khankhanaata sa lehjja k dil main muhabbat jagaee
Mujhay yun lagga jaisay khawabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Wohi Khawaab-zarooN ke baatain Wohi ChaanD TarooN k qissay
Wohi TitliyuN, Jugnao'On ke Katha, AbsharooN k qissaay
Inhi barishooN main, SahabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Tumhari nigahooN main likhi udaasi kee tehreer daikhi
Dhanak muskurahat main lipti huee ghamm kee tasweer daikhi
Judaee k kitnay azabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Bohut khoob.. aur lo kar lo gal... ap bhi tanha ho??

kaheen tanha festival to shuru nahien ho gaya

NaJ

Sep 19 2006, 09:33 AM

Tumhari nigahooN main likhi udaasi kee tehreer daikhi
Dhanak muskurahat main lipti huee ghamm kee tasweer daikhi
Judaee k kitnay azabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

bhut khoub....

*hayaa*

Sep 19 2006, 04:27 PM

its fantastic.......

thanks alot for sharing

umairhuda

Sep 22 2006, 01:56 AM

Simply Beautiful Aatif Bhai

Always be happy

Umair

tanha_musafir

Sep 23 2006, 12:47 AM

QUOTE(Ghazal khushboo @ Sep 15 2006, 03:00 AM)

walaikumsalam Aatif bhai

buhut buhutttttttttttttt khoobsorat nazm meray pas alfaz hi nahi hain ......

khush rahain

bht shukriya bhena G

Jeeti raho

QUOTE(kamrannoor @ Sep 15 2006, 04:09 PM)

Assalam_0_alikum!! ATIF BHAI...
Well.......mere pass kehnay ko bohat sare wordz hain
kia baat hai.....wohat achi hai......
(khankhanaata) ye jo word use kia hai na kia baat hai

Bohat shukiya Kamran aap ka

Aap ke muhabbat k liya bht mashkoor hooN aap ka

Khush rehiya

QUOTE(F-A-L-A-K @ Sep 15 2006, 04:55 PM)

Bohut Bohut aur Bohut KhooooooooooooB

Falak Bhaee

Khush rahain

tanha_musafir

Sep 23 2006, 01:07 AM

QUOTE(Shokh @ Sep 15 2006, 06:00 PM)

Tumhari nigahooN main likhi udaasi kee tehreer daikhi
Dhanak muskurahat main lipti huee ghamm kee tasweer daikhi
Judaee k kitnay azabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Is maktay par daad ka ye phool kabool kijie

Bohat shukriya janab

QUOTE(*Kainaat* @ Sep 15 2006, 08:34 PM)

Wa Leikum salam Bhai,

Its beautiful poem... From start to End

Veryyy Nice.. Bohat acha Geet

Thanx a million sis

Jeeti raho

tanha_musafir

Sep 23 2006, 01:27 AM

QUOTE(soz @ Sep 16 2006, 03:02 PM)

Tumhari nigahooN main likhi udaasi kee tehreer daikhi
Dhanak muskurahat main lipti huee ghamm kee tasweer daikhi
Judaee k kitnay azabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra
BOHAT HI BEHTREEN APKI HAR TEHREER KI TARHAN
SHUKRIYA ATIF BHAI
FIAMANILLAH
DUA

Bohat bohat shukriya behna G

Khush raho

QUOTE(insharah @ Sep 16 2006, 05:33 PM)

Zabardast
hamesha kii tarha bohat hi khoooooooooooooooooooob

Thaxn a million janab

tanha_musafir

Sep 23 2006, 02:02 AM

QUOTE(seemaf @ Sep 18 2006, 05:16 PM)

Assalam-o-Alaikum

Buhat zabardast .... Buhat achha geet likha hai ap ne Hamesha ki tarah wonderfull

Bht bht shukriya aapi

Khush raho

QUOTE(smartleo @ Sep 18 2006, 07:55 PM)

Walekum Salam Atif bhai

Bohat acha geet likha hai iss ke liye meri taraf se dherun mubarak baad

Bht bht shukriya janaab

tanha_musafir

Sep 23 2006, 02:15 AM

QUOTE(kingofisialkot @ Sep 18 2006, 09:37 PM)

Bohat Khoob !

tanha_musafir

Sep 23 2006, 02:42 AM

QUOTE(khud_aashna @ Sep 18 2006, 11:15 PM)

Wa alaikum assalalm mohtermi
Janab hamesha ki taraH hi behtareen cheez lae haiN aap............ab k sinf change ker di magar miyaar wohi hai...........yaar kabhi track se hatt bhi jaya kero..........HAR WAQT KA LIKHNA TUJHE BADNAAM NA KER DE

any way kaise ho or sab log kaise hiaN ghar main?
khush raho

Mudassir

Assalam o alikum Mudassir!

Kaisay ho yaar? Main theik aur family bhee theik Alhamdolillah. Bht shukriya iss muhabbat ka yaata. I m honored.

DuaooN main yaad rakhna

tanha_musafir

Sep 24 2006, 01:38 AM

QUOTE(tenha_saima @ Sep 18 2006, 11:17 PM)

Bohut khoob.. aur lo kar lo gal... ap bhi tanha ho??

kaheen tanha festival to shuru nahien ho gaya

Thanx a lot janab

Main tu bht poorana tanha hooN aap aaj kal main nazer aai ho

Waisay

Tanha tanha yahan pe rehna yeh koee baat hai

Sunna tu ho ga

tanha_musafir

Oct 9 2006, 11:03 PM

Haq

Oct 13 2006, 03:33 PM

wohi aik chehra wohi aik chappal wohi aik thappar
main ab sochta hoon k kiya main nay dekha wohi aik chehra?

wohi aik burqa tha aankhain wohi theen
k shamat thee aayee jo gar main yeh samjha wohi aik chehra

ayaan dhoondta hoon nihaan dhoodta hoon, nishaan dhoondta hoon
nishaanon kee teeson say phir kis nay jhaanka, wohi aik chehra?

saaahil

Oct 14 2006, 02:03 PM

Very Nice

tanha_musafir

Nov 3 2006, 03:31 PM

QUOTE(Haq @ Oct 13 2006, 03:33 PM)

wohi aik chehra wohi aik chappal wohi aik thappar
main ab sochta hoon k kiya main nay dekha wohi aik chehra?

wohi aik burqa tha aankhain wohi theen
k shamat thee aayee jo gar main yeh samjha wohi aik chehra

ayaan dhoondta hoon nihaan dhoodta hoon, nishaan dhoondta hoon
nishaanon kee teeson say phir kis nay jhaanka, wohi aik chehra?

Hosh aa gaya aap ko ???

Tajrubba apna apna lala jee

Waisay iss baat ka tu tum ne mujhay bataiya hee nahin

wafaaa

Nov 3 2006, 03:50 PM

Wohi shokhiyaan jinn se lipti huee zindagi muskuraee
Wohi khankhanaata sa lehjja k dil main muhabbat jagaee
Mujhay yun lagga jaisay khawabooN main daikha wohi aik Chehra

Mashalllh wonderful lines infact the whole poetry!

Pr!nCesS-0f-S3lf

Nov 3 2006, 05:01 PM

Simply Beautifullllllllll

Sham_99

Nov 4 2006, 03:15 PM

Assalam o Alaikum

Aatif Bhai hamesha ki tarhan zabar10

sham

tanha_musafir

Nov 10 2006, 02:58 AM

Bohat Shukiya

Sahil
Princess
Wafaa
aur
Shaam

Khush rehiya

aainda bhee aap ke tabsirray ka muntazir rahooN ga.

Zindagi

Jan 14 2007, 02:29 PM

Refreshed